Taarey -- pyaaar ke pal..OS --pg 5 NOTE--

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Nitz

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Posted: 12 years ago

Well, I was writing an OS..no infact wrote the complete OS..and closed the window..without clicking POST NEW TOPIC.. 😡 😡

and all vanished away.. 😭 😭

so here is the smaller version...

Kya sahi hai aur kya galat sab tum decide nahi karogi Taani..came Rey's voice as he entered Taani's farewell party..

T -- achha laga aap aaye..
R -- aata kese nai..tum jo chaahogi wwahi hoga..
S -- okk guyz..now no more tears and crying..I want Taani to be happy when she goes from here..so let's enjoy..mussiiccc..

soft music started and swayam asked to Taani for dance...all other started dancing..rey was just standing..

Hum rahen ya na rahen kal
Kal, yaad aayenge ye pal
Pal, ye hain pyar ke pal
Chal, aa mere sang chal
Chal, soche kya
Chhoti si, hai zindagi
Kal, mil jaaye to hogi khush-naseebi

he swayed her in circular moments and passed on to rey.. Rey held her from waist and started moving slowly to the rhythm..

Shaam ka aanchal, odh ke aayee dekho woh raat suhani
Aa likh dein hum dono milke apni ye prem kahani
Hum rahen ya na rahen yaad aayenge ye pal
Aane waali subah jaane rang kya laaye deewanee,
Meri chaahat ko rakh lena jaise koi nishani
Hum rahen ya na rahen yaad aayenge ye pal

TaaRey had tears in their eyes..remembering each and every moment spent from day 1..taani's entry..her cute antiques..the fight..shivam's drama..their dance practices..taani's first dance..their first date..bike ride..valentine's day..every moment was so special and unforgettable..and the lyrics of song was adding fuel to the fire..

T -- Rey promise me ke mere jaane ke baad aap aise nahi rahenge..aap khush rahenge..main aapko aise nai dekh sakti ..

R -- Taani ye impossible hai..main tumhaare bina kuch nahi hun..Taani ke bina Rey kuch nahi hai..Taani hai toh Rey hai..Taani nahi toh Rey ka koi wajood nahi..

T -- wajood hai Rey..rey main chaahti hun aap world ke best dancer bano..aur aap mere liye itna nai kar sakte..please rey..pyaar ko paana hi pyaar nahi hota..

R -- koshish karunga taani..tumhare liye kuch bhi kar sakta hun..

Hum rahen ya na rahen kal
Kal, yaad aayenge ye pal
Pal, ye hain pyar ke pal
Chal, aa mere sang chal
Chal, soche kya chhoti si hai zindagi
Kal mil jaaye to hogi khush-naseebi

Taani hugged him and Rey hugged her back tightly... wanting to never let go

soon all the gang joined them..

Hum rahen ya na rahen yaad aayenge ye pal
Hum rahen ya na rahen yaad aayenge ye pal

T -- I love you guyzz..
All -- we too love you taani

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Note :: if you guys want and I get a good response..I think I can continue..and it's my first Taarey OS so please be kind..cuz i know writers here are awesome 😳

Edited by nits_viratholic - 12 years ago

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Viji.Chandran

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Posted: 12 years ago

aise hi end kar diya...😭
perfect song selectn...

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Nitz

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Viji.Chandran
aise hi end kar diya...😭
perfect song selectn...

😆 m soo srry..I wrote it for second time..so had to end here..
thnkxx 😳

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Shivangi

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nits.. Kya baat kya baat kya baat.. U just have to continue this.. Coz u can't leave it like this.. Its my request.. please continue.. aakhir ek virat fan hi doosre Virat fan ke emotions ko samajh sakta hai 😆

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Neha

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Posted: 12 years ago

That was sooo sad, it just reminds me I'm gunna cry out my eyes in tonight's episode

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Nitz

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shivangi_Taarey
Nits.. Kya baat kya baat kya baat.. U just have to continue this.. Coz u can't leave it like this.. Its my request.. please continue.. aakhir ek virat fan hi doosre Virat fan ke emotions ko samajh sakta hai😆

lol...Virat ka naam leke blackmailing haaah...hehhe..let's see ya...if I get good response..at least 50+ likes