Be-intehaan virman ff #1 - Page 80

Originally posted by: Syed695

nAwesome Update Lara..!!! Virat has to face the disaster this time not Manvi...Loved Maanvi's answer to Virat...but he hit the compleltly wrong chord...he shouldn't have mentioned abt the child...wonder what will he do if he finds that it was his own...!

Maanvi is complete numb now...beyond repair...Viren is the 1 who she looks up to..but how far can he understnd...N Virat needs serious repair in his head...n Maya will put the chain back..i guess Virat would strangle her if she tries he is a monster now...Waiting fir next Lara..!!!!

Congrats Lara on completing 100 pages...!!!!

Originally posted by: Vaarya53

omg!!! such an emotional update..!! I'm speechless ..the song added fuel to the fire! it was completely astounding! ur an amazing writer!! superb *claps *

Originally posted by: Rachel19

Hey very nice and emotional update loved it
My god virat is so rude really love to see manvi in a strong avatar
Virat opened all old wounds again by asking manvi about her baby but he is still thinking about her
Viren is such a good friend he really cares about manvi
What happend to manvi I hope she's fine
And where is Karan why hasn't he come yet to prove himself innocent
Would like to see what virat will do after he will find out the truth
And love manvi in a strong avatar
Thank you so much for the pm
Please continue soon
Will be waiting for your next update

Originally posted by: hangok

at first congrats for 100..

and now the part, it was fabulous...

i have a soft corner for viren and manvi and your ss make it more😊
i really hate this virat,i mean maybe he is not wrong because he thinks that she has done something wrong, they have hurt each other or better virat has hurt manvi too much so im not sure if i want to see them together in this ss...

would be great to see viren and manvi (just my opinion)

thanks for pm

Originally posted by: niki795

hey congratulations for 100page
awesome update
loved it
poor manvi
I'm hating this virat more and more
Maya thinks virat as a puppy
continue soon
thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: shaimah

Congratulations on completing 100 pages
The update was outstanding
Loved it
Cant wait for the next part
Continue soon and thanks for the pm!!

Originally posted by: madhuharini

awesome update dear...
loved it when Manvi slapped Virat...
Want Virat to know the entire truth soon...
I think Viren got to know about Virat and he'll make him realize the truth...
Anyways, update soon and thanks for the pm...
Congratz for crossing 100 pages...

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

congratx on 100 pages this is an achievement still long way to goo haan 😃
the update haan it was longer but still yu know na cant get enuf of it ...amazingly written the song well conveyed all 3 of thems pain and feeling their feeling be it anger pain hurt r frustration all soo well written just loved the update all together 👏👏
the way manvi spoke to him the fight back was just fab but again when he called her child that she fell weak and that guy didnt even realise what was he speaking about his own kid whum he actually murdered virat is gonna burn in guilt when he realises how far he has gone on his ego and jealousy trip ...i want him to suffer real bad for bringing manvi in this condition gosh she is dying coz of all the pain he is giving her again i hate yu virat i mean the word hate is less to describe this feeling ...😡😡
and maya barbie doll (bhootni kahinki ) just stay away from this monster virat nai toh aap toot jayengi 😡😡
viren alwayz besides manvi justlike a shadow wer actually virat should be ...this helpless viren feeling bad for him ...
update next part soon and thanx alott for the pm 😃

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon

Kaise naa karti...Itna jalaya tune mujhe ke updt hi kardi...😆 😆...

Udte udte jyada dur mat jana...

By the way I love this song and have seen Chennai Express 7 times till now.. hope to see a lot more times.. I love SRK's craziness in this movie...👏