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pink1

@pink1

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#771

nice update she sap him but he again
hurt her she have some disease because
of miscarriage and when he will get all truth
update soon

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#772

Woppiii fr the 1st time ur opend on my mob...lolzzz

fantabulous updt...urghhh how much virat will hurt her...the dailogues were so affective...kudos...c that witchy witch treating him like dog...awww manvi again in misrable condition...loved that at least viren is there to support her n to care her...waiting fr virats reaction on mavis present state...n mayas come back...cont soon

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prathe

@prathe

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#773

oh god what an emotional update...virat is surely going to repent for his deeds very soon i guess and am waiting for that eagerly...hopefully soon ...
coming to the dialogues wow lara so well written the way u have written virats dialogue is such powefult that anyone one can hate him...
hopefullly virat ki band jaldi bajaogi tum yaar😆...lara...do continue soon lara will wait for your updates...😊thanks for the pm too😊

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virumanu

@virumanu

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#774

awsmeee ...oved the update..

contine sooonn

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anvyagnihotri

@anvyagnihotri

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#775

🥳firstly congrates for comleting 100 pages...awsm ss😊 ... such emotinal update...nd feel bad fr maanvi😔... bt update is too gud... hates maya😡...maya ran away frm viraat's life...go to hell😡... thnks for d pm...😊

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luv nishal

@luv_nishal

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#776

first of all...

contests for 100 pages

second awesum update...

frm the start till d end...I luvd it...very emotion Vry pain was written so beautifully...n the ya rabba song enhanced the update...it was.a brilliant update

update soon

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Jannat

@Jannat94

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#777

Wow amazing update lara
loved it...waiting for next part
Plz Lara manvi don't deserve that Rascal I thought...
alteast girl like manvi doesn't deserve pain...
i really don't want virat ever forgiven In this story
where is karan and Viren...Manvi needs them
awww Emotional update Lara👏
update soon
thanx 4the pm

And Yes congrates for crossing 100 pages👏👏👏👏👏

Edited by Jannat94 - 12 years ago

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luvmanat

@luvmanat

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#778

hey i wanna come in ur ff and slap that maya

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lujeyn9

@lujeyn9

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#779

Fantastic update!!!!!!!!!!!
continue sooon
thanx 4 pm😊

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SS4MaNan

@SS4MaNan

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#780

I hate him! like really hate him. how could he. he has crossed all his limits. da part where is hits her abt her child was beyond evilness. I know he is immensely in or(was) in love with her but now da destructions he is doing to her is beyond repair! he can never get her back. he doesn't deserve a 2nd chance. I really am very worried for him now. wat will happen to him once he comes to know da truth!

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