Be-intehaan virman ff #1 - Page 82

Originally posted by: prathe

oh god what an emotional update...virat is surely going to repent for his deeds very soon i guess and am waiting for that eagerly...hopefully soon ...
coming to the dialogues wow lara so well written the way u have written virats dialogue is such powefult that anyone one can hate him...
hopefullly virat ki band jaldi bajaogi tum yaar😆...lara...do continue soon lara will wait for your updates...😊thanks for the pm too😊

Originally posted by: virumanu

awsmeee ...oved the update..

contine sooonn

Originally posted by: anvyagnihotri

🥳firstly congrates for comleting 100 pages...awsm ss😊 ... such emotinal update...nd feel bad fr maanvi😔... bt update is too gud... hates maya😡...maya ran away frm viraat's life...go to hell😡... thnks for d pm...😊

Originally posted by: luv_nishal

first of all...

contests for 100 pages

second awesum update...

frm the start till d end...I luvd it...very emotion Vry pain was written so beautifully...n the ya rabba song enhanced the update...it was.a brilliant update


update soon

Originally posted by: Jannat94

Wow amazing update lara
loved it...waiting for next part
Plz Lara manvi don't deserve that Rascal I thought...
alteast girl like manvi doesn't deserve pain...
i really don't want virat ever forgiven In this story
where is karan and Viren...Manvi needs them
awww Emotional update Lara👏
update soon
thanx 4the pm



And Yes congrates for crossing 100 pages👏👏👏👏👏

Originally posted by: luvmanat

hey i wanna come in ur ff and slap that maya

Originally posted by: lujeyn9

Fantastic update!!!!!!!!!!!
continue sooon
thanx 4 pm😊

Originally posted by: sindhu4karanika

I hate him! like really hate him. how could he. he has crossed all his limits. da part where is hits her abt her child was beyond evilness. I know he is immensely in or(was) in love with her but now da destructions he is doing to her is beyond repair! he can never get her back. he doesn't deserve a 2nd chance. I really am very worried for him now. wat will happen to him once he comes to know da truth!

Originally posted by: nixdix

awesome😊

awesome😃

awesome😊

You've crossed 100, nw new thread is not so far...🥳

I hated Virat for calling his own baby...😡😡😡

ILLEGITIMATE...😡

very painful for Manvi...

I eagerly wait 4 this one...

Update very soon.😊😭..otherwise i'll nt spare u..😡😡.

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

Congratulations Lara for completing 100 pages!!!! 😃🥳
Fab update..!!! 👍🏼 Felt so bad for Manvi 😭😭.. Though she fought back this time but once again Virat called their baby illegitimate and again she was shattered.. Virat ke thappor mere laav nei infact I wanna punch him in the face 😡😡.. He is so blinded by his anger, hatred and ego.. How could he stoop so low.. He felt satisfied after watching her breakdown.. So mean.. I wonder how he will react once he finds out the truth.. I want to see him suffer so badly.. You made me hate him so so much .. Maya kamini 😡.. Viren is a sweetheart ❤️.. He is always there to support Manvi and to take care of her.. Such a caring and protective friend.. Love him.. Update is beautifully written 👏👏.. Superb work!! ⭐️ Thank you for the pm.. Will be waiting for the next.. Take care 😊