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Nikhita Dixit

@ambarsariya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#781

awesome😊

awesome😃

awesome😊

You've crossed 100, nw new thread is not so far...🥳

I hated Virat for calling his own baby...😡😡😡

ILLEGITIMATE...😡

very painful for Manvi...

I eagerly wait 4 this one...

Update very soon.😊😭..otherwise i'll nt spare u..😡😡.

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#782

Congratulations Lara for completing 100 pages!!!! 😃🥳
Fab update..!!! 👍🏼 Felt so bad for Manvi 😭😭.. Though she fought back this time but once again Virat called their baby illegitimate and again she was shattered.. Virat ke thappor mere laav nei infact I wanna punch him in the face 😡😡.. He is so blinded by his anger, hatred and ego.. How could he stoop so low.. He felt satisfied after watching her breakdown.. So mean.. I wonder how he will react once he finds out the truth.. I want to see him suffer so badly.. You made me hate him so so much .. Maya kamini 😡.. Viren is a sweetheart ❤️.. He is always there to support Manvi and to take care of her.. Such a caring and protective friend.. Love him.. Update is beautifully written 👏👏.. Superb work!! ⭐️ Thank you for the pm.. Will be waiting for the next.. Take care 😊

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#783

First of all congratulations lara for hitting century !! 🤗
U noe wat i was eagerly waiting for this update n finally it comes superbly !! The way u hae written it my god really really awesomeee !! 👍🏼 the atmosphere u created the emotions u portrayed all were juz amazing !!❤️
Huh !! U hate virat !! I juz hate him !! 😡 how can he say those words to mangi !! Aargh !! 😡 N miss mayaa !! She is getting on my nerves 😡 !!
I can feel manvi pain !! It was written so well lara !! Everything was perfect !! Song choice is wow !! Loved it !!!
It was emotional , heart touching update !! Getting more n more interesting !! Loved the way u r taking the story !! Fabulous !!❤️
Looking forward for next update !! Will be waiting !! Thanks for the pm :D

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@neetnia

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#784

omg omg omggg i luved ittt 👍🏼especially the last word 👏🤣 plzz pm me if u can..

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@anu0555

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#785

congrtzzxx lara...u cmplted more than 100 pgs..love u yaar..

im damn happy for u ..muahhss

n it was awsome foursome update..mindblowing..

amazing...

n emotional too..feeling really bad for manvi..

plzz do clear all misunderstandings between virman..i love them.. <3

n viren is sweet..

fab part...good job

update soon..waiting...

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virmanfan013

@virmanfan013

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#786

lara tune mujhe rulaya ab main tujhe rulaungi 🤣 uff wt an update lara ji i toh just loved it. Haww virat is a big cheapo he again hurt manvi with his heart piercing words argh hate him. I felt pity on him he was calling his own child illegetimate hw dare he. He should have trusted on his love instead of those photographs. Nw that maya bitch what is she upto. Nd wt abt manvi i hope nothing bad will happen with her. Eagerly waiting for the next part. Plz lara jaldi update karo warna main spamming shuru kar dungi 🤣 thanx for the pm tc regards shivali 😳

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virmanfan013

@virmanfan013

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#787

oho main yeh bolna to bhul hi gyi that again u added my fav song 😳

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nrithyao

@nrithyao

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#788

amazing update
loved the song selection
apt for the situation
virat is being so cruel to her
wonder what happened to maanvi
hope she is fine
thanks a lot for the pm
please continue soon

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#789

Originally posted by: roshreb
after the slap was eagerly waiting for the update :D
congrats on completing 100pg..fabulous update...but i can't see manvi in soo much pain.what's wrong with this virat..his words are so heart stabbing...he is not making things worst for manvi only but for himself too...when the truth will be out he won't be able to forgive himself ...he has crossed all limits...leaving no stone unturned to insult her ...and that maya..it's really difficult to tolerate her throughout... can't imagine what will virat do to her once karan bring out the proof...waiting for next part

Thanks thaks .. thanks my rose...😃...

First one to comment ⭐️...👏 👏 👏 ... Claps ... mintos smile 😃 😃...

What will happen to maya ?? 😕... Well, you have to see it yourself...😉...

Take care... 😊

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Lara / Clara

@devilaonmoon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#790

Originally posted by: JESMY143VIRMAN
CONGRATES FOR 100 PAGES.

AWESOME UPDATE.
EMOTIONAL ONE.
PLZ GET THAT BITCH MAYA OUT FROM STORY SOON.PLZ...
WHERE IS KARAN?
I THINK AFTER THIS MUCH INSULTS VIRAT DOESN'T DESERVE MANVI.
LOVED VIREN CARE FOR MANVI VERY MUCH.

Thank you so much JES...😊 😊...

I am afraid to say but I have to.. maya is not leaving any sooner, she meeds to create a lot more ruckus... enjoy...😉 😉