Be-intehaan virman ff #1 - Page 17

Originally posted by: nimi00

That was it, mujhe aur bhi padna tha . I really loved the update, you had me in tears at the end. It was really well written. So Karan didn't plan it, it was someone else. Us ladki ko toh mein . How dare she frame Manvi, I want Manvi to punish her severely for making her loose Virat's trust .Haww, baby ko mar dala , I feel so bad for Manvi right now, she lost her hubby and on top of that her baby too. The drunk man is responsible for a death of a baby and making me cry too . Update again soon, and thanks for the PM.

Tanks a lot dear... 😃...Be ready to cry more or this time it will be anger... !!!...

Originally posted by: nrithyao

awesome update
poor maanvi
hope nothing happens to her kid
cant wait for the next part
please continue soon

Thanks buddy... 😃...Will try to post the next one soon... a little bit wait...

Originally posted by: vamps1996

i cant believe that u can write such stuff lara today im not gona call u devil but i will just say i love u so much for writing this and u are great at writing tragic stuff too as the way u write the crazy ones...i loved ur writing here true that her trust is broken and maybe can never be repented karan wanst at a fault its all that girl's game or better to say the cruel game her fate is playing...i got goose bumps reading the last part...i really dont have enough words yar aj vampire is speechless

lots of love

Sorry to shock you vampuuu but I am shocked myself... 😕...And cherry to the top is it is feeling great torturing manvi... I am such a devil naaa... 😆...Your comment really made me emotional dear... 😊...You are speechless... awww... I am touched yaar... thanks thanks dear but its only all of you readers inspirations that is making me go forward and write something knowing that you guys will be with me.. 😊 😊...

Originally posted by: richa002

It was emotional...
Very heart wrenching update...
Manvi lost her baby...
She wont forgive virat for this... She was so shattered...
UpdTe soon

Thanks ... will updt soon... 😊...

Originally posted by: Tuba_KSG

🤢 🤢 😉

Originally posted by: Niaksharma

Awesome...
Too ggood...
Liked it...

Thanks khushi... 😊...

Originally posted by: alicemath

Oh my...dis wz an emotional update...

Manvi misunderstood Karan's words...first mistrusted by the luv of her life n nw the feeling dat her best friend betrayed her...poor soul must hav been broken to bits...n in midst of all this commotion she lost her only last bit of happiness she had, her child...really feel bad for Manvi...it was heart-touching to c her plight n calling her saviour for help wen he was no where around ...n nw i dont think she wil forgive Virat easily...coz he shud hav trusted her at first place...

N whomsoevr dat chudail was who ruined Virman's life...ughh...hate her

Plzz cont asap n plz dont forgt to pm me the nxt time u update!!!

Thanks a lot dear... 😃...And I will obviously the people who are liking my posts and commenting regularly... 😊...So i wont forget to send you one for sure... tada...

Originally posted by: Mannia

Awesome update

karan is nice guy but that girl...

poor manvi,wat will happpen to her child...

thanks for pm

Thanks a lot my dear dost... 😃...Her child... 😕...

Originally posted by: .Yamin.

This was so emotional !!! ;'( poor mannu !!! i can't see her like this !!!! Laura this is awesomely written !!!! manvi pain her emotions was portrayed superbly !!! omg who is tat she ??? tat jerk !!! n wat abt karan?? :( Awesome update !!!! really excited for next part !!! will be waiting !!i really loved the update i m juz speechless !!! continue soon if possible !! thanks for the pm :D

Will le t you know soon about the she devil... 😉...Thanks and you are speechless... awww... 😊...

I am going to murder this girl, first she frames Manvi and now she is trying to sleep with Virat 😡. She needs to listen once and for all, Virat is Manvi's and only Manvi's. Beechara mera Viru, he was saying Manvi's name the entire time. Not that I am too happy with him, he said Manvi betrayed him, what is he doing with another girl 😳. Haww, Viren ne Manvi ko apni patni bola. 🥳. Don't judge me from my happiness, I love Manvir, I know I won't get it for long in your story but yay for Viren and Manvi. And Viren is so loving in the story, he even saved her, yay for Manvir, sach mein dil kush kardiya tumne 🤣. Thank you for the update, update again soon. 😊