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@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#371

awesome update
now arnav other things too and most importantly that it's khushi's birthday.. omg he wished her.. really!!! wow
continue soon

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#372

my thoughts exactly man

wish she could fry him and make him vanish too

but her luck aint so good

wonder if they will behave like this if they know of the truth

will any of them i doubt it

they will be disappointed in him

but then will they ever know

i have my doubts about the same

though he has very few days to woo her

and he lost half a day too

so she was making sure she stays as much away from him and his di as possible

dude you are in lot of trouble for sure

and you didnt even know it was her birthday sad that

but his luck is good right with his in laws

ahhh yes diwali night he knows more about that more than any one else

hmm this gets more and more interesting how many things have gone wrong between them

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#373

That was awesome... the way they discussed about shyam and what he did.. must have happened in the show as well
Superb part :D
looking forward to the next part

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#374

Awesome update as always Smita! :)

I'm very glad for the fact that the Guptas know of Arnav's kidnapping. Thank you :)
We didn't get to see that in the show. It was ignored as if unimportant.

Loved the way you brought in the Diwali night and Khushi confronting Shyam on the terrace in full light in front of Arnav. Thank you again :) These were important scenes in the show which would have helped Arnav join the dots together, which we didn't get to see..sigh...
I can rant on..

And Yay! Arnav wished Khushi happy birthday! Phew!

Looking forward to the next update, for the tel maalish scene ;)

Loving this story loads. We're getting to read and imagine what we wanted to see in the show :)

Thanks for the PM Rashmi! :)

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#375

hahah i really loved that update!!!
fantastic

Khushi's behaviour is totally understandable and how Khushi is acting, i love her, she has great will power and courage

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Sayali_23

@Sayali_23

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#376

Aww once again wonderful update Smitaji...

I really liked the way snake and his snakeness is out in open in front of Arnav babuaa...

Arnav bitwaa kaa karegaa aab Birthday kelie????????

He can gift her a Tip Tip...😉 (This is ur hint that i read and voted 😎)

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Uthra

@Viji79

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#377

I am happy you took this up. I was really pissed with arnav during the show when he said all those words after going through everything.

Throughout a. Idnight encounter, the hopeless arshi an in me read arnav Singh Raizada in the place of gautam and Khushi in the place of sunaina. Gauri was anjali and the wretched fianc was Shyam to me.

It was a feel good story.