ArHI OS: Surrender *Complete*

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shruti

@shruti46

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

exactly SHIPRAJ wrote correct,y did u keep ur work unpublished...

first full moon now this..

when i first read your note i thought story will be set up before marriage tym.

but i was wrong,

loved arnav,s frustration and as always khushi's reason for leaving him was hillarious ha ha desert exhibition...

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Tina

@TinaEskay

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: shruti46
exactly SHIPRAJ wrote correct,y did u keep ur work unpublished...
first full moon now this..

when i first read your note i thought story will be set up before marriage tym.
but i was wrong,
loved arnav,s frustration and as always khushi's reason for leaving him was hillarious ha ha desert exhibition...

i replied to her hun, see pg 2😊

Edited by TINA! - 12 years ago

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shruti

@shruti46

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: TINA!

i replied to her hun, see pg 2😊

yeah i read that ..

that meANS WE HAVE TO write different things and super long comments so that you will get hint from that and post other stories too which u have kept hidden till now..

dont worry ..will do it..😆😆

Edited by shruti46 - 12 years ago

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Tina

@TinaEskay

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: shruti46

yeah i read that ..
that meANS WE HAVE TO write different things and super long comments so that you will get hint from that and post other stories too which u have kept hidden till now..

dont worry ..will do it..😆😆

no u don't have to though it helps😆 i post stuff when i think its good enough and up to my standards now. much more relaxed about it now😉

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Summer99

@Summer99

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

wow a lovely , cute os

enjoyed reading it

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robinhood008

@robinhood008

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Awww that was an amazinggg update!!!

Lol arnav was the kidnapper,should've known!!
All this jus to not let khushi go fr few days,how sweet

Amazinggg update!!!

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ayushi

@flutterlashes

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

dat ws such a beautiful surprise!!!
awesm os:)
loved d arnav as a kidnapper...
amazing!!!

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tamanna

@Tamaru

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

that was beautiful di really

and i'll back in two weeks so im again gonna enjoy your updates wwoooww im so haapppyyy

plzzz update SP soon too

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ara_000

@ara_000

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

oh god i was stalking ur accnt nd i get to knw abt this OS 😳 😳 😳 😳

stalking actually helped 😆 😆 😆 😆

nywaz now cuming to d shot...!

didu,do i really have to tell u again dat u d master of creating suspense...!

oh god i was reading the shot nd was like who d hell is the man to kidnap khuhsi nd trust me my mind firstly registered it to b shyam 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

nd u fooled me at the very nxt instant wen dat husband wod came up nd i knw it very well dat my didu will nvr let khushi marry anyone else other than my arnie boy nd a grin escaped from me nd den while i was reading i was blushing like an idiot once again ☺️ ☺️

i love it how arnav's sweet torture was creating havoc to her senses nd she was reminding herslf of not surrendering to him ❤️

but finally arnav's promise to her abt taking her to d place himslf nxt year made her anger rush her from her nd she happily surrendered herslf to d man of her life whom she loves...! ❤️

their convo was beautiful...!

loved the shot didu ❤️

u r truly one hell amazing writer i have cum across nd i love u ❤️

hugging u tight 🤗

muaaahhh