ArHI OS: Surrender *Complete*

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Breath-Mark

@Breath-Mark

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Great OS! It's both HOT and Cute.

So Sanka Devi can't wait to be with her variety of Jalebis in her museum.

And Pati Dev was too greedy to let her go.

I love how the word "kidnapper" was mentioned throughout the OS.

Edited by SilentShadow - 12 years ago

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MidnightReader

@MidnightReader

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Hi! 😊

Lol...It was all fine until I read that Khushi wanted to leave Arnav for jalebis. 😆 Great job! This is an OS which included all your writing talent... suspense and love etc. 👏⭐️

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Satina

@Satina

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Loved it can't wait for DH

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

They are equally crazy and truly deserve each other, newly weds and she was off to a jalebi convention that too with NK and the rest of the family !! Arnav was so right in kidnapping her, loved his reasoinng behind it... Tina please share more of your wonderful work.. this was excellent, light hearted and so Arshi ...

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koisk

@koisk

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

That was a real surprise😃, loved it.

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shipraj

@shipraj

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: TINA!

well there's something very personal about writing and I'm a very private person in real life so it took me forever to post. glad u liked the OS!

i respect your privacy but i just love your work thats why i said that... You always make us smile

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namita11

@namita11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

That was so rromantic
you knw you are spoiling me, expecting such an amazing husband and romantic life after marriage certainly going to get disappointed.
U r such a good writer