Liquorice Burning#2 [ArHi] Part 13-21

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saga_twilight

@saga_twilight

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#491

All the applause g0es t0 Akash here, f0r thr0wing the truth at his face. The eye 0pener was definately fantastic

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faree

@faree

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#492

amazing update like akash and love the way you pen down arnav guilt brilliant thanks for the pm

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#493

First of all I do not mind at all to the super long update and it was not at all boring, for me one of the best updates so far for this amazing story.

Absolutely loved the update, it was a wonderful read.

The update was brilliant and simply fantastic,

Wow, loved khushi's dream regarding the Teri meri dance, it was so amazing, sensual and written beautifully and perfectly.

Awww bless khushi's reaction when she woke up was superb, she was so confused and worried.

Love the way Arnav barged into the room and was left stumped by Khushi, loved khushi's reaction.

I just knew the conversation between Akash and Arnav would be outstanding, you did a brilliant job.

Love the way Akash explained everything for his point of view and his reasons for helping Khushi.

Akash even managed to silence Arnav, which was fantastic.

Hope Arnav does listen to Akash's advice about doing the right thing about Khushi.

Even though Akash has been so loyal towards Khushi, I honestly dread to think how Payal will react when she finds out that he knew all along where Khushi was.

The update was written amazingly well,

Eager to read the next part,

Continue soon please and Thanks for the PM,

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Anupama

@Anupama.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#494

While it was evident that Akash was having knowlegde of Khushi s' whereabouts, I could just feel Arnav s' helplessness and pain. Yet, yet, Akash isnt wrong. And after this chapter, while he spoke of not telling Khushi about his falling marriage, I want to hug him. In this heartache for ArHi, we never really thought how Akash too is suffering so much..
The chapter also cleared so many things. Loved it!

And oh! The morning scene.. Lol.. His home, his bed and his clothes. How do we expect her to react.
:D

oh! So how many more for LB s' last chapter? :(

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secretsmile

@secretsmile

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#495

Love the layering you are unveiling here. Akash, Arnav, Payal, Khushi caught up in a maelstorm of emotions, and all stuck waiting for the hammer to fall or the sun to burst out in the sky depending on the decisions made...

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sslmay11

@sslmay11

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#496

A this is a much needed lengthy update...actually loved the length. Aakash stood tall...no exaggeration ...just truth ...loved his convo with Arnav. The first part was light and the second one was heavy...of all the lines, i liked the end when Arnav realized that his helplessness of doing right things...it's disheartening...but better late than never.

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rati123

@rati123

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#497

Beautiful Update. It will be interesting to see how Khushi will react to Arnav and how he will pacify her.

I really liked how Akash showed Arnav the mirror.

Thanks for the update and the PM.

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Dimz13

@Dimz13

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#498

I can just imagine Kushi's look...in the morning...! And Deeya not being any help at all and Arnav barging in...too much sensory impact this early in the morning for Kushi and she barely has her eye open...and top that..barely recovering from that erotic dream...😆 Total collapse...it's a wonder Kushi remained standing..!

Aakaash you did good...you played your brother role really well. Both to Kushi and Arnav. You protected and supported Kushi...gave her the security she need at that time. For Arnav you had patience and suffered through only a brother cold have done that and you pushed Arnav in the right direction and even showed him the mirror,stood up to him and made him see what he did so he gets some perspective. You are awsome Aakaash.

I hope you and Payal can get together soon.

Arnav now has to face up to the craziness her has brought into everyone's life's...not just everyone...but the ones he loved dearly. Like Aakaash said..I hope he does not mess it up this time...perhaps Raoul can show I'm how it's done...😉

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#499

Originally posted by: avikasharma
loved it!
khushi must have been looking so adorable in his clothes, on his bed with an 'O'!! does one get so drunk just after one drink? just curious.
arnav aakash convo was nice. it cleared so many things which were hanging around me as doubts for so long. had been waiting for them to be cleared.
yes, arnav needs to change his attitude and be less 'demanding'.
im just waiting for the story to unfold further. you are doing a wonderful job! 😊

Good question, either her tolerance level is really low. or the writer took some creative liberty or may be there is more to unravel, Take your pick ;)

Yes, everyone had lots of questions, hopefully this part clears out a few doubts.

Thank you!