Liquorice Burning#2 [ArHi] Part 13-21

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avika_ShArMa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#441

loved it!
khushi must have been looking so adorable in his clothes, on his bed with an 'O'!! does one get so drunk just after one drink? just curious.
arnav aakash convo was nice. it cleared so many things which were hanging around me as doubts for so long. had been waiting for them to be cleared.
yes, arnav needs to change his attitude and be less 'demanding'.
im just waiting for the story to unfold further. you are doing a wonderful job! 😊

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Kalyaani B Rao

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Posted: 12 years ago

#442

Karma is a bad person!!!!!!

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I have always felt Akash was a character that was well wasted in the serial, you do him justice here. It is easy to wallow in self pity and easier still to blame others, but to correct something that is wrong now that person has to have a spine and silent strength.

He knows things went wrong and he wants to correct it, not in a grand manner but respect the person who was wronged, that is commendable.

I like this Akash, flawed, human and understated. I like him a lot.

Edited by Kalyaani - 12 years ago

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soppy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#443

I did a little dance when i saw your pm! That is how much i love this story.I cant write long comments just know that i love this story to bits!

Edited by soppy - 12 years ago

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Sai Prasanthi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#444

A, I am a bit overwhelmed. I don't know for what. How much ever I support Khushi, seeing this arrogant, ruthless man on his knees getting to know his lost 3 years got me a little emotional. He gets to learn things in always possible hardest way. I just hope he gives her the respect and space at least from now on. A very good part A. I loved it for so many reasons.

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nyxx

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Posted: 12 years ago

#445

I hope Arnav does the right thing as well...It'll be tough, but not impossible for him to fix his mistakes and truly give Khushi the freedom she deserves, be it with him or without him.

Super proud of Akash for dealing with all of this. I really like him in this story, just like I find Deeya's punk awesome!

Lets get it moving...Arnav and Khushi will yaaa ;)

Great update Aria! Its only getting better...

Edited by nyxx - 12 years ago

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SS88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#446

Wonderful chapter, Aria. I'm so glad Akash had that breakdown. Although keeping Payal in the dark was his fault to an extent, but still. I'm happy that someone has made Arnav see the mirror. I hope Payaash get back together, esp since they're punishing themselves for something that's not their fault.

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piyaarshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#447

Bs dat much.?
Akash is much undrstnding... Want sum arnav khushi moments.

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Sookie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#448

Dunno what you are talking about A... 😆

Nah, I haven't read this yet 😆

I see mastero has made an appearance! I see his stoned out face with fake weapons scaring off Romans :=)

- Not RB or KB but SOOKIE!

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Sookie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#449

Turning Green with this - 2500 and all.

Where else but along with Olive Green!

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pearl.b

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Posted: 12 years ago

#450

U r a brilliant writer…u brought out the emotions, the plight of Akash n Arnav beautifully..u r seriously one hell of a writer…terrific update…waiting to read more.

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