Liquorice Burning#2 [ArHi] Part 13-21

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Anuradha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#451

beautiful update. i wish every arrogant ass like arnav has a brother like akash to show him his place.. welll done.. now let's us what arnav does👏

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@-Aria-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#452

Originally posted by: -Sookie-
Dunno what you are talking about A... 😆

Nah, I haven't read this yet 😆

I see mastero has made an appearance! I see his stoned out face with fake weapons scaring off Romans :=)

- Not RB or KB but SOOKIE!

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Haaaw!! Sookie it is.

*wipes tears of joy*

😆

If I knew, a note would do. I would have thrown one in there a long time ago😆

Maestro's relegated back to Thread 1. in case you didn't realize.

WB! Sookie.

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meem17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#453

Loved the update
It was awesome

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@-Aria-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#454

Originally posted by: -Sookie-
Turning Green with this - 2500 and all.

Where else but along with Olive Green!

Congrats Sookster!

btw. OG is coming back soon ;)

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sushan

@sushan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#455

What a wonderful conversation between brothers.I have read lot of stories on Arhi but this is the longest and most captivating convo between arnav and akash loved it

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

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Posted: 12 years ago

#456

'Boring' must be the new 'superb' because I don't know any planet on which 16 would be boring!!!! 😕

Absolutely amazing chapter. Akash making Arnav see the truth of his actions is just superb...finally Akash has stepped up and shown Arnav what a true man is about...taking responsibility, living his principles and genuinely caring for another's well being. The man deserves a Nobel Prize!!

I seriously hope that Arnav's hormones and temper don't run away with him. He has to start 'man'-ing up now that he knows how much Akash has done to correct his wrongs. Will this be big enough to change him...it should be!!

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

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Posted: 12 years ago

#457

Sorry! Double posting!! 😳

Edited by neverbefore - 12 years ago

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gifttag

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Posted: 12 years ago

#458

'What you sow so shall you reap' this came to mind as I was reading it..Khushi's forgiveness will not be easily achieved he really will have to Work pretty hard..she might just forgive him but might not give second chance to Arnav..what redeeming qualities he has..none where I am looking from and I am sure Khushi will feal the same..Akash actually paid the price for Arnav's misdeed and still paying it and he asks Arnav not to rope her in with emotional blachmail..can't believe Akash has been so self sacrificeing..I also agree with when he said that his marriage was doomed to fail with Khushi as Payal's dowery. Let's see what cards Arnav plays and how he wins this one.

Loved the way you opened this chapter with one wonderful song and the way you wrote that you just took my breath away..I read and then I read again few times.

Khushi is so funny she was having the most sensuous dream and she wakes up and touches her stomach..she was confused and asking all sorts of questions until Arnav barges in and give her answers to say she was shocked will be an understatement.

Awesome update..I loved this chapter..you have done complete justice to it. Akash and Arnav's conversation was something else both their pain I could feel through the screen.

I can't wait to see where this is going to go.
Please continue soon.
Thanks for the PM.

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serendipitylove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#459

My dear friend I think you are made for long stories!! Ur writing style makes us savour the language, the build-up and the descriptions...like a meal to be cherished and eaten slowly... I haven't read your other work but from my LB experience with you I must say that the story should definitely unfold slowly in this pace...! Which would make it pretty long I think! I'm glad this did not end in 15 chapters!!

I am irritated with deeya being there! She's like this thorn in paradise! But considering Khushi's fragile state, I guess its like a necessary evil... And there you've left us hanging again...Right at the brink of a major Arshi encounter... ! I hope deeya is off the picture somehow and we'd see lots and lots of arshi...!