ARSHI SS: || My Saviour|| part 6 page 80

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humi

@babyhumz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#261

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aww tt was such acute update!!!

Aww he just carried her sooo cute

Yes khushi no more thank you's

Blessy you tooo no more thankyou's

Hmmm blessy your keeping a mystery your making me think okay clues

1) She told him her name

2) He was shocked the first time her saw her

3) She doesn't remeber him

4) I think I need to go to chapter one to see if her said anything about her changed. I dnt think he did... Let's wait

So he doesn't know her much...

5) They must have only meet once. Maybe at a time where she didn't see his face.

Any guy would say that... Really natural line blessy... 'Your sacred of dark, water now.'

Eyes are wide!!! He's leaving (stop playing with her Arnav) ... We know your not going you promised

Wow that was fun! Calm play, some can make you laugh even when your down.

BLESSY it was just getting good. Why you have to bring him back??

Never mind still good more romance.

Arnav's to sweet in this weird ;)

Awww now that's something I loved and missed in IPK his wound, her tear then her care awww nicely written

Okay so shyam did this great! You know after my res the frist thing I read was shyam. But his bringing the love out in these two sooo alls well

next time mission UNres same day

Edited by babyhumz - 12 years ago

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#262

awesome update loved it loved that arnav is keeping her safe loved how even in danger he has her comfort and her safety above all and the snake is after them awesome update well done thanks for the pm

Edited by dumas - 12 years ago

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Shilpa

@HerFiction

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#263

Thanks for the pm. Shyam the snakewa entered?

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#264

Awesome chapter Bless! You packed us another episode of drama, action, fun, struggle, pain, vulnerability and emotions! I have always told you this but there is a certain innocence and sweetness attached to your every story and characters you portray, it is just beautiful.

This chapter felt like a journey, you have kept the mystery still intact but have shown us progess in Arnav and Khushi's relationship. It is hearwarming to see Arnav being there for Khushi every step of the way! He saves her time and time again, he makes her laugh by teasing her about being scared, he is considerate towards her to make sure she is completely comfortable. Can Arnav get any more perfect! On the other hand Khushi has obviously suffered alot but finds comfort under her saviour's protection though the fact that she realized she has put his life in danger as awell was brilliant! Then you gave us that dreaded name Shyaam! Can't wait to see what you unravel next Bless! As always loved the chapter! xo