virman ff:I wanna be with u...someday part 10 DIS

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nia3krystal

@nia3krystal

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Posted: 12 years ago

SOMEDAY...this 7 leter word can mean soo much it counld mean a yes a no or it could mean peace but at the same time war too...

THis is a story about two people there life frm college to career to there future...there break ups there pactch ups...apart frm true love this story is also about friendship,best friends,family and it someway bethray.

that it guys if u like it plz like and comment...and when I see the likes I'll continue...!!character sktech comin up in a bit.

character sktech:below

part 1:page 2

Part 2:page2

part 3:page 3

Part 4:page 4

part 5:page 5

Part6 :page 5

part 7:page 6

part 8:page 7

part 9: page 8

part 10:page 9

Nia&krystal<3

Edited by nia3krystal - 12 years ago

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Viru_Neutrogina

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Posted: 12 years ago

Interesting concept...please do start...and do pm me!

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nia3krystal

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Posted: 12 years ago

CHARACTER SKETCH...:

VIRAT VADERA:

Virat The name all girl die to just listen to.lives with his mom and can do anything for her.he is ina relationship in shannaya which he thinks its love but the story is not soo easy.He has a step brother but they still love each other very well.and off course his number one enemy is wait for it...manviii and his best friend is jeevika. He is in the college basketball team.

Viren vadera:

viren an amazing brother and son although she is not his really mother but still he care as much for her.good lookin,rich,kind and very honest and to some extend very innocent.he is with his brother in the college basket ball team.he is in love with jeevika and yeh are soon gonna get married.

jeevika chopera:

she is an amazing friend living,caring and also abite shy.her best friend is virat they know each other since childhood.she is in love with viren.she loves her baby sister manvi very much and can do anything for her.in the cheerleading team.

Manvi chopera:

manvi gosh the girl is full of colours.she is a girl that believes in love but will not trust anyone quickly.she loves ther dear sister very much and can also do anything fir her.the next person on manvis list of likes is her best friend/like sis shannaya. And she lirterally hates virat.in the cheerleading team

Shannaya singhania:

Shannya one off the most pretiest girls of college very popular.ina relationship with virat.cant live without manvi and also loves jeevika equally.also in the cheerleading team.

other characters that will come in the ff.some may come soon some later but ill give u the list:

Vanshika:viren and virats mum.

Gippi:a gikki type of boy in class everybody loves him.he is not a major part of the story.

Aditi:gippi"s girlfriend

sameer(sam):and good friend of virats n also virens he is also in the basketball team he is a very funny type of guy.

natasha:sams girlfriend sweet pretty and funny too.she is also a part of the girl group shannaya,manvi and jeevika .

Tanya:I wont tell u who she is just yet u'll have to wait..

a few points to help u out:

firstly the girls live together in one amazingly decorated apartment.virat and viren live with there mom in a very big andand beautiful house.nhouse.n one more thing there r more members of the boyz and the girls family but ill tell more about tthem when we get to virikas marrimarrige sequence..

Ok that it I think...hihihihi anyway if u like plz press that like button..<3 <3

guys one more thing im not sure if u guys read it but my best friend shannaya started a ff called virman and virika ff: zindagi she wasnt able to comtinue for a lomg time and she wants me to soo soon ill be doing that to but I need ur advice I think u guys should go and read it and tell me if I should continue it or not..

Nia&krystal

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kulsum_virman

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Posted: 12 years ago

concept and CS both are really interesting specially with soo many characters in it
update soon and do pm me ...

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tanishalnk

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Posted: 12 years ago

Amazing concept. ...cs is awesome
Continue soon nd do pm me 😊

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JESMY

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Posted: 12 years ago

NICE CONCEPT.
CONTINUE SOON.
DO PM ME.PLZ..

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Syed695

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice CS..! Waiting for the Updte..!

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nia3krystal

@nia3krystal

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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 1:

It was a lovely sunny day ina small town named tree hill.the birds were out and the sun was shinning like there is no tomorrow.the in this scene we see a college tree hill college. There are many students there rushing hete and there they may look different but there was one thing about them they were all caring and thats all that really mattered.

then frm I distence we see 3 boyz in the parkin lot one off them was leaning against his care wearing jeans and a hit black shirt(gosh he looked hot). N this was none other then virat the boy that believed in his dreams which were first to become a writer and get his book published second to become the couch of the basketball team he played for in the future and off course he saw his brother with him.the next guy was none other then viren he was wearing black jeans with a white t-shirt.and next was sameer aka sam he also believed in virats second dream this was the one common thing in all if em and it was sure gonna come true.even if the world turned up side down these three would definatly become the couches of this team even if it was the last thing they would do.

Sam:wat r we waiting for dude

viren:dont u know or should I tell natasha that u said lets go and forget her.

sam:come on dude I swear u were my friend a min ago

virat:guys shut up there here.

and frm the gate came 2 BMWS that had no roof in full speed with 2 girls in one 2 in the other they raced down the parkin lot and at the end they done a skid and turned the car frm one car came our and beautiful girl wearing a long light blue dress with flats underneath and her hair in a beautiful pla5 with little flowers un it she was none other then jeevika next to her was the girl that was driving she was wearing a black mini skirt with a hot red shirt plus black boots her hair was in a pony tail she was shannaya.frm the next car came out a girl she was natasha wearing black skinny jeans with a white shirt and on top a waist coat and pumps her hair was left down and straightened.and last but not the least the cutest of the whole group came out manvi frm the drivers site wearing a white dress which was just above her knees and was strapless with a black belt in the middle plus she was wearing black pumps and her hair was also left open amd had small curls.

the girls made there way to the boyz shannaya,jeevika and natasha went and hugges there boy friwnd while manvi was giving virat dirty locks.

manvi:o god not again

virat;aww look someones jealous.

Manvi:shut up u idiot anyway guys lwts go we got class and they all made there way to there class

Ok guys thats it I now it mite be a bit long and full of detail but it was need soo I could tell u there lifestyle .

now ill guve u some more point soo that u get it a bit more:

ok soo manvi is into music

jeevika wants to be a teach in her own college some day she think it will help her understand the student becuz she has been there

shannaya wants to start her own clothes line

natasha wants to be a model

virat want to be a writer

and the other two plus virat also want to be couches of the basketball time.

Birt AS there in america soo they have to studdy the same thing .

bear with me guys...

nia&krystal..!!

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JESMY

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Posted: 12 years ago

NICE UPDATE.👏
PLZ MAKE VIRMAN ONE SOON, I CANT SEE ANOTHER GIRL WITH HIM.
THANKS FOR PM.
CONTINUE SOON.

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nia3krystal

@nia3krystal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#10

Part 2

they were in there class and boy was it boring...they were literally sleep virat was soo bored soo he decided to annoy manvi.he got out a piece of paper and wrote something and through it out at a manvi.she picked the paper up and it said 'cheak out the professors shirt dude he looks gay..'

Manvi being manvi wrote at the bottom frm virat and throw it at the professors table..and then

p:VIRRAAATTT

after the claass all that could be heard was laughter

shannaya:aaahahahahhaah good one manvi

manvi:well thanxs u

they all kept on laugh virat just sat there looking at them he tried to take his eyes of manvi but she looked soo beautiful laugh...wait min were did that come frm virat I think u need to come out thw sunshine dude

virat:laugh go on u watch now miss ded futiya u watch

manvi:I will be waiting mr chep ill be waiting

and they gave each other THE LOOK

(Guys there one more thing that manvi is very much scared of the darkness).

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It was the end off the day every1 went home ezcept manvi she had some tution to go to.

finally when she was free it was dark.but she had no option but to walk home.as she was walking she started to hear owl noises soon she couldnt take it anymore and she just droped every n grabbed her ears n started screaming

manvi:no plz nooo leave me lone aaahhh

Suddenly she felt two arms encircle her the arms belonged to non other then virat.he had found her like this a few times before and that why he came out to pick her up but she had already left so he decided to find her and I guess he did.

Manvi:noo plz

Virat:shh it ok manvi shh it ok its me virat

as soon as she heard that she hugged him and calmed down..after a while virat called her but she didnt rply he lefted her head and saw she had fallen asleep soo he took her home.

Next morning at college

manvi:thanxs for yesterday virat

virat:no probleeemoo

manvi:umm sooo friends

virat:hmm ok

in the next few month virat and manvi became very good friends they spent most of there time together.this wasnt bothering anyone until wat happened one day which changed there lifes.

manvi was as usual late for break she was on her way to the canyeen when she saw virat comin frm the other end . He saw her and pulled her in to a class room

manv8i:W*F virat wats wworng with u

Virat:shhh I just played a trick on sam and he is after me

manvi:lool wat did u doo

Virat:I put a jar of wormes in his trousers

manvi coulndt stop laughing as virat was just taken away by her beauty. Suddenly she noticed virat staring at her.they were just staring at each other they were slowly coming closer and closer when there lips touched...yes they were kissing it was a short but sweet one when suddenly they heard the noise of the door it was none other then...

soo guys who do u think is at the door..??

I know u hate me for stopping at such a place but suspence is needed

Nia&krystal