virman ff:I wanna be with u...someday part 10 DIS - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Awesome update...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
nice update sangeet function was nice
precap looking interesting update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Awesome part...
Liked it...
Too good..
Waiting for next one
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
wow superb update i loved it sooo much plzzz do continue soon and pm me ok😊😊 👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Part 9:
Today was gonna be pretty busy as in the morning its was the haldi first n then the mehandi in the evening...all the girls were getting ready running here and there...
Jeevika was wearing a plain yellow suit...
They were all waiting for virat to bring the haldi frm jjijus house...
Mnavi:yeh virat bhi na his always late
Shannnayaa:gosh
Suddenly they hear his voice
J.m mom:aray beta tum agay
Virat:ji aunty
J.mmom;manvi virat ko le kay jao betao chalo
Manvi(to herself):khud nahi beht sakhta.
Manvi took virat were her di was and told him to sit..
Manvi:ab beht bhi jao ya os kay liay be invertation chahiay.
Virat:nahi nahi app ITNAY pyaar say kehay ghi to behtna to paray gha.
Alll the ladies started putting haldi on jeevika.frm the corner of her eye manvi realized virat ssitting here playing on his phone she slowly went up to him and rubbed her daldi valay haat on his cheek...n started laughing
Manvi:hahaahaha u look soo funny
Virat:u wait
And he started runny behind her she ran up the stairs and in to a room virat followed her..
Manvi:virat kuck nahi karna acha na
Virat:acha meri bari ai to yeh drama tu ruk.
Manvi got of the bed and was about to run out when virat grabbed her frm her wrist and slowly put his arm around her waist.she was about to push him but her hands were covered in haldi...she though why should I care ill just dirty him and go off
She was about to when
Virat:dont even think about puting thoses hands on me do u get me or should I explain in my own way.
Manvi:why should I listen to u I mean who are u and wat are...u cant control me I will do wat I want u have no rite to tell me wat to do and...
Virat:will u just shut up god u just go on and on u speak again amd I will make u shut up in my own way.
Manvi:o really ...make me
And next min he crashed his lips on hers at first she tried to get away but then gave in...they slowly parted
Manvi:u do know we are still not talkin we only just had n fight yesterday n here ur kissing me
Virat:correction u had a fight with me not the otjer way round soo weere cool
Manvi;were not cool untill that mehandi get on my hands..see in the evening vadera..
And she walked off
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In the evening all the ladies were here and the mehandi had started...
Manvi:shannaya where are the mehandi ladies
Shannaya;I dont know yar...but why are u worried tumay to virat mehandi lagay ga na
Manvi:I doute it he will come ..
Shannya:dont worry he will
Manvi:yeh watever
Just then 4 ladies wearing saries all covered up came
1st lady:hum mehandi laganay ayi hai
As soon as this voice got to manvis ears she knew it was non other then virat.she quickly turned and looked at the four and knew it was the boyz...the other girls were sitting with jeevika manvi ran to them
Manvi:dude guess whos under those saris
Jeevika:yo there the mehandi ladies
Manvi:not exzacly
The three of them l9oked at manvis cheeky face and
Shannaya+jeevika+natsha:NO WAY DUDE
manvi:yes way its the guyz
Natasha:why not have some fun first manvi
Manvi:u soo got me girlfriend
They sat and whispered for a while and then.
Manvi:ladies and (lookin at the guyz)ladies...how about we do some dance before we start..
The boyz just stood there apart frm viren who had gone and sat next to jeevika...
Rohan;yar yeh bhabi kay ilava yeh sari larkia bohat thiki mirchia hai boss bohat thicky..
Sam:tell me about it man
Virat:yar will u guys shut up im yje one that need manvi to put mehandi or my love story ki to end
Rohan:dude either speak hindi or english not mixed its just weird
Sam:dude just shut up and watch
The 3 girl can 8n the middle and danced on didi tera dewar dewana which was soo funny..
By the end of the song all the ladies got up and danced viren,sam and rohan took a chance to escape they told virat to come as well but he was not going no where until he did wat he came for.as all the ladies were dancing he slowly went and grabbed manvi and pulled her in to a store room on the side
Manvi:behan gi app yeh kya karahi hai
Trying to control her laughter
Virat:u think this is funny rite
Manvi:not at all I dont think it funny I think its hilarious
And she burst in to laughter.that went virat grabbed her hand and wrote something and
Virat:read it when I go
Manvi:soo go na I have to get my mehandi done and then get ready for tomorrow.
Virat:my kiss
Manvi didnt hesitate becuz she really missed h8m she crashed her lips on his he was shocked at forst but liked it they parted
Virat:seriously bhooki sherni
Manvi:shut up and move I have to go
She was about to go when he grabbed her and her bare back hit his chest
Virat(whispering in her ear):dont forget jhoota chopany ki ramas n we are gonna win far and square...
Manvi:we will seee
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Uff soo sorry for the late up date and I probebly wont be able to pm u guys sorry again but its just this time I will definitely pm u next time...its becuz im startinga new story becuz I know this one is a pathertic one but I need u guys too bare with u know they say people get better with time its the same with me ...I just need u guy to support me...thanxs
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Precap;
The wedding jhoota rasm lotsnof runny hiding romance and funny moments...
Back to america and more problems with sid..
nia&krystal
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
the update was fun ...virman fun and nokjhoks and for sure their romance loved it ...
and the boys thought on the theekhi mirchis was hilarious...😆
and waiting for the next the joota rasam will be fun😊
update sooon 😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
nice update haldi and mendhi function
was good update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Part 10:
It was the wedding day finally every1 was getting ready...there people runny here and there..the guyz were ready.
Viren was wearing a cream sherwani that had beautiful embroidery on it plus a red scaf on top.
Virat was wearing a blue serwani
Sam was wearing a green one and rohan was wearing orange one..(I know there stupid thats all I could think off)
As they walked down they saw shannaya and natasha all ready looking beautiful. ...jeevika was als9 ready but she was in her room.shannya was wearing a combination of red and orange...it was a maxi type.natasha was wearing a white lehanga with a royal blue beely top and a beautiful dupatta to go with it..they came up to the guys
Natasha:well dont u all look dashing
Viren:u guys look very nice too...but wear is my third sali sahiba.
Both natsha and shannaya point towards a chair were manvi wearing shorts and a baggy top was still decorating..
Viren:manvi viren shouted
She turned and lost her balence and she was about to fit the ground when virat grabbed her...awww
Virat:cant u go without ending up in my arms
Mamvi:shut up
And they moved towards the other
Rohan:why arent u ready yet manvi
Manvi:I was going but then I had to make last min changes...but im going to change now..
And she ran up stairs and in not less then a min the rest if them heard jeevika shouting at her about it her wedding and her own sis is the last one toget ready they all started laughing and went to greet the guest.
After about half an hour manvi came running down with a cream lehanga that had green and purple embroidery on it plus a cream blouse which made her back visable as it had just 3 strings at the back with a purple and green dupatta. ...she was lookin very pretty.
Virat was just lost in her beauty
Viren:mo band karlay varna maki gos jay gi.
Virat came back his sense.he went toward her she noticed and kept running away...she was standing near a curtain she couldnt see him anymore.suddenly she felt an arm go round her waist and she was picked up and taken behind the curtains.
She looked around and saw virat
Manvi:dude wat are u going out me down.
Virat:u can run but u cant hide...by the was u look gorgeou(putting his arms around her waist)
Manvi(putting her arms around his neck):well thanx u ur not bad urself.
Virat:soo how about a kiss now.
Manvi was aboit to try the same trick but before she knew it he had crashed his lips on hers.they parted
Manvi:ur fast
Virat:just listening to u ur the one who said stay alert.
Manvi:awww u actualy listen to me anyway let me go now I have to go and get di and then jhootey bhi tu choranay hai
Giving him a wink
Virat:well seee
Manvi:we will and she went
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All the ritals were done and now every one came down frm the stage.
Viren was looking for his shoes but counldnt find them.and then frm the otjer side he heard
Shannaya+manvi+natasha:jiiijuuu
They were standing with his shoes
Manvi:walked towards the guys
Manvi:jjiju yeh jo app kay bhai hai na saray kay saray kay saray nikamay hai
Shannaya and natasha came behind her
Shannaya:haan hum nay in kay naak kay nichay say jhootey choray hai or in ko pata hi nahi chala
Manvi:vesay shannaya itnay baray nak lay kay gomay gay to yahi ho ga
Virat:to rok
Manvi grabbed the shoes and ran while shannaya behind her and virat and rohan runn8ng after them.manvi handed one shoe to shannnaya and ran up to the roof with the other one and shannaya ran to a room.
Shannaya ran out to balcony rohan came near here she knew there was no escape
Shannaya:rohan look I win ok
Rohab opened his arms and she bent down and ran off.
On the other side on the roomanvi ran to the end of the roof...she knew virat could take the shoes fair and square soo she though of a plan...she took the dupatta of and open her hair and shock her head...she started walking seducingly towards him...he was shocked at this..she came close to him and pushed him towards the wall and pasted the shoes on to shannya who ran of to hide them..
Manvi pushed him towards the wall and came closer and closer and whispered in his ear...
Manvi:got ya...
And she ran off picking up her dupatta on her way.
She ran down stairs where she found shannyaa
Manvi(whispering):were are they
Shannaya:under jeevika di's chair rite under there noses
Manvi and shannaya gave a high five and went towards the others.
The guys came down.
Manvi:ok I think we win
The boys were all quit as they had looked every where and had no luck.
Viren:vesay nikamay kay nikamay hi raho gay...idiots...ok sahli sahibas wat do u want
Manvi:well as were 3 soo there will be 3 wishes
Viren:wat ever u say my highness
Natasha:first wish is that u get ur brother to do wat we say for a week when we get back to america.
Viren looked at his brother
Viren;done
Virat:bhai wat are u saying
Viren:u didnt look after my shoes soo u guys have to pay and as im the eldest u listen to me
Tbey all went quit as they knew they were guilty.
Shannaya:next wish u dont take all of di's time N let her spend time with us when ever we want...
Viren(whispering to the guys):u guys are soo gonna pay
Shannnaya:yeh kis jiju no secretes
Viren:I agree u can take as much time as u want of ur di's just guve her to me for a while too
Shaanaya:of course aapp hi ki biwi hai
Viren:haaw shannya mujay to pata hi nahi ta kay meri biwi hai
And every1 started laughing
Shannaya:very funny jiju.
Manvi:last wish ...u keep my sis very happy u will never let a single drop of tear come in her eyes...u will always trust her becuz the world can go up side down but my di will never lie to ubor break ur trust becuz she loves u probably more then me
And she started crying jeevika came n hugged her...
Awww.
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It had been a week sins they had come back frm india every1 was busy in there college lives.
Every1 wasbin the canteen when viren came and said
Viren:guys principle turner told our group to look after a new bee he will be here any min his name is sidharth.
Manvu froze at this name.
Jeevika:dont worry it could be someone else as well.
Shannya;yeh dont worry
___:hey guys
Every1 turned around and manvi,virat,jeevika and shannya git the biggest shock of ther life it was sid
Sid:hey viren rite
Viren:yeh ...ok this are the guys rohan,sam and virat...and here is my wife jeevika and my salihis manvi,shannaya,and natasha
They all said hello
Sid kept looking at manvi with an evil scaning her frm top to bottom.
Virat closed his fist in anger.but manvi held his hand to calm him.but somewheree inside she knew some thing was gonna happen something bad.
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Thats it guys hope u liked it. This time I have sent the pms but if u want me to send u an pm u need to add me to ur buddy list.thanxs
Nia&krystal
Edited by nia3krystal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Awesome update...
Loved it...
Love there bonding between everyone...
HATE SID...
Pleasee continue soon... And thanks for the PM...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50

yes hun ur the first thanxs..!??

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