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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
nice update now will girls spoil
boys bachelor party update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Part 7:
The guys and the girls were all ready.and they did look hot I must say.the guys were in there room waiting for sam to finish off
Virat was wearing orange jeans with a white shirt.
Viren was wearing balck jeans with a red shirt and a black waist coat
Rohan was wearing yellow jeans with a green t shirt and sam was wearing blue jeans with a black shirt.
They went down stairs and saw all the girls sitting on tje sofa wearing pregency gowns...loool
Virat:ummm may I ask how many women are pregent here
Shannaya:just jeevika di why
Sam:then why have u all got pregency gowns on
And all the guys burst out laughting
Manvi:we thought they looked cool
Shaannaaya:by the way were ate u guys going
Viren:ju...ju...ju
Jeevika:ju...ju...ju wat viren
Rohan:he means wd are just going to one of sams ftiends house we will be back ina bit
Natasha:ok bye.
The guys left and soon as they did the girls through of the pregnancy gowns and bou did they look sexy.
Jeevika was wearing a a long summer dress which was all the way down to her feet and was black.she wore this becuz she didnt wanna wear anything tight.
Natsha was wearing a sexy purple dress that had full sleeves and was just above her kness.
Shannaya was wearing a emerald green dress which was strapless and was above the kness but it was fled out at the bottom it wasnt tight at her legs.and it also had a golden row in the middle.
Manvi who I must say was looking the cutest.she was wearing black tight jean with a chain hagging down.on top was a hot pink belly top and on top of that she had a black jacket on..
They all got in to the car manvi was driving.she was driving fast.
Manvi:di ur idea of getting ready and then putting pregency gowns on top soo they wouldnt realize was an amazing...
Shannya;exzacly dude otherwise we still would have been getting ready and we would have lost them.
Jwevika:well I am the best.
Natasha:u soo got that...yo manvi slow down abit u know na that virat is driving and he can feel u a mile away
Manvi:oyeh
She slowwed down.soon aftwr half an hour they reached there.it was a club and it did look like a down market but was very famous.the guys parked there cars and went in and the girls followed.when they got in side they started spying on them.they were all busy watching the strippers.the girls were hell angery.then one off the stripper came and ask viren to dance...now every1 nows how viren is very shy he said no this bought a smile on jeevikas face
Manvi:yohooo di check out jiju...
Jeevika just blushed.but just becuz viren didnt go does mean baki bhi sodar gai.in no time the other three were on the dance floor dancing with the strippers.to make things worse the strippers had got them to take there shirts of . this was enough for the girls to go infront of them in anger.jeevika just went to viren
Jeevika:hello mr
Viren:jeeevika wat are u doing here
Jeevika:I love u viren I saw that sriper called u to dance and u never went.
Viren:ur the only one I can dance with baby.
Jeevika:viren if u dont mind can we plz go out im hungery
Viren:yeh tells go and leave my sahlis to deal with my bros
Jeevika:loool
And they left the club.
Shannaya,manvi and natasha stood in front of the stage it was then when there men noticed them.
Sam came running to natsha
Sam;baby listen to me
But natsha walked out of the club all angery with a helpless sam behind him.
Rohan:shannaya listen this is not wat u see
Shannaya:o really then wat is it mr rohan
And she wwalked up the club stairs followed by rohan.
Manvi was just staring at virat with anger
Virat:man...
But before be could complete manvi walked of and went to the bar and said to the bartender.
Mamvi:5 vodka shots
Virat:oye are u mad wat are doing.
But before he could say anything she gulped all 5 shots down and in no time she was drunk.
Virat;ok manvi lets go
Manvi:who are and wat u I wanna dance u cant stop me.
She got up in the drunk avatar and walked to the dance floor she grabbed this randam guys she didnt even look at him becuz she had her eyes on virat the whole time.manvi was dancing very close to that guy he had his arms on her bare waist.to mamke things worse manvi took of her jacket and as she was wearing a low neck which was visable frm far.that had dine it virat stormed to the dance floor and pulled manvi with a jerk.they stared at each other for a while then virat dropped down to her neck and started nuzzling her neck manvis arms went on to his neck she had her hands going through his hair.but after awhile manvi realized wat was happening she pushed him with a jerk.
Virat:dude wats ur problem
Manvi:shut up and stay away frm me
And she started dancing again with some random guys.virat knew she wasnt gonna listen here and he had to talk to her soo he just span her around and picked her up and took her out the pub.
He finally put her down outside in a nearby park.
Manvi:wats ur bloody problem.
Virat:ur anger
Manvi:u wanted strippers rite soo go the club is all urs
Manvi was about to walk away when virat pulled her.he pulled her soo hard that he ended up losing balence and fell on the grass with manvi on top off him
Manvi:let me go
Virat rolled on top off her
Virat:wat if I dont
She rolled back on top
Manvi:u will regret this Q
Virat back on top
Virat:o I never regret anytime spent with u and especially if were alone.
Manvi rolled back on top
Manvi:errr f**k u
Virat ur most welcome to
Manvi:shut up u u u
Virat:u wat
Manvi:errr basterd
Virat:ok I give up im really sorry I didnt mean too was just they were attractive and...
Manvi:u guys are sick u guys are sick and she went off to her car and went home.virat though she will be fine by tomorrow.
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Next morning manvi came down abit late every1 had forgot and forgiven ezcept her.shannaya called her as the ladies taylor was here and she needed manvis measurements.
Shanaya:manvi u get ur size taken ill be back in a sec.
Manvi:ok
Manvi wasnt paying much attention to wat was happening in the room.
On the other hand behind her virat came in and signed the taylors to go and have some refreshments.
Manvi thought the taylor was still taking her measurements.it was then went the taylors hands traveled around her waist and under her top she was taken away although the hands did feel like ...VIRAT
She turned back quickly and saw virat and her in a locked room.n then it hit her she was angery.
Manvi:I have more important things to do then talk to u bye
She was walking away when he grabbed her hand and made a fingure lock.
Virat:im sorry I didnt mean too...plz forgivee this ignorance of urs is killing me plzz
Manvi:u can go shirtless for that bitch but no for me???
Virat:ooo I see ok madam as u wish.
And virat took his shirt of showing his well built body.
Virat:happy
Manvi:very..
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Precap:
Sangeet,dance and lots of musti...
Boyz gate crash the mehindi...

Thats it for now guys hope u liked it.
Nia&krystal
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
woww fabulous update sooo much fun...
the maternity gown part was funny ... 😆
then manvi's vodka affect dance and their rolling in the grass lol that was fab shameless 😛
and kya mast shirtless tailor hai yaar 😛
update next part sooon exciting updates 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
loved the update
it was awesome
plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Haaye haaye that was nice...if tailors like him comes to take messurementsthen i wont leave him...lol
Shirtless...wow manvi is sooo lucky!
I loved it...tooo awesome...thnx for the pm and continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
nia&krystal plz plz plz update next prt soon i really liked for story from chapter 1-7 till now especially virman romance nd all the other things even that the club scene where manvi was dancing with random guy nd virat was fuming with anger. i also liked the taylor scene where virat had done manvi's measurement nd last not least where he took of his shirt for her
I have a request can u give us some hot scenes between virman. nd plz plz plz update soon nd add me to ur buddy list nd pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
wow superb update i loved it sooo much plzzz do continue soon and pm me ok😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Hey guys thanxs for all the nice comments sorry I got stuck in something thats why I couldnt update but I will be doing that later today...sorry for the delay...

Nia&krystal
Edited by nia3krystal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
eeeks am excited for the update 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Part 8:
It was the sangeet day and every1 was busy preperaing for the sangeet shannaya had gone to pick up some clothes frm the taylors while manvi was busy finishing of the deco for the sangeet.she had decided the colours to be white with a combination of black n pink .the elders were cheaking out last min arrangements while natsha n jeevika were packing thinks for the palour.the boyz well they were playing video games...sooon shannaya was back n manvi had finished her work soo they decided to go n call di n natasha soo they could leave for the palour.on there way up they saw the guys playing.
Manvi:sooo typically
Shannya:tell me about it.
N waalked off.
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It was evening now and the guest had started to come the guys were called down...
Viren was wearing n white sherwaanni that had black buttons on it.
The other 3 guys were wearing the same designs which were kurtay but different colours virat was in black sam in blue and rohan in cream...they looked amazing.
Then the girls came down.
Jeevika was wearing a white lehanga with a belly top that had black embroidery on it along with n beatiful black scaf
The other girls were again in a simipler design.they also wore lehangay with belly tops and beatiful dupattas.manvi wore and redish pink colour while shannaya wore a emerald green and natasha wore blue..
The guys couldnt take there eyes off them.
Virika:
Viren:u look amazing.
Jeevika:well thanx u and ur not bad ur self.
...
Rohan was just staring at shannya
Shannnyaa:mon band karlo varna maki chali jay gi
Rohan:kya karo tum itni khubsorat lagrahi ho
Shannaya:well thanxs u.
...
Sam:u look so sexy
Natsha:tellbme something I dont know.
...
Manvi:how do I look
Virat:ok
Manvi:just ok
Virat:yyeh
Manvi:JUST OK
Virat;dude wat do u wanna hear frm me
Manvi:errr ur impossible go away
And she walked off.
Shannaya and manvi were hosting the show...
Shannyaa:hey people well it di and jijus sangeet and obviously were gonna have some amazing performances.
Manvi:sooo I want u too put ur hands up for our handsome chachos and sexy chachis.
The chachi and chachos danced on chamach challo.
Shannaya:next are non other then uncle and aunty..(jeemans parents)
They danced on 'o meri zohra jabin'...awww
Manvi:yar shannaya how can the day end with out our performances.
Shannaya:u soo got that...so heres presents
Manvi+shannyaa:us.
Natasha,shannaaya,manvi,virat,rohan and sam came on stage they done a dance on thug le and boy was it funny.
Manvi:how can the celabration end with out the dulha and dulhans performance...
Shannya:soo here we have di and jiju
Virika danced on chahon mein ya na...(u can watch Wednesdays epi)
The sangeet was coming to an end and virman had not talked all day..the group was sitting having dinner and just chatting
Virat:man...
Manvi:dont if u want an apology dont bother.
Virat:yar im sorry na...acha ill do wat ever u say
Viren:wat happened though
Manvi:told every1 they all started laughing
Manvi:excuse me stop laughting
Others:sorry
Virat:ill do anything just forgive me plzz
Manvi(with a smirk):anything did u say?
And suddenly virat wanted to take those words back looking at manvis cheeky face he knew he would regret this
Mamvi;I dont think he can do it lets go shannaya.
She got up when virat grabbed her hand
Virat:batao kya karna hai
Manvi:o nothing much u just have to gate crash the mehandi and along with that u have to be the first to put mehandi on me..
Virat:WAAAT
manvi:o it ok if u cant do it
Virat:but its a ladied function due wat is it with u
Manvi:I was rite he cant do it
Virat:fine..
Shaannaya(whispering):dude this is gonna be a hell lot of fun
Manvi:tell me about it.

It was nite now every1 had changed and gone to there rooms manvi was busy still doing the deco for the mehandi she had to taken down the sangeet deco and put up the mehandi one...she hadnt even changed yet she was up on a stall tryong to put something up when her foot slipped and she fell .she was waiting for the hard land but ended up in a pair off soft arms she opened her eyes just to seee virat staring at her.
Manvi:why u up so late
Virat:just
Manvi:well go to bed
She turned around to go when virat pulled one of the doris to her dress.he came closer and moved her hair to one side and started to place small kisses on her back and neck ...manvi turned around
Manvi:virat
Virat:shhh
Manvi;virat I have to get up early tomorrow plz
virat:ok fine give me a kiss and u can go
manvi:wat no I have to go
virat:yeh give a kiss and u may go
Manvi:virat no
Virat:fine I guess were here all night then
manvi though for a while nd she knew how to get iut of this.
manvi:ok fine..
she came closer pulling his coller bring him closer the closer she came virats grip on her waist became even more looser and with a jerk she pushed his and ran up the stairs saying
manvi:stay alert next time vadera...hahahhaha
virat :ur gonna pay for this madam just wait and watch and he made his way to his room with a smirk on his face...
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Precap:
Mehandi gate crash alot of funny moments...wedding day were sid appears(ull have to wait and see how)..
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Finally done hope u liked it this is just the wedding the really drama will start when they get back to college after the wedding...
Nia&krystal
Edited by nia3krystal - 12 years ago

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