Raizada and Sons - Note on Page 105 - Page 43

K, the update was another piece brilliant writing..I am very happy to see that finally Arjun got some good thrashing from someone. However I was surprised to see that it was Krishna who did the honors. He was always a silent kind of guy but the pain of loss had finally opened his eyes...That was powerful dialogues. You should consider script writing for bollywood movie. I recalled Rajneeti movie while reading this story. May be because I am attracted to such kind of stories where power, business, emotions, sacrifices, betrayals play an important role.

Awsommmiiieee u knw i'm still having hard tym 2 digest dat actuly so many died...i feel lyk dey wud pop up 4m somwhr safe n sound but aisa nahi huwa...all da things hauld at arjun were ryt at der place...so true wht suraj said dat da sins we do our luvd 1cz pay 4 it...khushi made him realiz da enormsity of da incidnt & suraj pointd out ryt he brought da lonlinss on himslf...da answrs arnav n KVB gave 2 vijyender sply da warning of KVB was awsom...evn i wnt a eye 4 an eye itz high tym Vijyender pays 4 his sins alng with his son...bohut maza aata hai na vijynder ko loggo ki jaan lene mein snatching da bluvd ppl of odrs i wnt his 2 evry luvd thing 2 b takn away he 2 suffr da same though i'm not a voilnt person but dis tym i wnt it...cmz lyk somthing big is cooking 4m khan-mallick convo can't wait 2 c whtz cuming up...nxt chp update sooon!!!!

this is good.. hope the guilty are punished..

vijyendra has no regret fr hs deeds hw shame of him

I dont wanna feel bad for Arjun but I ended up feeling bad for him.. I know he is at fault.. the grief the family is going thru is just too heartbreaking..

i duno wat to say! i cant even begin to imagine how hard it is for arnav, khushi, kbv and krishna right now! they are suffering so much! i never thought krishna would react like this but its understandable, that man lost his wife and babies, nothing can be worst than that! n he was in a way right in his accusations to arjun, if he had not decided to leave his treatment midway and come back like this maybe the lives of those innocents would have been spared!

Wow! I think this was one of the best updates of these Story yet! The way they are handling this situation is so cold blooded and perfect! Even their response to Arjun was perfect!

hey kalyani..long time i know no see..was and is busy with life..
i know about the person who copied your work...but glad that issue solved..

But in spite of all crisis i don't miss even a single update..i dont comment bcz commenting through take big stress.
and honestly speaking your writing always blew me..you are my one of fav writers..every time i read your update i thought ma sha allah what a brain you got.bcz this kind of story and most importantly to carry it further is heck of a task but you managed it not well well but amazingly..
the suraj and lavanya..some times there are some side character which are loved by you and this couple is one of those..i felt bad for lavanya..coz she love suraj,she had to endured all the pain..first his arrogance and the that mrder come rape scene..
and then come viren..i was happy that finally out of father and son duo ..son will be taken but not this scene has caught too many problems for rahiziada's family...the first target was lavanya and than the other 6..
honestly i didn't expect anjali,amma and kids and specially indira..she was may be on verge of getting happiness..i wish may be may be she is still alive..all along she was an awesome character other than ama...i didn't expect this kind of end for them..but alas...some time for our sins our loved one has to pay..
and arjun i felt pity for him..he was back ..may he was changed ,may now he was able to give love to avni and indira but alas..

i think now your story has come to its climax bcz your every update now a days bringing something complex..i am waiting to see vajendhir's end...

damn addicted story i want to see now what will happen now what really will happen..
plz continue soon..
sorry for being late and silent comenter/reader..but i am busy dear..
love
maria:)