Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 7)

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Farha Naz

@farha_ipkknd

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Posted: 12 years ago

#611

go ahead with whatever you have in your mind...i'll go with the flow rather than guessing ...I only wish that in MKM2 aag dono taraf se lagna chahiye...no matter how long it takes (sorry I'm totally biased with Arnav)

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Soniya

@TUKI.MICKY

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Posted: 12 years ago

#612

Thanx Anon for clearing up the confusion about the last para, me too thought the same that only the last few lines were for Rishav... That's why he was mentioning her as Khush... And I'm sure he won't be anything like Akash of MKM 1... Choosing between a good and a bad is always easy but making a choice when both are good is difficult... I am expecting that...

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naaza_deen

@naaza_deen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#613

Finally!!!! After reading MKM I, silent symphony, all about you, MKM II and your latest For your sake...for the very first time I have commented on your thread...I have send you a couple or more PM's to you earlier. I have always been a silent reader. To start with...,I just love your stories and the way you write,which I have told you before too...so I won't bore you again with that.

Secondly, MKM II is by far one of the best stories I have read about arnav and khushi...the characters are well sketched and you have built up a very strong yet different background for each of them. Whatever said and done...i still feel for arnav in all the stories. I like the way you put across your story, and there is a good content in the story and to be honest you don't drag it and fool around with it. Straight to the point. I have seen this in all your stories.

Right now I am loving MKM II ...khushi is so cheerful. I love karan chachu and arnav too. I like the way the story is developing. There was a chapter where arnav and khushi goes to the mela...i simply loved that chapter ...it was so well described and was the first time maybe arnav was comfortable with khushi. And after that this latest chapter where you show how arnav feels...amazing.

I had understood that the last 2 paragraphs were Rishab's thoughts...but I had a little confusion. You had mentioned this...

A restlessness enveloped him. He knew it all along, just that he took time to realize it. Now that he thinks of it, he should be ashamed to have behaved the way he behaved when it came to her wedding. Like an escapist.

I don't remember him behaving like that during her wedding...i thought it was arnav who thought it was ridiculous idea of his dad to save the raizada name and hence he behaved weirdly. I think I might have forgotten some parts in the story...remind me if I did. Please.

But otherwise im really looking forward to how the story is gonna turn out with all the complications coming up. i dont even want to think of how and what the confusion is...and how arnav would touch lows before rising again...i leave it to you to tell us the story your way.One thing that's for sure is I just love reading your work...and will continue to do so.

Edited by naaza_deen - 12 years ago