Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 7)

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InkyCupid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#631

An good and entertaining chapter which is an achievement considering there was so little of Arnav. So theirs a new entry and I find myself really really liking his character.I knew he got her that scarf, Khushi wouldn't have asked for it it he couldn't afford it.Though it is slightly out the ordinary how they're so close,that they have such a great comfort level.Rishab seems strong and determined, so Arnav really has some competition..but it is a revelation that khushi liked him all those years ago.Though it is very sad to read about her low self esteem, and the internal struggle she goes through due to her limp. Also, her best friend himself has a part to play in it, although unknowingly.The part where he dumps his girlfriend is sweet, but where he gets another one speaks about Khushi's heart-break and crushed worth.Nevertheless it;'s nice to see Khushi take it all in stride.

Truly Khushi has no idea what flirting is, does she? She though 'me' was a drink, that was hilarious! Rishab would have to clearly spell out his feelings for this clueless girl.

..but Arnav got it all. Loved the last paragraph where his feelings are like a roller-coaster of emotions.The anger,the sadness the dejection.He seems to have a really low sense of worth too.Aww he was betting on him and Khushi getting together, but his hopes were dashed quite early.Its funny how both the leads don't have the confidence to pursue each other, but will still get together despite all odds.

Thoroughly enjoyed reading the story uptil now, and I am sorry I forgot that I hadn't left a comment yet!

Edited by InkyCupid - 12 years ago

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adhu11

@adhu11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#632

Khushi had a crush on rishab.omg now this is turning point.what will happen when he tells her about his feelings. Arnav u have to do it fast man

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Sisbamboo1

@Sisbamboo1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#633

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Nooo! This cannot be! Both of our main leads have given up on themselves! And, god! Arnav is resigning himself to a Khushi-less life 😭

I knew it. I knew I would like Rishabh. I don't want to because it is Arnav and Khushi forever but he's just seems so perfect! But not for Khushi. Except Khushi did love him...or does love him. Past tense or present tense? Has Khushi simply suppressed her feelings for Rishabh? After seeing Arnav and Khushi interact, will Rishabh see their bond as a threat to his and Khushi's happy ever after and then his wooing will become more obvious and he'll propose and Khushi will say yes because she got her first love?

Khushi has resigned herself to a life where she is a sister, daughter, friend, but not a woman :( It is going to be very hard for Arnav and Rishabh to patao Khushi if they make subtle gestures. Khushi thought 'me' was a new drink 😆 The flirting completely flew over her head!

Thank you for updating so fast! The chapter was amazing!

Edited by Sisbamboo1 - 12 years ago

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savi_malvi

@savi_malvi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#634

Cute update :) used the word cute cos of Rishabh and Khushi. Loved their banter and comfort level. Khushi seriously doesn't know that not one but two of them would be fighting for her attention. This ride is gonna be fun.

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#635

Really enjoyed Rishabh's banter with Khushi.

She used to like him when she was 18 & now he likes her! They have developed such a deep friendship that it will be difficult to make Khushi see anything else.

I loved the way you described Arnav lurking in the back, noticing everything.

Two men & one Khushi!!!

Let's see what happens next. Looking forward to it!

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Memu1

@Memu1

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#636

Will Arnav distance himself from Kushi .I think that is what he will do instead of rejection he may be isolated.Waiting for the next update..

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entertain

@entertain

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#637

Very good. Don't make Arnav go back into shell please. Let him fight for khushi

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PSharada

@PSharada

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#638

Oh Shit - This was not expected, at least I didn't see it coming. So Khushi had an crush for Rishabh and even though Rishabh pretended to move on, Man he is in love with Khushi. He has come back to claim Khushi for himself and with her previous crush, things seem to be easy for him. The battle seems to be lost for Arnav. First of all, he doesn't know what he wants from Khushi and himself, He doesn't know why he wants Khushi to be with himself and he doesn't know why he is feeling bad seeing Khushi with someone else. Hopefully Arnav will figure out what he wants from Khushi - He doesn't want Khushi to be with him as a friend, He wants Khushi as his companion and his wife. But will he speak up? Will he fight for Khushi - especially when Khushi seems to have resigned to the fact that she wouldn't be seen as a woman for any man. So how and when will Arnav-Khushi's love story start. Can't wait for the next update now when Rishabh and Arnav come face to face. Absolute beautiful update. Please do add my yahoo mail ID to your email update list. I would love to read your stories on the blog too so please do gie me out the blog address too once you do start it.