Someone Completed Me #2 Chapter 22 on page 9 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
congo for 2nd thread...
it was really cute update...
KR fight with romance...
kriya is a sweet heart n rey is loving husband..
update soon..
thnx fr d pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
CONGRATX for new thread

AWESOME

AMAZING

SUPERB

FAB

LOVED THE WAY KRIA HANDLED REY

SPLENDID

UPDATE SOON :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
m late sorry
by mistake i skipped Pm of urs
finally today i found it
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unres
both chapters are amazing
loved it
the way u described it
bonding between Kriyaansh is really very nice
amazing work
keep it up
update soon
m waiting
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Edited by aroma.arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
BANNER CREDIT TO PVC! :)

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Part 21



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"Good Night Rehan"

She sat on the wooden table in the dark room only lit by the dim light of her study table, She didn't move, she just sat on the bench and smiled to herself, she found it funny how she fell for a guy so much that he meant the life to her, that she started to think that he would take her away from the dark and cruel world, that she thought he would love her like never get hurt. She was ready to give the world for him, and so was he-well atleast she thought he was. It was one of those nights when she could feel the pain scrunching inside her, slowly eating her. It was that kind of pain a patient feels after knowing that they're leading to a slow painful death, the kind of pain which brings back memories along with tears. She looked at the dark blue sky lit by few twinkling stars, through her window she closed and wished "Just Once, I want to meet him just once, I want to see him just once" she opened her eyes and started writing .

---Chorus---

Every time I try to fly alone, without my wings,
I feel so small

I guess I need you baby..

Every time I see you in my dreams, I see your face,
You're haunting me

I guess I need you baby"

Drop one. Her tears were left loose already when she felt steps coming towards her. "You're still up?' she heard the little voice and quickly wiped her moistened eyes

"Yes sweetheart I needed to complete a chorus' she said faking a smile.

"Have u been crying again?' she heard as the steps came near.

"No stupid, nothing of that sort' she said

"You know my teacher said its bad to cry, and its even worse to lie" he said and stood near the chair she had been sitting on.

"Oh, what else did she say?' she said settling him securely in her lap." I would love to hear them would you tell me?'

""Don't try to change the topic you chalu' he said with a cute dimpled smile.

"Where did you learn that word from?' she asked

"I heard Neha aunty use it once' he said shrugging his shoulders "See, again you're trying to change the topic, tell me now, why were u crying?'

"I swear I wasn't' she said

"I swear you were' he said and smiled.

"You know you're growing up fast don't you?' she asked and he nodded.

"Come on now, tell me, you were crying over him again weren't you?' he asked

She thought for a moment then said "Yes, I was crying over him'

He sighed then said "you don't need to, it's just a matter of few years until I start earning then I can take u out on dates mommy'

"That would be twelve years maybe a little more' she said and pulled his cheeks and why would u choose your mother over your pretty girl?'

"Who needs a girl when I already have Kriya Ghai, the world famous composer' he smiled.

"My my, Rehan, you really are growing up fast' she said

"And you said chocolate complan was a waste of money!' he said and shrugged causing Kriya to giggle.

Before they could continue her phone buzzed it seemed to be an unknown ID Okay Rehan "I need to take that, so u go and sleep now'

"Oh so is it your boyfriend?' he asked she giggled. Stop saying that I don't have a boyfriend Rehan'

"Okay, you're gonna talk for 15 minutes until I cease your cell phone' he said

"Fine I'll cease your video game then' she said and he replied: Okay, I make it twenty'

"Shut up Rehan, go and sleep, I'll join you in a minute' she yelled until she realised the phone was on.

"Oh I'm sorry' she said

"I know rehan he's quite notorious' Neha said I kind of have your fan in here'

"Wow, make him talk to me, I'm already feeling lucky today' she said .

"It's kind of personal so, I think I'll leave you two alone' Neha said and left.

"No! Neha! Wait!' she said but was too late.

"Hello? Hi! How're you? u know Neha she's quite stupid at times' she said with a giggle.

Silence.

"Hello? You can speak, I don't eat people up' she said

Kriya' she heard from a very familiar voice. Kriya' the voice repeated, she wanted to wipe the tears the tears but her hands declined, her senses stopped and mind froze.

"Am I disturbing u?' he asked

"Rey!' she said Oh, it's you, it's been sometime, how're u?'

"I just wanted to talk' he said

"I'm listening' she replied.

"How is Rehan?' he asked

"Growing up fast' she said

"And how're you?' he asked

"I'm..I'm good, what about you?' she asked

"I'm okay. It's quite late, you didn't sleep yet?' he asked

"No I was just finishing a chorus' she said

"How is Rehans schools going?' he asked

"It's all good, he made friends, he's a lovely child' she said along with a giggle.

"Can I .. Can I please talk to him once? If you don't mind?' he asked

"I don't mind, but I'm not sure whether he wants to talk to u' she said.

"Well..' before he could speak she said

"I'll try' as she called out Rehan he stepped in.

"Its dad, he wants to talk to u' she said

"he's still up?' rey asked

"He's always up, he barely sleeps'

Edited by Rashi_d3 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Continued..

REHAN " REY CONVO-

"Hello Rehan' Rey said .

"Yo!' he shrieked . Show decency' Kriya scolded.

"Ah, so your mom was right, you really are growing up fast' he said how're you?'

"Do you watch Transformers?' the child asked.

"Can't you ask some normal questions like what is your favourite colour?' Kriya scolded again.

"Yes I do' Rey laughed.

"My favourite is Optimus and bulkhead, who's yours?' the child asked excitedly.

"Mine is Rachet and at times Megatron' Rey said

"Megatron's evil and so r u' the child said

"What makes u think that?' rey asked

"U make my mommy cry' Rehan said

"Does mommy cry for me?' rey asked.

"Yeah' he said

"Do u think mommy loves me?' rey asked

"U really need Complan for urself, when she cries for u its obvious that she loves u' Rehan said

"And do u think my visiting will make it any better for mommy?' Rey asked

"U should better ask mommy that' Rehan handed over the phone.

"Kriya. Hey, I'm In Dubai' Rey said.

"What! I mean thats great, u should visit us sometime' she said

"Well, I think maybe tomorrow. I'll see u then bye' he said

"Take care' She ended the call..

Maybe her wish was coming true.

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Okay now.. that was a big one..

Hope u like the update..

Do tell me how it was..

Sorry am a bit busy so will update other works soon *Hope fully*

Please please tell me how it was..

Love u guys! :*

Keep ur support! :)

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Edited by Rashi_d3 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
RES. . . .
Unres. . . . . . .
Uuhuuu me 1st. . .
Me 1st. .
Me 1st. . . . .
1234 get on the dance floor. .yupiee. . .
Ok drama khatam,nw cuming to the update. .
Waah. .waah. .i cnt belive it. .tune, i mean seriously 'Rashi' ne itna Bada update diya. .wow. .dat was surly a bada wala suprise. .
And jb rashi madam ne itna bada suprise diya toh woh Shock kaise nai dengi. .
"Rehan" itna bada Shocking twist. .gosh. ..
Kriya became a composer. .and have a child Rehan.
Rehan--> a realy sweet,intelligent, natughty ,caring n undrStanding boy. I realy liked his charc.
And i lovd their bond to.
Then rey,
rey n rehan's convo was nice with bech -bech mai kriya ki comentry 🤣.
Ok . .toh finaly bata,wats cooking. .i mean ,mujhe pura update mast laga ,bt yeh twist. .rashi mai abb ful on qustns n confusn se ful hu,as dis was a simple story,with lovly-dovly mushy-mushy stuffs. .then sudnly u showd kriya is pregent n is staying in rey's house,then rey's parents hating kriya, KR'S fight whch graduly get solvd,and then yeh,itna bada twist rehan born in KR alag-alag. .gosh. .yeh kya hoing?
U knw jb bi mai phle k parts n abi k parts read krti hu,it seems both r diff. Stories. .urgggh. .
U bttr clear all dis confusns soon. .
Waiting 4 d nxt part.
Update super soon.
Edited by Madhukumari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
R
unres

sorry for the delay in unresing

amazing amazing part monku

haaayyyeee rehan is cute and adorable...really complan is helping a lottt 🤣

awww he wanna make his mommy as his girlfriend...so sweeet

and that neha aunty part was funny...great job
and his convo with kria and then with rey was wonderfully writttenn

nice choice of dialogues and beautiful usage of words

loved loved loved it
Edited by -Ocean.eyes- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
*Res*
*Unres*

Rishuuu!!! Tu ne KR ko alag alag kar dita ...

When i read woh pehli line na , i was 110% sure k yeh KR ka baby hai ...
But phir yeh bilkul nai pata tha aage yeh hoga ...

Wah!! yeh Rehan toh bohat he smart bacha lagta hai 😉...
Yeh Kria-Rehan ki convo parh k kon kahe ga that woh uska beta hai 😆...
Using the word 'Chalu' with utmost innocence , telling her about his future plans of taking Her on 'Date' , behaving all care-y care-y , That was Sweet and Funny at the same time 😆...
N then this , was trying to boss his Mommy , baad mein khud he phas gaya ...

"Okay, you're gonna talk for 15 minutes until I cease your cell phone' he said

"Fine I'll cease your video game then' she said and he replied: Okay, I make it twenty'

Waise mereko bhi lagta tha k yeh Complan N other drinks are just awein But Rehan ko dekh k lagta hai that they do effect a child's mental state 🤣...

Now i have inne saare questions running in my Mind!!!
*Sigh*
Rey away from Kria and Rehan , Y , Yeh kab hua , kyun hua? ese ese questions 😛...
Answer them soonish!

Rey ne Rehan k saath baat kar k prove kar diya that he sachi mein is an idiot 😆...

Again there is this major twist in the story...
But for a change i liked it 😉...
The part was great , written so very well 👍🏼...
N i like always loved it ❤️...
Will be waiting for the agla part 😊...

This part surely was longer than previous ones , Very Good *Pat on ur back* 🤣.


Edited by Roxxy47 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
heya..
it was amazing..👏
loved it..
REHAN it was a shocking twist...😲
haye..KR alag alag..😭
kriya aur rehan ka convo dekh kar kon bolega dat it was mom and sons convo...🤣
kriya is a composer..😲
rey and rehan's convo...by god..and bich bich me kriya..haha 🤣
update nxt part soon..
btw congratz fr ur new thread...😊
Edited by Abhilashaarsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
fabulous update
but kr alag ye tune achha nahi kia
rehan haaye i love him
and his convo with kria
loved the whole update
thanks for pm
update soon

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