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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Wats going on??? 😲

Tu itni mysterious kyun hai re?? 😵

Ye dono alag alag... i'm not liking it...😭

Awwiiee... rehan is a smart chap... just like his dad...😛

Rey wants to come back... are they on talkin terms really?? 😉

Reveal the mystery soon...😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Awesome

Amazing

Superb

Fab

Splendid

Marvelous

Still what is dis all abt

dese sudden leaps n twists woah

Update Soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
once again
so sorry yaar
mereko bilkul bhi time nahi mil raha hain
kab se tera PM unread pada hua tha 😕😕

i felt really bad
chal anyway
meri dukhi bhaari dasta tu mat sun 😆😆
now coming to the update

ek dum jhakkas
bole toh phod diya tune 😳
i am toh loving rehan like hell ☺️
he is so cute..
love him

and that girlfriend wala stuff
too god
neha aunty part was really adorable
amazing part superb dialogues
dhasu !!!


thanks for the PM
update soon and do PM me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
brilliant updateee👏
loveedd ittt😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Banner Credit - Kinjal di..!


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Part 22


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11:30 AM

"Yaaayyy!!!! Daddsss comminnngg!! Yippe Yippee Yay!" Rehan yelled with his aeroplane in hand. he yelled running in the house all the way.

"Rehan, he'll be here at three, there's still three and a half hour left" Kriya said inspite of being restless to see him herself "C'mon finish your break fast now"

1:30 P.M

"Mom I'm bored, aren't you?" he said looking out of the window.

"I told he'll be here at three, stop looking out for him, he's gonna come when he wants" she said folding the clothes properly

"Come on Mom, he should be here, it's one thirty already!" Rehan complained.

"Go and play. Don't be waiting" she said and as soon as he left she sneaked a glance out of the window herself

2:30 P.M

"WoooHoo.. Half and hour left Mommy! Yayyy! Yuppiiee" Rehan danced singing the song loud.

"Its not half and' hour Rehan, it's Half an hour" Kriya said cleaning the drawing room.

"Yeah whatever, it's all the same anyways" he said with a wink *closing both his eyes*

"Pick up your toys and keep them in place, we don't want dad to see them right?" Kriya said and Rehan retorted

"No! you just want to impress dad, that's why you're cleaning the entire house!" Rehan spoke

"Why would I impress him?" she asked

"because you don't want him to go back, just like me" he said shrugging.

Kriya froze for a moment, ofcourse it was the truth and somewhere inside she was trying not to think about it, trying not to raise hopes and accept things just the way they were but the sudden recognition to her feelings gave her a cold shiver.

Of course not! Dad won't stay and Rehan" she grabbed his attention "You won't utter a word about staying to him, got it?"

Rehan nodded in agreement. "Mom?" he asked

She looked up at him, "You still love him don't you?"

"A lot Rehan, but he's not supposed to be here" she said "With me, with us"

It was more like she was explaining herself than him, she wanted to ooze out the pain in the form of crying, but how could she? When Rehan was around, what would Rehan think of his mother if she cried right in front of him? How would he understand things?

He pulled her skirt to grab her attention towards him. "Mommy, don't worry, I'm here for you. Always, and even if dad goes we're gonna stick together and be best of friends just like we used to!"

Kriya smiled at the childs utmost innocent part, she then picked her away and placed him on the Sofa "Sit right there until I finish cleaning the house, okay?" she said

"hmph, Not fair! I don't understand why you don't allow me to go and look for him, dad might have lost the way that is why he's late"

She looked at the watch pasted with "3:15"
"It's okay Rehan, sit back he's gonna come" she said while she was getting restless herself.

"No mom! He's late, he's gonna pay for it" Rehan said crossing arms across his chest "No one wastes Rehan's time"

"SHUT up and SIT Rehan" she scolded, there was a moment of silence, she turned back just to check on him and found him sitting on the Sofa with face down in disappointment, she smiled at the child's innocence as soon as she turned she heard him.

"Dear Diary, Tomorrow Rey's going to pay a visit, my heart is beating loud and racing. I'm much excited to see him! how would he be? How much he would have changed? Did he marry again? Would he still be so perfectly looking? Would he turn more attractive or did he grew old? Would he ask me..." Yes he was reading her diary reading out loud. She turned back in an instant fuming in anger.

"Shut up Rehan! You're not supposed to read that!" she yelled, and the bell went.

"Would he ask me to come back? To be back as if wife? As his love? The teenage college love?.." and he continued

"Rehan he's out there, shut up before he comes in or else I'm gonna kill you!" she said and moved out to welcome him in.

She opened the door and there he stood, not an inch changed, just the same! How handsome he still was, how beautifully carved his face looked and how devastatingly dashing he looked in the Grey Tux he was in. How perfect. She thought, she felt a rise of emotions run to her throat and take the form of a lump there, a lump which she could not let loose and then she noticed his lips curving and displaying a beautiful smile just like he used to, his straight hair fell on his forehead just above his bottle green orbs. She stared at them, as though she had been hungry to see them all this while. she looked deep into his eyes, just like he did. He was smiling while she just stood her emotionless and with a blind expressionless expression.

"You're here" she said

"I'm here" he shrugged with his smile turning into a smirk.

"C..Come in" she said leaving the door open for him to come.

"How is everything?" he asked

"Everything's great!" she smiled "Rehan started going to school, and he's growing up much too fast, I had to unsubscribe the fashion tv because he stayed glued to it the whole time"

He grinned sheepishly

"Yeah and you know he once tried to pet a puppy in this house and I was unaware of it until the time he barked under his shirt" she smiled "And and..."

Before she could continue he interrupted, "And what about Rehan's mother? How is she?" he said looking directly in her eyes.

"I'm good," she replied "just fine"

"Rehan Rehan Rehan!! I can figure out that he's the only thing you talk about" he grinned.

"He's everything for me, I can't afford to lose him now, he's a HUGE part of my life" she said

"No he is your life, not a part of it" he said

"I know, I have no one else except him, mom, choti, bhai lost touch with everyone" she said

"But where is Rehan?" he asked

"He could be anywhere, you never know, he's a disaster" she shook her head.

And Rey heard Rehan, "Helllooo I'm Rehan Ghai daughter of Kriya Ghai and Reyaansh Ghai" he gave a introduction. Rey sat on his knees just to match the level of the little boy.

"You're a Singhania Boy! Not Ghai, it's Rehan Singhania, Reyaansh Singhania and" he turned to Kriya "Mrs Reyaansh Singhania"

No matter how much she blushed she ignored his line and sat on her knees as well, "You're a son not a Daughter Rehan! I've taught you"

"And I have a gift for you!" Rey announced. Taking out a wrapped box from his Bag "here you have it"

"Wooww!!!! Thanks Dad I love you!" Rehan yelled tearing the gift paper in haste.

Kriya looked at Rey, and smiled "It wasn't required, you came thats enough for us" she said "How are you? and how is she?"

"Krisha, her name is Krisha" Rey said with a cute smile which Kriya adored,


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*Phew* This one is done too..

Now thats like 3 whole pages in Microsoft! and i dont have any more energy left to write anything more..

First Savage Awakening then this.. now im totally exhausted !

And guess what i've not even brushed yet. On laptop since 8 this morning.

Huff Im tired!

See SA and SCM done abhi i can work on Dominant Desires araam se..!

Yay! keep waiting for that..

How did u find this update by the way?

i hope it was fine as SA's update sucked !

Do review and dont forget to hit the like tab.

P.S- Not alot left guys.. this story will be over in a few parts..

P.P.S- Wish my story happy birthday, it has crossed one whole year today *eee* so happy!

Edited by Painted_Sky - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
wow awsum update..
loved it..
haye soo sweet is rehan..
haye he read out kriyas diary..
haye rey came..he brought gift also..
nyc..
now who is this krisha..??
update soon me waiting egarly..

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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Nice update
love it
love kria n Rehan scene
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
awesome update rehan is so cute and
who is this krisha
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
the chapter was fabulous... really liked it the reunion of their family...
do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
amazing update
luvd d cuteness of rehaan
lud d bond
& who is dis krisha now
update soon

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