Someone Completed Me #2 Chapter 22 on page 9

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Credit to:- PVC (HALWAI 🤗]



See, i always found these speeches by writers damn borring.. so am not going to say anything here, but am simply going to thank a few close people around me who made my life better! Thanks to their support am here creating a new thread for the FF which i never thought could reach this faaar..

Kinjal Di- Thanks for being such a sweetheart always, bearing my Nautankis, crappy talks.. and just EVERYTHING! Handing over me the best banners in the little time span i give you.. thanks for being with me.. i love you! And also for showing ur support and commenting... aarggh! i cant tell u how mch i love u as well as hate you!! haha! and well, thanks for always surprising me with different amazing surprises!!!!!! And gives me regular scoldings like a pure di! aww..

Shenz Di- first thing i want to say is love you.. sacchi me.. u were d one who read my works when no one else did.. u were the one who always told me that i was the best writer and that i was improving each and every day.. Also, thanks for bearing my Childish talks, stupid naturerp, and all the cribbing.. thanks for always giving me the same comment "GROW UP".. we burp, we fight, we even don't talk to each other for days but eventually we return to square one--being the best sisters! love you yar!

Misha- Thanks for being by my side always sweetheart! you've seen me smile, seen me laugh, seen me cry, seen me depressed.. but you werre always there to support me and listen to my endless stories.. thanks a lot! damn i just don't know how to thank u! you've always been there.. always helped me overcome things.. you've wiped my tears and helped me putting up smiles.. you know my deepest secrets.. and you always bear my mood changings! A thanks can never be enough for what u did for me!.. I'm obliged.. love you!!
Ameena- Thanks for bearing the dramas i do.. the nautanki i represent ,.. thanks for being my best friend forever! thanks for giving me the best of comments and telling me how stupid i am.. even if we never meet please remember i'm totally changed by who you are and what u mean to me.. thankyou for everything.. mostly thanks for loving me so much!
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Kusha- hey who won't like to have a loving, dramatic, sweety, cutiepie, and naughty sissy? Well, i'm so lucky to be ur 'DI' sweetheart! you're just sooo amazing! also, you're the first reader i've come across who never comments but honestly always reading my updates and asking me to update faster.. aww.. u're such a sweetheart! and as i always say, comment doesn't matter.. you matter! love you! and also you're an Spamming queen.. baba i can never spam as much as you!!!!!!!
Roop Di- I haven't talked to you since many may many many many days.. and i miss u a lot di.. i love you sooo much!!!! love ya! I love ur comments too, u were one of those little people who read mt FF w en no one else did, and never forgot to give the best of compliments.. love you alot! you gave me pitaai like a pure di, and never forgot to shower your love and support on me.. and i miss you! 😭

Yogini Di- My comment queen!! always amazing comments! along with best combination of smileys.. you're comments make me smile! :)

Isha (Spongy )- Miss Parhaku!! haha.. you're comments show ur support so much! also i love u as a person.. Actually a PCB person.. haha!! Really, ur doing so much for ur mom.. i cherish it. may u become the best doctor alive putri.. and may ur pateints keep coming to u making u riccchhh (thore pese mujhe b dena)... i dnt know u much! but ur comments, i wait for them impateintly..!! Love you and YOUR COMMENTS!! (Hehe!!)

Madhu DI- firstly im always going to call u di.. no matter what.. u remember na Sharm and Lihaaz... haha!! love ur comments!! aww.. u give such awesomme comments.. and no thing in the world can ever stop u frm commenting on my works.. Also, my sweet spammin queen! thanks for completing previous thread even after mine saying that it wasnt necessary (again: meri sunta kon ha?)

Sanju_Arsha- I dont know u much.. but still thanks for ur support and ur comments! also, thanks for completing the previous thread.. and spammingg.. one of the spamming queens.. aww.. thanks!

Kuhu Di- Love u love u love u love u love u love u!!!!!! thanks for bearing the crap i speak on IF, FB and even on phone.. i love u alot dii.. though u never really read this FF..i still wanted to mention u..
You mean a lot to me.. and i honestly dnt know what i would do without u..

Cookie- Tujhe kya thanks bolungi.. chalo.. tubhi sahi.. thanks for being the best b*itch in world history.. we should be awarded as 'B*tches of the the year' nai?


And everyone else.. who commented, liked, showed their support!
Guys it actually feels heavenly when u all appreciate the efforts i put into my works.. thankyou!
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Index

Chapter twenty: keep scrolling! :)

Chapter twenty one: pg 5

Chapter Twenty Two : Page 9
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Banner Credit to Kinjal di 🤗

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Part 20



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'You could've told me the truth in stead' he said

'But what I told you WAS the truth!' she said with pleading eyes.

'I don't understand why you hate my mother' he said

'Why would I hate your mother for gods sake?' she said

'You know, this is what breaks my trust on you!!' he said she couldn't hear anything else, one word more and either she would die or she would end up in tears. She stood up, came to him, held his collar tightly and pushed him against the wall. Hard.

'Wh-What're you doing?' he asked looking at her with confused eyes.

'If you don't listen to me, this is the last thing I can think' she said, looking straight into his eyes.

The bold line made him stumble a little. 'Are you going to murder me or something?' he asked

She putted up an evil smirk and then without a word she pushed her lips against his, hard. He was a bit taken aback by the sudden romantic action of hers that too between a fight. He always took the initiative, so, it made him feel awkward. After a moment of hesitation he realized her passion, it was as though she was forcing him, pleading him. He replied with the same intenseness and passion which was way less when compared to her.

She kissed him like she was venting out her frustration on him, it made her feel better, she kissed him hard, instead of pulling his body closer to hers she was pushing him against the wall again and again. finally she had to split up with him due to the necessity of breath.

'Woah, what was THAT?' he asked.

'That surely transforms your mood on' she said as a smirk crossed his face 'What did it feel like?'

'It felt like an different yet enjoyable episode of Man vs Wild' he said 'And chuck my mood, that surely turns me on'

She maintained her distance, this was one of those rare occasions when she felt embarrassed and awkward both at same time. As he continued to take steps closer to her she kept moving away from him.

'What's wrong with you today?' he asked holding her hand and bringing her closer.

'You got your tablet of enjoyment for the day, didn't you?' she said not looking at him.

'Sometimes they say, at times an extra tablet is good' he said still smirking.

'Nah, Doctors say one tablet a day is enough' she said moving away from his embrace and adjusting her clothes and sitting on the bed. 'I think, we definitely need to talk'

'Talking is the last thing in my mind sweetheart' rey said giving her a stupid look, but somehow, sat next to her.

'You know, your touch gives me goose bumps' she said, showing him her arm to prove her statement.

'Your touch leaves a magical effect on me which cannot be defined nor can be showed' he said

'I'm sorry' she said

'Aww Kriya, that isn't a thing to be sorry about' he said smiling at her stupidity.

'Um, sorry for that too' she giggled

'You know what, you need to stop repeating sorrys' he said making a stern face

'Anyways, I think I should clear things over here' she said

He nodded.

'It isn't like I hate your mother or she hates me, I just think it's a natural drift between us, which needs to be solved' she said 'a bit carefully though'

'I agree! So, whose side do you think I should take?' he asked

'Your moms of course, you don't need to worry about me, just next time, before fighting listen to me too' she said 'your mother tells you crap like what I did or said and you stupidly believe her'

'Sorry?' he said s

'Anyways, I feel like watching a movie tonight' he said 'what say?'

'Nah, I don't think that could be possible tonight' she said

'Why?' he asked

'We need to go and pick up Vicky and Neha' she said and smiled.

'God! I totally forgot about that, You want to join me to the airport?' he asked

'As though you need to ask me that, of course, and you know what, I won't take time in dressing up too, just pass me the lip gloss and I'm done!' she smiled and shrugged a shoulder.

'Love you for that' he said and gave her a quick peck on lips.

'Are you done? You're taking more time making up hairs than most girls do' she said sitting on her bed, finally he came out in a suit.

'Mind helping me putting up the tie?' he asked winking and handing her the gray tie

She stood up and pushed his tie on his neck, by mistake she pulled the tie too much which made him choke, but got it loose almost immediately. Once done, she moved apart, but then it's Rey, he pulled her making her body crash on his. Kriya was a bit taken aback by the action, she couldn't understand why was he doing this, kriya struggled to part but it seemed as though Rey had other plans in mind! ;)


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Okay, i already said that i won't take any garantee for this chappy as i wrote it in a total haste!! and it sure turned out to be a total crap!

O.M.G! New thread!!

I cannot believe it!!

I honestly never thought that this story could go this faaarr..

OMG! You have no idea what i'm feeling!

anyways, i spare you from the horror of my nautanki!

How was the chapter?

Hope you like it?

Please review..

and don't forget to hit the Like tab!

No Tamatar and eggs allowed, I prefer Jutte and chappals! 😆

And han, don't forget to congratulate me guys! hope u liked this chappy..

Love u alll alot!!

Muaaahhh :* :*



@Kinjal Di- nai Maths assighment karne se pehle hi update kardi.. will be updating SA soon.

Edited by Rashi_d3 - 12 years ago
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*Res*
*Unres*

Woaaahhh!!!!
Pehle toh Congratulations for the new thread Rishu 🤗...
Then about the thing u wrote for me , All i can say is Emotional kar dita yar ...
No need to thanks me for Loving U , cause i'm gonna do that even if u don't want me too 😉...
Mai tera peecha nai chorne wali , not untill i'm alive ...

N now me dancing ...
Tera new thread and mera first comment , i'm so loving this feeling yar 😎...

Now putting my Nautanki (Jo k mai ne tere se seekhi hai) aside N comming to the part ...

What is going on in the story 😲...
KriYaansh fighting N that to over Rey's mom ...
Kya yar ab toh dono larte he rehte hain 🤔...
N then i didn't expect to read 'This' in your updates 😳...

KR Kissed 😲 😳...
N woh bhi kria ne initiative liya...
Nice way to shut his mouth N turn him on 😉...

Yeh theek haina solve ur problems by 'Talikng' calmly...
Aise chillane ki kya zaroorat hai...

Ahem!! Ab Kria ese he uske mood change karti rahe gi toh Rey aur koi kam kare ga kya 😉 😆...

The part was like always Amazing , will all these twists and turns 😃...
Liked the way u wrote the part , using different colours 👍🏼...
N now the banner , it was Great , all that gllitery gllitery ...

*Pheww* Bohat kuch bol diya 😳...
Congratulations once again 😃...
Luv U Miss. Nautanki 🤗.

Edited by Roxxy47 - 12 years ago
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🤗C . o . N . g . R . a . T . u . L . a . T . i . O . n . S MONKU🤗

may you have many more thread in future...of all your works dear

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Omggg mere liye itne saare shabd...
*aankho se aasu aagaye*
*wiping them*
*flashing 32 inch smile*

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Awww...its always a pleasure to complete your banner requests darls...
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And ha woh toh sahi hai...u always give me less time...huh
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jaha baat hai support...woh toh me waise bhi karungi...bcoz your works are amazing...and you know how much i love them na 😃

btw why u hate me??? *glaring*

hehe...i love when u love my surprises...
Wo toh ainvayin milte rahenge tuje...lol

tere liye badi wali jhappi...
Love you monku

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Ab jaldi update bhi karde...agar tera maths work khatam hojaye toh
and
ha SA bhi kardiyo plzzz

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Yaaay...finally you updated both your works yipeee...ok wil comment for SA later pehle yeh toh kardu
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Ok so coming to the update

kaha se time mila re??
SA and ek new os bhi...wah u are great

amazing update dear
perfect for a new threads inaugration :p

hayeee i love this dominating kria a lottt...wowieee
so good to see her like this yaaar

wait wats going on in reys mind?
Janaab kya karne ki soch rahe hai??

Well cont soon
and congo again
Edited by -Ocean.eyes- - 12 years ago
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Tujhe rulane mein wada maza aata hein na ?
Huh !
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awww i love you tooo...

i know we havn't talked since even i don remember...

and tune meri itni taarif ki hai to me b kar dun teri...*kidding*😆

you are a sweetheart and my lill baby...

and i'll surely complete all the FFs and phir se tere pe comments ki baarish karungi...

iss baar pakka pakka pakka wala promish...

Hugs and Kisses...😃
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congrats 4 the new thread...👏

awesome...loved kriya's bold side...
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congrats 4 d new thread
awsome update
lykd it
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the banner was good great work kinjal...
above the chapter serious u showed kria in quite surprise ways...
rey is so shocked see kria in this avatar... yup rey is also surely go to show his charm to kria... loved it ... continue soon and pm me...

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