Rudra and shambhavi (A Moharika FF) update pg 145 - Page 29

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Posted: 12 years ago
Aws update so finally they get close. 😉
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I loved the romance in such an intense situation. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Super romantic one, Jyoti 😊👏.
Very surprising update from you.
But a very good read.
Sorry for the late reply, as I was having my exams and my mother is also unwell, so I m not coming on I-F on a regular basis.
And thanks for the PM 😊
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Shambhavi controls herself and wipes her tears. She removes her hand from her heart.She again becomes stern and said

Shambhavi: radha maa, there is nothing between me and him. We were enemies, we are enemies and we will always remain enemies.

Radha maa: you can lie to me but your eyes are saying something else. Why there is no connection between your words and your eyes.

Shambhavi: that's because you are seeing what you want to see. But what I am telling you is the truth and this truth will never change.

Radha maa: then why did you stop me when I was about to tell your father about rudra.

Shambhavi(hesitatingly): it's because he is not in the condition to fight with my father. If I had told my father about him then he would have killed him right now.

Shambhavi goes from there. Radha maa saw her going and smiles. She said.

Shambhavi: I know you have feelings for rudra. It can be clearly seen from your eyes and one day you too will accept that you love him.

In the afternoon

Here inside the cottage rudra was thinking about all the past incidents how her mother died, her father's defeat, when he met shambhavi, and the time they spent together and last but not the least the kiss that happened few moments ago. He was confused and frustrated at the same time. He wanted to listen to his mind but his heart wasn't allowing him to do so.

Rudra: it's true there's nothing between me and her. The only truth is that she is my enemy's daughter.

He hits his hand on the wall in anger.rudra too becomes stern.

Rudra: I have decided I'll have to leave from here as soon as possible and that too without shambhavi. I will find another way to take revenge from vikramaditya.

Radha maa comes there and saw him in anger talking to himself.

Radha maa: are you fine?

Rudra: yes I am fine. how long I have to stay here?. I have to leave from here as soon as possible.

Radha maa: you are fine but not completely. You have to stay here for 1 or 2 days more.

Rudra: I don't have that much time.i have to leave now

Radha maa: if he goes now then he'll get to know about vikramaditya and then god knows what will happen. I have to make him stay here for tonight.

Rudra: radha maa what are you thinking?

Radha maa: but what about shambhavi?

Rudra doesn't say anything.

Radha maa: ok you wait here I'll just come.

Rudra: ok

Radha maa goes outside the cottage and thinks.

Radha maa: I have to stop him here for tonight otherwise.after sometimes she goes to meet rudra with a glass of kadha.

Radha maa: here drink this it will make you more stronger .

Rudra: do I really have to drink this?

Radha maa: should I call shambhavi to make you drink this?

Rudra: no no I'll drink it.

He drinks the kadha but after sometime started feeling dizzy and suddenly he fell asleep.

Radha maa: I am sorry rudra but it was the only way to stop you from going. I have given you a medicine now you will not wake up till morning.

Radha maa goes outside the cottage leaving rudra asleep.shambhavi comes there and said

Shambhavi: radha maa it's time for me to go. I won't thankyou coz I consider you as my mother.but I will never forget you and I'll meet you again.

Radha maa(teary eyes): I'll miss you too dear. I wish we could have spend more time together but as you said we will meet again.

Tears fell off from their eyes and they hug.

Shambhavi: my father was asking for you. He wants to talk to you.

Radha maa: alright dear I'll just come.

Radha maa goes to meet vikramaditya leaving behind shambhavi: shambhavi was looking at the cottage and thinking whether to go inside or not. She slowly walks toward the cottage and opens the door. She saw rudra sleeping. She goes towards him and watches him. She recalls all the past moments spent with him. She removed an anklet from her foot and kept it near rudra's pillow.she raises her hand to touch rudra's head but stops. She gets up and starts leaving but stops. She once again turns towards him and looks at him with teary eyes and goes outside the cottage.shambhavi comes outside the cottage and starts crying. She was confused about her feelings for rudra. She was unable to decide what to do.

Here in another cottage

Vikramaditya: I want to thankyou for everything. Thank you for taking care of my daughter.

Radha maa: plz maharaj don't. shambhavi is like daughter to me.

Vikramaditya: whenever you and your village need anything i'll always available to help you. My daughter is my life and you saved my life.

Radha maa: of course maharaj.it's very kind of you to say that.

Vikramaditya and shambhavi gets ready to leave.radha maa tells them a way out of the forest.

Radha maa:i'll miss you shambhavi but you have to promise me that you will come again to meet me.

Shambhavi(smiles):of course Radha maa i'll definitely come to meet you.

Radha maa:and don't worry i'll take care of everything here.

She looks at shambhavi who understands that she is talking about Rudra.both bid each other a teary good bye.

Vikramaditya:once again thankyou for everything

Radha maa:my pleasure maharaj

Shambhavi left with Vikramaditya.radha maa watches her going with teary eyes.

Vikramaditya:your mother and brother will be very happy to see you

Shambhavi smiles but doesn't say anything.it looks like her heart and mind is still in the village with Rudra.she seems lost.vikramaditya noticed her sadness but he thought she is sad because of leaving Radha maa. So he didn't say anything.

Next morning.

Rudra wakes up.he slowly opens his eyes.he looks around.his eyes were searching for shambhavi but she wasn't there.he gets up and saw the anklet which shambhavi left for him.he recognises the anklet and thinks that she is in some kind of trouble.he quickly rush towards the door to find her but just then Radha maa enters.

Radha maa: so you are awake.

Rudra: where is shambhavi? Radha maa. For how long I have been asleep.

Radha maa:its morning and you are asleep since last afternoon.

Rudra was shocked hearing this.

Rudra: but how is it possible? I never slept for so long and where is shambhavi?is she in some kind of trouble?

Radha maa:why do you think she is in some trouble?

Rudra saw her the anklet

Rudra:becoz of this it's shambhavi's and its ver precious to het.she never removed her anklets.

Radha maa was surprised seeing the anklet.she realised that shambhavi left it for Rudra.she smiles seeing the anklet.

Rudra:what are you thinking? Where is she? I Am gonna go look for her.

Radha maa: she is not here.she is gone.

Rudra becomes shocked hearing this.

Rudra.gone?but where?and with whom?

Radha maa:her father king Vikramaditya came to take her.she left with her father.

Rudra becomes hurt and sad hearing this.he can't believe that shambhavi left him without even telling him.

Rudra:but how can she left like this.she didn't even meet..

He stops for a moment but then becomes a little stern

Rudra:its good that she left otherwise if I was awake then I would have killed her father by now.

Radha maa:she saved your life ny not telling her father about you.she even stopped me.she cares for you and I have seen it in her eyes.

Rudra becomes surprised knowing that shambhavi didn't tell her father about him.

Radha maa: i know what you are thinking.even i was wondering the same thing that why she didn't tell her father about you even after knowing that you are his enemy.

Radha maa:i know you too feels for her.you too care for her.

Rudra:no i don't.she is nothing to me.

Radha maa:its strange that both of you are saying something else and your eyes are saying something else.for how long you two hide your feelings.you have to accept it someday.shambhavi too feels for you otherwise she wouldn't left her precious anklet for you.

Rudra was in denying mode.he too don't want to accept that he is falling for shambhavi.he looks at the anklet and remember how she was restless and worried when she lost her anklet in the forest.rudra goes outside the cottage and starts walking towards forest.he reaches the same lake where shambhavi goes.he too sits on the rock and looks at her anklet.he was about to throw the anklet in the river but radha maa stopped him.

Radha maa: what are you doing?

Rudra: it doesn't belong to me so I am getting rid of this.

Radha maa: don't you know it's very precious for shambhavi and you are throwing it in the lake.

Rudra: so what, I don't care

Radha maa: I don't what's your and her problem. Both of you are so stubborn that yo are unable to see your own feelings for each other. The girl who look after you all these days. She didn't even sleep properly only to take care of you. Tell me you have no feelings for her.

Rudra: no I don't have any feelings for her.

Radha maa: then why did you become restless when she was not around you. When you saw her anklet. Tell me she is nothing to you.

Rudra remained silent. He doesn't know what to say.

Radha maa: look into my eyes and tell me that you have no feelings for her and you are not falling for her.

Rudra looks into radha maa's eyes he wanted to say that he has no feelings for shambhavi but unable to do so.he turned his face

Radha maa: I got it. I knew you too feel for her.

Rudra's eyes were red. He was struggling between his mind and his heart. He walks off and came back in the cottage. He looks at the anklet and remembers all the good moments spent with shambhavi. Tears fell off from his eyes.

Edited by jyoti07 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
ARIJIT IF YOU ARE NOT ONLINE FROM PHONE LISTEN TO THE SONG
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very emotional.. very touching! 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
It's nice Jyoti. This song is one of my favorites 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very emotional update.. both r in denial phase hope they realise soon.. like the song very much..waiting fr rusham's next meeting. .😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sad update but very nice. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
very heart touching yaar n specially situation when confusion between heart or mind...

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