Swaron FF: Destiny and it's Funny game [Chapter 14 UPDATED] - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
Read all the parts nnow...
Wonderful concept and storyline..
Looking for further story
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
Awesome update 😊
Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
i could feel the immense pain!!
extremely well written chapter!!!
thanks for the pm!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94
Awesome tanvish I'm mesmerised with the way you showed swayam and sharon's feeling..👍🏼.. The highlight of your update was the portion where you showed the break up between swayam and sharon it written in the most amazing way I could feel swayam's pain and agony after sharon broke up with him..❤️
The after effects of the break up lasted long and he started smoking.. Sharon yet cares for swayam and he yet feels the same for sharon it was a beautiful update loved it..😊
Thanx for the pm dear and update soon plzzz.. 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95
it was so beautifully written update👍🏼..
i really feel the pain of swayam😭
thats why swayam started smoking😔
loved how sharon care for swayam..
loving swaron friendship..
thanks for the pm ..
update soon:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96

nice update 👏👏

thanks for showing their breakup nicely written
their sweet encounter
their cute conversation
loved their caring, adoring ,and laughing session 👍🏼
thanks for the pm 😃😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97
Super awesome...😊
pls update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
res...

sorry but u hav to wait till 29th...
jst kidding...


so bholi bhali bachhi...

very nice chap...
really fist i didnt get wat is happening...
but then after reading i got that it was a flashback...
and it was really painful dat how can sharon say dat...attraction means wat????
but den bak to reality...it was nice...

Sharon: Haan woh, kisine bahut buri aadat laga di (looking at Swayam)

dat was so gud...and cute tooo...well thought...
i loved the walk-and-talk...
and the way sharon was shocked when swayam mentioned about his better-half...hehe...
the concern sharon showed for swayam's smoking habit...
and read him like an open book...
she too cares for her...i was happie reading that...but...
when she mentioned about sid...and thier engagement...erhhh...why???/
and WTH swayam is being so kind and soft wid her...some anger...but at the end of the day he is sharon's majnu boy forever...what can u expect..
evening meeting...hmhmmm..
.i want a twist...anger,frustration...pain...hurt...yaa...dats wat i want...


Rohan :)





Edited by rohanmalhotra15 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99
it was an amazing update..
loved the way u expressed their feelings in the flashback😳
aww bechara swayam is ready to do anything for sharon...
love him so much for that😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Interesting story ...amazing work 👍🏼
lovely update:)
looking forward for next update:)

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