Swaron FF: Destiny and it's Funny game [Chapter 14 UPDATED]

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#101

i felt swayam's pain in this update 😭

which is a sign saying that this chapter was really well written 👏

it was so beautiful

the emotions were correct the update was lovely

the dialogues were wow !!!!

in short it was beautiful...

and finally you changed your PM title 🤣

still can't believe kisi ne notice nhi kiya 😳😆😲

that was amazing

loving the story...

thanks for the PM

update soon

and do PM me

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Anindita Sengupta

@Anindita91

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Awesome update. 👏

Continue soon.

Will be waiting for the next part. 😳

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Shubhangi(shubhi)

@d3fan4eva

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Awesome update!
The break up part was really well penned..!
Luks lyk swaron r going on a date!!😉😆

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prakriti mondal

@prakriti4u

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#104

loved the chapter...
perfectly written 👏
you described Swayam's pain wonderfully!!
thank you for the PM will wait for the next update.. update soon 😃

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austen_TanHa

@austen_TanHa

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#105

the flashback was very painful.
your words brought forth Swayam devastation very well.
then the story took a very unexpected turn.
given how intensely Swayam still loves her and the depth of his pain,I hadn't expected him to be this cool with Sharon.
I know her comfort always comes first for him,still I thought hearing her talk about Sid would tear him apart.
I guess the awkwardness i was expecting would come in small doses as they start hanging out together.
anyway,i was refreshing to read something unexpected.
keep it up!

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vrushanharshi

@vrushanharshi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#106

awesome update

loved the way u described the break up and den the swayams pain was😭

very well written update

loved it

thanx for the pm n

update soon ...

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@TannuVsmSwaRon

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#107

#NOTE

Hello everyone,

First of all thank you so much for all your lovely support. Your comments and likes are overwhelming and boost my confidence to write further and come up with new concepts. I know I say the same thing always but that's like the simplest way I can write my excitement in words 😊

Ok now talking about this note, I know I was suppose to update on this weekend as promised but I'm so sorry I couldn't. I've been busy with my studies as I have my Final Exams from tomorrow. I've been pretty inactive on the forum lately due to studies. But I'll try my best to update by next weekend maybe.

Sorry to keep you'll waiting.

I hope you'll understand 😊

Tanvish