ArHi SS:Shattered *Thread Two* Completed

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hiralhk

@hiralhk

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#331

just simply superb dear...

u r just awesome...

thanks for pm...

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marleylerner

@marleylerner

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#332

Ye lo. here I was priding myself that I can deal with the mystery of the past like a sane person and you brought in a new mystery. Now I'm going insane wondering what happened. Is it something to do with a certain Dr. Jha? I would love that just to see Arnav chew his words about Khushi's intuition. Feng shui and what not hah!

Sooo. A lot of lifts thanks to that ankle. California ke caverns mein Rabbe ve! Arnav is losing control clearly. The man just can't stay away from her. Payalia saved him from embarrasing himself coz seems to me he would have tried to kiss her.The whole expedition with his gentle support, riling her to egg her on and so much concern just melted me. Plus he's already acting possessive and she likes it. haye!😳

She hides behind the door when checks her out in the virginal nightgown? Arre Khushi, you can wear a garbage bag and he'll still have that "hungry" look in his eyes.

Did I mention how much I love the fact the fact that Minister Raizada has to depend on Ms. Gupta to his job? Indispensable she is. And now something's happened that's his fault and she gets to mock him. Can't wait for more of their sparring!

Wonderful chapter! Just love this story. Your words just take me to their world. I can't shake off the feeling that I was in some caves and near some lake. lol.

Thanks so very much :) :)

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Iqra

@Iqraimran

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#333

I knew it...i m sure about it when u start new Ss u leave us cliffhanger like this...now what happen we have to till damn Sunday.

I just can't wait.

how can khushi think he left her just like this, in that state of her. He knew he can't leave her, he can't see her in pain.

he care for her always, he just didn't want accept that till date.

he brought her to hospital, he ordered her to take care.

its not easy for him, because he still suffer from past

my question is that, is khushi suffer because if past same as arnav, she feel the pain as arnav felt.

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Sarah

@ifsaal044

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#334

So that incident with Sheetal and Arnav takes place a month after the actual story started. We're about 3 weeks into this? or further along?

I loved the Caverns story. Honestly, I've never been spelunking, but now I want to give a try.

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Drkk

@Drkk

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#335

beautiful update. Sumthings r changing btwn arshi. New problem? Again d love moments r intruptd. Waitng 4 nxt

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#336

res

ee soo finally khushi went to dere hehehehe ..😆😆

dey called dem by dere names finally it was so pleasant to read it

Edited by Barun_Gf - 12 years ago

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Polkadots78

@Polkadots78

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#337

And I forgot to mention..he picked her up...multiple times..that just made it for me...you had me at the first pick😛

Edited by Polkadots78 - 12 years ago

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faffy

@faffy

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#338

An intelligently crafted and creatively drafted story. Extremely cerebral, intensely engaging with right amount of gravitas.

Just out of curiosity, how come you are so well versed with issues of statecraft/governance/bureaucracy? I come from this background and was therefore pleasantly surprised to read a story revolving around these issues.

I am hooked well and good to your engrossing SS.😊