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Posted: 12 years ago

#311

great updates Expel! I love how you showed the transition in their relationship during their time in San Francisco. At least Arnav has finally realized that he does not just feel hatred for Khushi anymore. So now both Khushi and Arnav feel the attraction. I loved their whole expedition in the beginning. I knew Arnav was just taunting her so that she would push herself to try harder. He knows that Khushi doesn't like being put down. I wonder what happened in India that they suddenly had to go back. Can't wait to read the next part!

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Posted: 12 years ago

#312

Wonderful update.
There is so much attraction and much more going on or simmering under the surface I am literally holding my breth waiting for it to erupt or blow in their faces...as they are fighting with it all tooth and nail.

There is so much in the past and none of us know what really happened and why Arnav hates or at the moment trying to hate Khushi, what did she do? Arnav can't see her in pain and ready to sacrifice his only form of emergency energy bar which he might have needed himself, it points toward Arnav started to have feelings for Khushi not that he will agree to it even to himself.
Why was Khushi angry with Arnav when they arrived back in India.
Story is turning more intriguing as its moving forward and raising more and more questions.
Faboulous story and love the characterisation.
Will wait for next update eagerly.
Thanks for the update.

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mishti_17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#313

Loved it.. Arnav was being there for her.. I loved the lil push he kept giving her and hurting her so that she completes the expedition.. He cares.. And he cares a lot.. What has happened back home?? 😔

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Monasha

@monasha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#314

Superb Update..
Arnav was there for her till the entire route and he keeps on taunting her so that she could muster some courage and not give up.. He cares for her so much but doesn't show her... He also gave his protein bar so that she wont faint...
He's now becoming possessive, about her...
Their attraction for each other is increasing at fast rate...
What happened in India that they went so soon??
Is it anything about their cave visit??
Why was Khushi so angry with him??
Again Cliff hanger,,...
Update soon

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arshi21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#315

Did I tell you that I love your every chapter's title names? Brings back all the good old memories...

And this is...wow.

But what did Arnav do this time? What disaster has struck now? And what is actually happening here? Arnav no more hates her and is more concerned about her than ever...can't see her in pain..called her a thousand times IN BETWEEN his WORK... That's something!

I cannot wait for your updates Juhi..

When will you update next now? Waiting eagerly! :)

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arshi21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#316

Kal saturday hai..

Fir saturday morning, afternoon, evening...late evening, night and THEN sunday.

What the-!

Bleh.

There are certain times I wish I could be a superman.

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Angels11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#317

I really dint want 2 hit the LIKE button & do u know y. coz u leave every chap at a cliff hanger & i just simply hate it 😡 why do u do tis? why why why???????????????????????????????????

v good updates & the ASR in this story is really gud. Rude but not downright mean. no cheap comments on aukat. kushi is not a jumping nitwit here but an extremely competent professional. this is the kinda believable characterization which the show lacked 😕

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jisa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#318

awesome...!!!
things are changing between them...
w8ng for next..!

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Aanchal15

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Posted: 12 years ago

#319

Its a dazzler, Juhi!!

Arnav being sangfroid despite the little mishap , and, then, his vitriolic remarks, albeit concerned , to keep her resolve to make it to their destination, just made me respect him, more..He knew that reverse psychology works perfectly with Ms. Gupta..

It was heartwarming to read that both A&K were dwelling upon all the events that occurred..and, reading that K felt inexplicable delight at his possessive tone, made me grin from ear to ear..

They nearly had a moment, but, then disaster came knocking at that inopportune moment...I wonder what that is, given, K's acerbic comment, in the end..and, I shall thank you in advance for the PM...