FF - GIVE A LOVE A CHANCE CH 49 UPD - Page 84

Originally posted by: chulbuli94

OMG'~

She is not Shifa'~

I m Shifa ~~

She is Fati ~~u have made a couple of vms for her bday😆

Besides,I can never comment as long as she n Marie does in our group😉😆

Originally posted by: ACTywm

Oh gawd yes u r...yes I know who is who...so sorry Fati...I meant to write Fati...but dunno how I ended up writing Shifa...I guess cuz I had just wished Shifa on her bday thread n then came on to upd here...i wrote her name instead of urs as she was on my mind...sorry...n lol shifa its ok...Im happy even with one liners...If I'm greedy for anything they r comments onmy works be it a line an emoticon or an essay...as it tells me what one thought...so I love all comments

Originally posted by: Deepa876

Hello, I came across your ff and have read all the chapters in one go. I just love the story and love your way of telling it to us. Waiting to read more & more of this wonderful story.

Originally posted by: Aish002

hi...found this ff thru ur index, ven i read ur reply to my comment on i wont divorce u...😊

and i read all the chappys in 1 go...after reading the 1st note of ur's in this ff...i thot u ver gonna make khushi a modern gal or smthng...glad to see you kept the essence of that character, but made her quite diff too...

her emotional breakdowns at various points ver written beautifully...the way u write is very clear and it was like watching a tv show..cos of the sequences tat u hav in this ff..the dialogues that u gave for each character are very fitting...love payal in this one..and khushi's family and aakash reacted in a very natural way to her disclosing the truth...

loved how u tuk those incidents in ipkknd..like khushi's entry into the fashion show, the broken down building, arnav fainting, nainital trip...and sort of weaved these into ur story in ur own style...some scenes were pretty comic too..the one at hotel ver khushi hits arnav vth her bag...😆

Anjali's breakdown at chetan's accident was very realistic..shyam is back..isnt he..oh...pls give him a thorough beating at the hands of arnav...😃

p.s: I usually read completed stories..except for those of arnd 3 authors..who I get PM for...I might not comment on all the updates...but pls do PM me ven u next update...

AND one big question - why is it that each chapter has so few likes...u write really well..I love this FF...😊...

IMPORTANT REQUEST!!

FOR THOSE WHO HAVE NOT YET COMMENTED ON THIS CHAPTER AND WISH TO, PLEASE DO NOT COMMENT ON THIS THREAD BUT ON THE NEW ONE AS WHEN THIS THREAD REACHES PG 150 IT WILL CLOSE...THANK YOU...LINK TO NEW THREAD IS BELOW.