||~ TaaRey Os : Subhanallah ~||

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heyy peeps... its toshi here... shocked?? aaj itne din baad posting something more senseless?
This time i am back with a new oneshot... for my dearest and best dii.. lachu diii.. truly dedicated to you.. and isko padne ke baad dont maaro me.. mai to delete karne wali thi.. but 1 month ka wait jada ho gya so posting it finally..



TaaRey OneShot : Subhanallah...
the return of khadus and musibat...



Friends for life. This is what they used to call themselves. But the sweet and sour friendship when turned into love they never realized. No one realized. So let us take you to their world.. to the dreamland.

They are my life. My cutely weird little sister and my calm yet tough best buddy. Hey readers its me swayam here. Don't be so shocked that this possessive and' all right all right' over possessive and protective brother is narrating the love story of his sister and best buddy!! Yeah.. its true and mind it I still feel awkward talking about it. But I couldn't resist this time. god knows why'

I still remember that day'

"Taani!! oh god why are you being so hyper!! You are going to a new school for the first time and not for any holiday package trip!!"

"oh maa' its will be so much fun!! " and she jumped again across a sofa, thrilled and excited.

"she is totally weird and cute. Right maa? Usually kids make a hue and cry out of it but she is jumping like a monkey right now." I passed a small hearty giggle while getting ready. I think I was in 9th class and she in 7th.

She is still my dear weird sister' I remember the day very well. That was the day I met with my buddy and my taani met with her ummm' love.

She was rushing at her full speed towards her class and 'bhoom' she smashed into a kid and fell down. That was reyaansh. A new kid too, same age as that of taani yet so different in attitude and behavior. He got up from the floor and forwards his hands to her. Very sweet gesture isn't it? And there came an angry glare. she shoved his hands and got up, went behind him and 'thap'. She had dropped her foot on that boy's foot, a big boy who had pushed rey towards her. Rey's jaw dropped down. And mine too. I stepped forward to protect her from those mischievous and rowdy boys.

"don't you dare do this again!" she hushed up inside the class with rey following her in shock.

"why did you hit him? he is so big!!"

"so?? I wish I was a little big you see! Would have slapped him too! He pushed you, was enjoying it and you are here defending him! huh!!" she twitched her nose, showed her tongue and left him flabbergasted.

"Is she mental? Don't tell me she is in my class!! Oh god kya musibat hai!!" rey was dumbfounded.

"couldn't utter a simple thankyou or even a sorry.. ugh!! Khadus!!!" she murmured under her breath.

So that was how they met. Cute aren't they?

Time passed with their small senseless fights and when they became friends no one realized. Their friendship kept on growing with utmost trust and soon they were the best of friends.

And how can I forget that day' farewell of my batch. They both were the cupids of my life.

"go bhai!! Tell her!! Why are you all guys so boring!! And obviously so coward'" taani gave a short laugh.

"heyy!! Boys aren't coward okay?? We are far better than you girls' crying on every small little fuss. Crybaby.." rey replied irritatibly. They started again. Who will say they are so close buddies.

"crybaby?? You calling me a crybaby??" she gave a light punch on rey's shoulder who caught her wrist and said,

"who else? It was you who were crying when your car was took by the security guards because of no parking zone. You were afraid of that penalty!!" rey was smiling remembering the scene.

"heyy!! I didn't cry because he took my car!! It was because I was late to watch Hritik's movie! And actually missed it. You very well know! Don't try and act smart."

"I don't need to act for what I am. Okay.. I AM SMART'"

I hid my face with my palms. God'why do they always fight at the wrong time and at wrong place. It a farewell and most importantly I need to confess!! for god sake and here they are pulling each other's leg.

"stop it!!" I shouted. "will you both help me? Or shall I leave?" I was highly irritated.

They both nodded in unison with a tinge of innocence and in a moment dragged me to the hall, to my surprise' beside Sharon.

"now speak up!!" rey hastily said.

I was dumbfounded and staring taani, rey and Sharon one by one. Both have extra brains I think.

"come on bhai!! Ahh' okay' Sharon don't let him go until he speaks his heart out. Anyways you know better right?. Bye bye!!" both the naughty and clever heads winked, all amused left me to come up with my feelings. And finally I had my best day.

Hey hello!!! Don't you think we aren't here to narrate our love story? What?? Stop umm.. drooling like this here swayam!... God! now I am continuing. Anyways you won't be able to narrate anymore after all the bhai mode is on now.

Hey everyone. Its Sharon here. So our love birds never realized their love until they entered in college. The most handsome and dashing fresher of college was reyansh singhania whereas the charming heartthrob girl of college was taani shekhawat.

As he entered the class, each girl went flat on him, and why wouldn't they? His strong physique yet those calm and capturing eyes, his hair ruffled yet looked so clean, could make any girl skip her heartbeat.

As she peeped into the class, she was caught into every pair of eyes, the beauty of her smile and naughtiness dripping from her eyes, her silky hair smoothly hanging up to her waist could blow away senses of any sane boy standing there.

Girls were staring rey with a o-shaped mouth whereas the boys couldn't blink after there sight caught taani. The atmosphere had become so awkward, jealousy was now emerging out in our rey and taani's heart, that too without the realization, how amusing isn't it?

"hi gorgeous! May I know your name please?"

"hi' its taani.. taani shekhawat! And you?" she passed a sweet smile out of courtesy and for a new friend indeed.

"its harsh here' so umm.. friends?" "Obviously!!"

Rey kept on looking from corner of his eyes swiftly looking over the surroundings, anyone could make out his discomfort and it went noticed.

"are you okay?"

He looked up to see a girl staring with curious eyes, he was caught.

"Yeah... I am all fine." He forwarded his hand. "reyansh singhania' and you?"

"its janny here'" she smiled sweetly.

Gosh that was the day, when everything went topside down or we should say the beginning of a budding love. Out of the blue they both started behaving so indifferent and amusing, fighting like cats and dogs, jealous and irritated. Seeing a new friend with your closest buddy irritates you but more than that it hurts if it's your love. Three years went past by, and there stupid baseless fight didn't seem to end. We need to admit, even janny and harsh, taani and rey's new friends, could see the emotions which always kept emitting through their eyes whenever they fought.

It was the prom night and basically the last day of college. We had dropped them to the venue together but both didn't even look at each other. So badly were the dying in envy, little did they realize what this heart pricking envy meant and led to? They entered the hall together though making faces and rolling their eyes whenever their eyes met or you can say they were staring each other from the corner of their eyes. I wonder where did they buy so much ego from.

Anyways... some moments passed and music started, bringing them out of their trance and staring session. Fortunately or not, they were pushed together by their fellow peers on the dance floor with taani crashing on rey's chest, clutching his shirt over his well built torso, in turn he softly yet possessively caught her waist.

Two souls drowned in each other.

Ek din kabhi jo khud ko tarashe
Meri nazar se tu zara haay re
Aankhon se teri kya kya chhupa hai
Tujhko dikhaaun main zara haay re


In an instant they plunged out of the moment, curse the surrounding. Rey lifted his brow and taani shook her head.


Ek ankahi si dastaan dastaan
Kehne lagega aaina
Subhanallah ah ah ah..

Taani kept her arms around rey and he pulled her closer moving with the soft rhythm of their heartbeats which were speeding up rapidly.

Jo ho raha hai pehli dafaa hai
Wallah aisa hua
Subhanallah
Jo ho raha hai pehli dafaa hai
Wallah aisa hua

Rey swirled her slowly around and pulled her back, like will never let her go away.

Meri khamoshi se baatein chun lena
Unki dori se tarife bun lena
Haan meri khamoshi se baatein chun lena
Unki dori se tarife bun lena


Taani kept her forehead on rey's chest while he hugged her possessively leaning to her head.

Kal nahi the jo aaj lagti hoon
Taarif meri hai khamah khan
Tohfa hai tera meri adaah

For an instant they realized their surroundings and pulled out themselves, feeling a flush throughout their body. Their eyes wandering everywhere except each other, as if scared in being caught by the arousing emotions.

Ek din kabhi jo khud ko pukare
Meri zubaan se tu zara haay re
Tujh mein chhupi si jo shayari hai
Tujhko sunaun main zara haay re

But they couldn't hold back. A smile played on there lips as they stared and drowned in each others eyes. Rey ruffled his hair with a big grin while taani let out a chuckle with her eyes grounded.

Ye do dilon ka vaasta vaasta
Khulke batayaa jaaye na

Two souls moving in rhythm with their heartbeats in synchronization feeling a renowned emotion but this time it had a name.

Subhanallah ah ah..
Jo ho raha hai pehli dafaa hai
Wallah aisa hua..

Subhanallah ah ah..
Jo ho raha hai pehli dafaa hai
Wallah aisa hua..

Subhanallah ah ah..
Jo ho raha hai pehli dafaa hai
Wallah aisa hua..

Subhanallah ah ah..
Jo ho raha hai pehli dafha hai
Wallah aisa hua...


As the song ended, rey caught taani's wrist pulling her out of the venue to the parking slot. The breeze was calm, like it was happy and overjoyed with what was happening in its presence. After looking here and there, finally rey said,

"hi'"

"hii..?" taani crossed her arms.

"umm' actually.."

"what actually?" taani was enjoying.

He saw she was enjoying, so it was his time. He stepped closer to her. "actually.." he said huskily.

" huh.. wha.. what.. actually.." she stammered, feeling butterflies in her stomach.

" I was saying'" he was walking closer and closer.

" what.. were.. you.. say.. saying?" she finally collided with the bonnet of the car.

"today even musibat looks gorgeous.. " he pulled her closer by her waist, letting a shrill go down to her spine.

"musibat?" she hit him on his chest with the most amusing angry glare. "you were a khadus and will always be' huh!!"

"so what' musibat is always with khadus." He smirked and pulled her closer; she shied away with their proximity.

"musibat knows how to blush? Woah!!" he let out a chuckle near her earlobe.

"heyy.. I am not blushing okay?? Don't forget I am still your best buddy!!"

"really??"

"yes!! Got that??" she pointed her finger towards his chest.


"yes i got it..." he pulled her into a bone crashing hug, kissing her silky satiny hair. " love you so much my musibat..."


"love you more my khadus.." and she gave a short peck at his heart, engulfed in his arms.

and it started raining... subhanallahh...



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so here i end this idiotic oneshot... i hope ab is sade se os ke baad aap muje maarne nahi aa rahi.. just to say i love you my best dii lachu dii...
and to all my dear buddies... itna jhilane k liye sorry... i am so grateful ki aap logo ne ise pada...


so its toshi here signing off for now...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Jab kadoos n moosibat ki baat aati haina,sade naam ka sabd bhi intrsting ho jaati haišŸ˜†
n itne tym ke intezaar ke baad finally I got to read dis..
n I luved it..
d way u potrayed d story was tooo tooo gud..ā¤ļø
n isse kehte hai intezaar kar phal meeta hota hai..
n luv u for dis awesome OS on my fav song..šŸ¤—
Edited by Lachu_taarey - 12 years ago
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Res :)
~Unres~

okay well i'm 3 months late in unres'ing -_-
solly...

but i must say, the OS was brilliant! i wished i had read it earlier :(
it was so cute! Taarey's fights and how everything turned out. and Swaron confession šŸ‘

and How Dare You call it boring?! 😲
it was amazing!
loved it alot!!

muaah! was just as amazing as u šŸ¤—
u write so well... u should write more pagal -_-

lots of love ā¤ļø
Edited by ..Shanae.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res/unres
Omg ya tu paagal ho gyi hai ya mein i dont know par itne pyaari aur beautiful os likhne ke baad mein tujhe sirf hug de sakti hun so ajašŸ¤—i dont think khaadus aur musibat ki yeh kahani issey jyada cute ,sweet aur amazing ho sakti hai...mistee the way you potrayed the whole story was the best thing for mešŸ‘...taarey ke nok-jhoks awwšŸ˜† and song squeence was PERFECT😳...it was indeed a beautiful and amazing os dearo...love ya for this😳
😳😳
Edited by rakhiankita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome OS toshita !!šŸ‘šŸ‘ Specially loved the part where they were fighting with each other while they were supposed to help swayam out with Sharon.šŸ˜† šŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome os
it was cute nd very sweet totally loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really Cute OS Dii !! Musibat and Khadoos Ki Kahani !! Awww !! And I loved Sharon and Swayam narrating the Story ... Dii, The way you write really sounds so natural It just Beautiful !! And The Song really Subhanallah !! Really Really Loved It !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing OS..wow .
swayam narrating taarey love stry...amazing idea...šŸ˜†šŸ˜†possesive bhai bechara...taarey meet was awsm...and then thier cute fights and frndshp...
then sharon took over swayam's place...amazing...
taarey jealousy and fighting part was awsm..
at last d song and taarey confession...haaye lovd it.

gr8 idea of swaron narrating d stry...swayam's beginning wrds were 🤣

mind-blowing OS...keep writting more.
😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb OS
Wow and wow!! Its shocking that possessive bhai was narrating Taarey love story in the beginning lol
Aww Taarey are too cute, I love their awesome confession...
U did a mind blowing job, I love it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb OS .. šŸ‘ šŸ‘šŸ¼

it waz vry difficult 2 digest .. dat swayam waz narrating TR luv stry .. šŸ˜†

TR wer really vry cute .. 😳 .. n der cnfession .. aww .. ā¤ļø

thank u 4 d pm .. 😊

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