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Shweta

@2111_shweta

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Cute OS

Loved it a lot

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annie

@patie

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

It was really cute Toshi 😳 Good job 😃

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kriti094

@kriti094

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

this was damn good

loved it to d core

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Alefiya Magar

@alef_mgr

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Awwwieee ..! They are my fav. khadoos n musibat wowie ..! Keep writing dear ..!

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Soumya

@.-Soumya-.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Awsum OS di
It was so cute n adorable
N their dance seq was cute
N the highlight was that khadus n musibat part
N swayam the possesive bhai n sharon r describing their luv story wow
Thanx for PM di

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yashi

@--taareylove---

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

awesome os Toshi lo ed it so much

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Ishani

@.StarDust.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

It was outstanding... Goshhh.. First... I chuckled when.. I got to know that Swayam was telling this story.. and still.. he was feeling akward.. Lolz.. Possesive Bhai.. Okay! I loved it yarr.. Their first meet.. Awww... Then, the fights.. Like No End! Gosshh... They reminded me of Tom & Jerry.. Seriously..Aww.. Then, prom night.. Loved it.. the way they were talking.. Ohh.. MY MY.. I was blushing...smiling.. dun know what! N your writing style.. Gal.. I am still in the dreamland.. Loved it!!

Awesome... Keep writing.. Take care and Love You! <3

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Nikita

@--coco--

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

It is such a beautiful os, I love your description, your version of musibat and Khadus is also really nice.
I was shocked when Swayam was the narrator, I thought , how will the POSSESIVE INDIAN BHAI narrate his sister's love story, but he did it well and thank god it was taken by Sharon at the right time , or else all we would read would be the various ways in which Swayam would be plotting to kill Rey 😉😆😆

"heyy!! I didn't cry because he took my car!! It was because I was late to watch Hritik's movie! And actually missed it.

Even I would cry for that, Taani I can understand how it feels

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-.QTPie.-

@-.QTPie.-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

it was awesome...
a truely new concept and the musibat and kadus part was awesome...
swayam narating his sis luv story...
this os was freakingly awesome...
loved it yaar.
thanx 4 the pm...
loved it...
keep writing...ur a good writer must say that...

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Shanae

@..Shanae..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

i unres'ed :D

after 3 months -_-

(1st page, post 2)

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