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nee

@march2011

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#531

hope tht mysterious guy is none other than arnav

arnav story really made me cry,i believe arti is really a brave girl

loved it

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raniluvsasr

@raniluvsasr

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#532

Hey thnxxx fr d pm,
loved d update.
Beautiful and emotional. Feeling bad fr arnav mum past. Excelllenttt.
Keeep updating.

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Deepa

@deepa.e

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#533

good update!!!

Cool one!!!

Nice use of words!

Please cont soon!!!

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Sidda

@Sidda8

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#534

Fabulous update. It was heart wrenching to read about Aarti's shattered dreams and life. Poor Arnav suffered so much to reach his current status in life.

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sphobic

@sphobic

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#535

Tthat was an emotional and a heart wrenching update.
i really had tears in my eyes while reading this update.
arnav had so dramatic past.i really feel sad to read such stuffs.
feel really really bad for arnav's mother.i think in such cases the
family members of the victim should give the support they
very much need at that time.
and in my opinion the family members who dont support are
more worse than the person guilty.

i m really confused after this update.i m not able to came
to a particular conclusion.
why i feel like you have revealed everything yet revealed nothing????

And then there was Khushi Gupta, who he has no idea what to do with, as taking out his anger on her was not giving him the satisfaction he had hoped it would. Khushi ShashiNaath Gupta has been nothing but a provocation since he had spotted her in that meeting four months back. It was indeed a miracle
that he was still sane inspite of seeing her everyday, he thought bitterly.

after reading the above para i feel like arnav has some scores to settle with khushi's father and i feel that just becoz arnav has used khushi's middle name (father's name) here.

She also 'knew' that her beauty was only skin deep,
because from inside she was as bad and as imperfect as one could be.
The appreciation that was coming her way from her colleagues, though gave her a high,
it did not change her long standing opinion of herself.

the above line really confuses me,whether SHE has done something or its becoz of her BLOOD line she inherits, she thinks this way??? and i think the later one's possibility is more.

Whatever it is that he wanted from her,
she knew she was going to give it to him.
Always had. Save once.

after reading this line i have only one question.
whats that one thing khushi has declined to give him????

if arnav is dong all this to take revenge from his father
than i think khushi is not aware of all this at all as in the first
chapter u have stated that khushi is unware of why he behaves
so rudely with her.

so the conclusion is that i really cant conclude this chapter.😆
there are many questions running in my mind and i know to get the answer to that questions i will have to wait for the future updates.😆

so a sincere request plsss update soon.😊

Love!!!

Edited by sphobic - 12 years ago

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padmakrishnan

@pokemonian

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#536

I don't know from where khushi comes into the picture?

pls update soon yaar

why arnav hate her so much?

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Snoowfall

@Snoowfall

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#537

please update soon...this is getting more interesting...

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karsvinu

@karsvinu

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#538

Looks like he knows her...his past here is different very bitter...how she connected to him we will know soon😊...right now everything is layered n interesting...

Hey A! did u send e-mails this time..i did send you an e-mail from my account (kartikim@gmail.com) if you didnot receive plz add me.

By the way dont know y i feel that you are a guy not a gal...i have read a lot of stories from IF all gals...but from MKM I i always thought you were a guy...weird😊...not that i mind even if all writers were guys😉 😆...plz dont take otherwise...just something i thought..i always wanted to tell you this.

Love

Kartiki.

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Priya

@Crazy_soul

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#539

So thats what made arnav singh raizada bitter.his mother was truely a strong willed women.
Omg whats arnav going to do now?.

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#540

Hmmm.. interesting.. I think I posted a comment earlier but not sure, so here goes again...

Very interesting and very different from your other FFs. I know you don't really write dark stuff but this has ominous signs of being one.. or maybe thats what you intended the impression to be just to surprise later :-)

When Arnav dragged her away, my first instinct was that they have indulged in a sexual relationship with no strings attached for Arnav..maybe in return for something that Arnav did for Khushi or some action of Khushi that impacted Arnav and this was atonement, which is why Khushi feels she is inherently a bad person? And Arnav calls on that relationship as and when he feels the urge and despises her for that.

I hope I am wrong cos I am not sure i am up to reading a dark FF but I will trust your story cos so far I have enjoyed every single thing that you have written. Put the doubts down to age, cynicism and tons of dark FFs that I started to read and then discontinued cos frankly there is enough crap happening in real life, don't need to read that as well in a fan fic :-))

But I am digressing and for that I apologise...

I did feel sorry for Arnav, terribly so but some of that got diluted by his behaviour with Khushi. A tortured past like that should make you strong enough to be empathetic (which he obviously is with others) so what ticks him off about Khushi?

Shall wait to read the next chapter..

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