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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 3 was awesome...
Wonder what happen between them in past...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Read it in one goo

I m in love wid ur dis cncpt

This is called pure love for which she sacrificed dere relationship for his better future widout thinking of herself

The way they lived wid dere past still mvng ahead in life was smthng i really appreciate

I loved wen arnav still felt jealous or anger watever name we give for khushi seeing her in other guy arms

The way she told the truth and he trusted her and tried to take her out of the shell she was living really attracted me.

I really loved ur ss

Thnks for writing it
Edited by Barun_Gf - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I just love how intense this story is!
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Posted: 12 years ago
I have lost the count as to how many times have i read this story...I have no words to describe what i felt..My vocabulary is limited so i will do my best conveying my feelings about the story... When i love a story, i tend to leave lengthy comments there by putting the author to sleep...hope u don't mind😆 ... The story is so gripping and very beautifully written... the character descriptions... their words...dialogues...actions...their every emotion, expressions were beautifully captured... when i read the story...It was as though i was watching it happen right in front of my eyes...never once did i feel i was actually reading it... Not once did i have to go back to read to understand what actually happened...I was so lost reading the story that i became unaware of my surrounding... You have a very fantabulous way with words... I'm so glad i came across this story though it happened after the story ended... I'm sure i would have been restless for your updates had i caught up with it when it was on going... It astonished me that just by reading comments on your other story led you to write this spectacular piece...MY GOD!!!! That's ... I'm speechless .Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story with your readers...

I'm here to give you chapter vice comments...or else i won't be satisfied till i pour out what's on my mind...

Hope you don't mind


Edited by mastermagician - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


Chapter 1


An interesting start!!! The very first para gave me an impression that all is not well between Kushi and her boss... Kushi ignoring the sympathetic looks shot towards her by the employees...why though? Was her boss that horrible to her? yes indeed...she could neither inhale or exhale...it was as though she was holding her breath as though even her breathing would get her boss to erupt with anger...was it so suffocating? My mind buzzed with the same question...why? She had to learn the hard way of behaving in front of her boss...The flashback sort was very pitiful. He found faults in every single thing she did or uttered. Why was Arnav Singh Raizada all out to lash his anger over her? when he was the fair an nice boss to he rest Kushi was an exception.what did she do? When he found no fault..He looked forward to finding them... as there was still rest of the day remaining . Was it sort of a grudge he held? Or is it something else?

Loved the way you described both of them Arnav a very successful accomplished lawyer...Kushi his secretary...

The very moment he saw her he hastily got her transferred as his secretary thus marking the beginning of Kushi's torture... This sort of implied that they both had a past...which was revealed later in the story... The rest of the stall thought he was marking his territory...but were proved wrong...but I think in a way he DID mark her as his territory

It was good that Kushi didn't give away a single thing to the staff rather kept it to herself...(personally I prefer people minding their own business)

Felt very sorry for Kushi's state...why did that man hate her so much? And a question nagged me that why was Kushi withstanding this torture? Why couldn't she just quite? She was very capable of finding a good job and she shows full dedication to her work... It all came down to her brother...For his sake she is taking in all the insults ASR threw at her...and with her brother's treatment in mind... Kushi is ready to face anything...even ASR's behavior...

Her own guilt justified his actions? What is she so guilty about? What did she do to ASR that she is readily facing his insults? It definitely had to be something big! And she was the reason behind his anger... When I finished up with chapter 1...curiosity was at its peak!!! So many questions...and I was desperate for the answers... A very awesome chapter!!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow this SS is really very touchy and I am in love with it 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsmm storyy read in a goo dearrr
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just found out this story of yours. It was fabulous as usual. Arnav's past was very sad and what khushi did to him is still mystery for me but it is surely very well written.
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey there...recently read this story. It's very well written I feel. It's heartbreaking to think of the pain both of them went through for eleven years. I do not really approve of Khushi's decision to keep her problems to herself. There are two people in a relationship so they should both get a say in such a big decision. That being said, I still understand what dilemma she went through...she didn't want to be the reason of his unhappiness. she probably knew he would give up his dreams just to be with her but she didn't want herself to come in the way of his dreams. so she did the only thing she could, she pushed him away. It takes an insane amount of strength to do that.
You have brought both their perspectives beautifully. How they crossed all hurdles and how the overcame everything else just for each other; their love being their biggest strength.
Loved reading it!! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey, such an awesome and different story..., it is always feels so gud to read ur stories. coz ur stories take us to different arshi world with a real feel n imaginations.
since i am not a regular ongoing story reader, i only read completed stories, but after reading ur completed stories its worth to wait n read ur stories.
keep up ur good work, all d best for ur future ventures.

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