ArHi FF: The Same Coin#1

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Enchante

@Enchante

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#751

I have read countless hate-turns-to-love stories. Countless. But their charm never wears off. My heart invariably lurches when I see A and K making way towards each other, one unfurled secret at a time.

Also, hats off to you for making me curious about how you untangle the mess between the other leads. That seldom happens to me. 😆

Witty and quirky. I like. Oh, I like. So long. :-)

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#752

This update took me back to my college days...ahhh...how I miss those days.

Friends, fun and frolic😆

NK's predicament was fun yet s true...while girls stress about not being asked out on a date...guys stress about asking girls out...Good to see him working up the courage so that it puts few confusions to rest.

Love the way Arnav is learning more and more about Khushi and he is teasing her ... first step of flirting...yum yum😉

That was beautiful ballet scene you wrote. Could visualize Khushi so vividly, from her dance to her clothes to the way she pulls down the soversized t-shrt and packs the gym bag...You are a very talented writer and I'm really enjoying the pace of your writing😊

Edited by AquaSandhya - 12 years ago

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harsha

@harsha..

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#753

I can totally understand Khushi's dilemma. Sometimes we do something just for our pleasure and not for the world to know.

With Arnav knowing her secret it is going to get even more interesting. He will keep her on her toes. It will be fun.

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Hawa1997

@Hawa1997

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#754

Awesome update!!

So Arnav found about Khushi's ballet, but why doesn't she want anyone to know about her dancing??

Love it!!

Thanks for the email...

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arshi21

@arshi21

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#755

This is SO college.

What Khushi is feeling is SO real...well..you've described it really well.

It all starts with an uncomfortable feeling about something which we think is inconsequential.

Whoever says that liking someone gives a happy feeling is not true I guess. It becomes a happy feeling overtime.. not instantly.

And Arnav is playing Khushi when he should be apologizing to her! Hahaha! This guy.

I am loving it :)

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#756

Cool update...it makes me nostalgic about collage days..the chances i lost, the fun i missed...living those days once again on my terms through your story...lol..I am waiting like Arnav, to see Akash goof up everything and Khushi's- Arnav's flirting..I know it will be coming...

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Amrita

@Amti4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#757

beautifully written...

So, Arnav saw khushii dancing... aww...

Akash and NK... whenever I read about them.. I cant stop myself from laughing thinking khuhsi kya haal karne waale hain...

Update soon...😊

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nlr_nlr

@nlr_nlr

Explorer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#758

A full filmy update !!

NK does know Gham atleast the modern version of it 'fevicol' 😆

This is completely your fault ... Don't stop your updates because of it !

Nlr

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Phoenixrises

@Phoenixrises

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#759

Lovely update. Does this mean even NK doesn't know about Khushi's ballet? I wonder why she's being so secretive... And I so knew that Arnav would be the first to know about it and that he'd stumble upon her dancing skills. The next update sounds so exciting. Continue soon. Can't wait for the next one.

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AASHI

@aashi_taichi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#760

It was vry enjoyable
arnav loves animal dt z cute
want to really know akash reaction wn Nk would ask La out n really akash z going to gv a hard fun time waiting 4 it
arnav now knows her little secret hope he won't exceed more at having fun why khushi wants to hide her talent n wat does she wants to say preeto (i liked their convo n ofcorse preeto) Z it abt arnav r little secret

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