ArHi FF: The Same Coin#1

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#721

nice update.. waiting to c how Arnav apologizes to Khushi..

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#722

Wow...Guptas secret safe with Raizada...but I was thinking khushi would notice a smitten expression on Arnavs face had he not concealed it...and as they r in their final yr...when will things start warming up between them...paving way for some love n romance...they r still poles apart ...only comming to know eachother very little...

I know it's only third chapter...n I seem so impatient to see ARSHI together...can't help it... But storyline amazing...and so is ur writing skill...

WAITING FOR NEXT 3DAYS TO ARRIVE FAST..

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#723

Halo was my little girls's solo in her ballet class this year. She's 6 and I was wondering why the teacher picked this song for ballet but it has so much emotions in it and the movements were perfect for the lyrics. Sorry for babbling but the point is I could so picture Kushi's dance moves to this tune especially since she understands the words unlike the little 6 years olds. When you are in tune with the lyrics and the music, your movement become fluid and passionate. To witness this, would have been quite a treat for Arnav. Why does she not let anyone know about her dancing? It is clearly not a confidence issue. Anyway, I would have thought he would be the one with Kuch Kuch Hota Hain after watching her dance but our heroine seems to be experiencing this uneasy feeling. Loved the Skype conversation.

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mysticmanthri

@mysticmanthri

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#724

when you said khushis dance classes are done without any ones knowledge it was sure that mr raizada is the first one to tumble on that but it was not anywhere i have imagined you wrote that really great ...humor awkward teasing everything wow!

now looking forward to see akash being made fun of and wish that khushi do it out front 😊

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#725

Gupta's secret is out with raizada to leverage..
Wonder if Raizada as any secret in exchange??

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crazy-ash

@crazy-ash

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#726

Awesome and hilarious!!
Kabhi khushi kabhi gham?! Lol
wedding gown?! For NK!? Lol
so, arna v knows abt khushos lil secret...wonder how is he gonna use it to bring her at the edge!

And akash...!! Oh, cant wait to see what it will be when his sweet lil bubble will burst! Poor boy!

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bungeejump

@bungeejump

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#727

Loved the update! So now he knows about the ballet and he is seriously going to have some fun at her expense! And Akash! Haha... he is seriously going to get it if Khushi finds out what he is thinking! Waiting for the next 3 days to go by soon!

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#728

I am grinning again, as always you left me quite amused with the whole chapter. Khushi's interaction with NK the K3G reference, Arnav and V having their fun at Akash's expense. Then there was the bonus section as always too damn hilarious and this time with our new character, you outdo yourself each time Ma'am!

Let us move on to my favourite part of the chapter and that is the encounters between our lovely Miss Gupta and Mr Raizada. I always wanted Arnav to somehow see Khushi dance, it kind of took me to the scene in Dil to Pagal hai.( Yeah I am kinda filmy that way :P) They keep surprising each other, aren't they? They have wasted so much time being each other's enemies to notice the good qualities of each other. Arnav likes mature girls and doesn't find anyone date-able in campus? Has he forgotten about a certain Ms Gupta😆 Perhaps he knows he doesn't stand a chance there, I still remember the wonderful line he used in the previous chapter that is even if she thought he practiced being an ass in his spare time, he wasn't actually doing that!😆 I am loving the progress in their equation, all credit to you Semanti! You create perfect situations and dialogues to go with them with such ease that it is not funny! Seriously how do you come up em?

My countdown to three days has already started, bring on more of Ms adorable Gupta, Mr Smarty Pants Raizada and Mr Drama Queen NK :D

PS.Hi5 for being a night person, I pull off all nighters all the time! On the other hand Mornings is another story all together!😆