ArHi FF: The Same Coin#1

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sochanatha

@sochanatha

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#161

besides both of their never ending charming factors you have made ASR a footballer -who is a striker and uhhmm..gets his shirt off in middle of match and Khushi a Ballet dancer!!! 😲
didnt you just kill us with that!!!
ahahahahahah... what an entertaining detention period that was!!!
and NK n Lavanya!!!! too good...
this is gonna be sooo exciting journey -im sure...
waiting already... :))

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#162

Loved it!! Oh the fight was crazy, I know they hurt each other, but it's crazy that it dwelled upon, they just took it in stride! I wonder if things will have to get worse before they get better!!!

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vks11

@vks11

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#163

I am so excited to read your story.

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sakhter90

@sakhter90

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#164

That was great! They love arguing and riling eachother up! So they are both into fitness. Khushi with her ballet and Arnav with his football.

Wonder what's cooking in Khushis mind now.

Do continue soon

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Preethi

@blackdove

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#165

Awesome chapter...

Gosh they fight a lot...

Whats Khushi gonna do???

Do continue soon !!!

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#166

Hey semanti, loved this chapter. Gosh they do fight a lot!!! I cannot wait to read further and thanks for the email.

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mbbsrocks

@mbbsrocks

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#167

waaaoo loving their cat fight..

they are sooo same LOL

and what khushi has come up with??

wondering ;)

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#168

Wow,,they both really fight...unbelievable ...the best part is going to be when they get attracted to each other...that's going to mind blowing..if they can fight like crazy, imagine what happens when they fall in love..l.

Your writing...Brilliant...as always!

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Iqra

@Iqraimran

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#169

khushi is ballet dancer with her nose pin and colorful cloths

Kaya nd Nk have very freshing relation...love their convo especially about football and being shirtless after winning match 😳

how arnav khushi touched each other most sentimental nerve? are they know each other before the college?

to whom arnav going to say sorry? Why he explains Khushi to her mother?

is there something between we don't know Semanti ?

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pmpm1

@pmpm1

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#170

Read the prologue and the first chapter at one go. Awesome! The college setting sometimes leads to juvenile fan fictions, but yours is anything but that! I am loving it just as much as your other works.

Arnav and Khushi hate each other so bad kind of hints at the fact that they are attracted to each other, which even they themselves are not aware of. And the dumping water on each other's head was so classic IPKKND - just loved it! Can't wait to read on and find out what Khushi is planning. You have given us a glimpse of Khushi's thinking. Would love to read Arnav's thoughts as well...