ArHi FF: The Same Coin#1

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Anukriti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

Hi semanti,

Well the title itself blew me away. And what a torturous punishment prof sharma gave them. They cannot leave a chance to get a hold of each other's throat and he asked them to keep quite. Third Degree torture!!!

Both of them think so high of themselves and think that the other one is arrogant and pretentious. And nose pin, never thought a day would come when Raizada would comment on a nose pin.

NK and Khushi bond i look forward to

And arnav's mom is berating him on fighting with Khushi.

So from your title it looks like they were childhood friends or should i put it 'sworn enemies since childhood'

great update. Can't wait to read more

i have a qostin too what all subjects are arnav and khushi studying.

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Awesome update Semanti, absolutely loved it! The whole tension between Khushi and Raizada is intense. their little intelligent debates and arguments is super amusing. I couldn't stop cracking up about Khushi's nose ring and outfit disturbing Arnav, he even admitted not being able to focus as those bothered him.😆 Brilliant stuff ma'am, looking forward to more!

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Oh the First chapter is out - Iam so so late - lemme read now
Thank u semanti

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Wonderful wonderful update semanti
Loved it dear
Excellent start of a story

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Hot_Chocolate

@Hot_Chocolate

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

i m here on SEMANTI's thread for the first time commenting...!

semanti u are sachi an wonderful writer...believe me..i adore ur writing style...i so wish that i can write like you,,no, no, donn think that i write,it just that ur style is so perfect so unique...i read ur stories carefully always focus on words and wonder that from where u brought such words...! always ur writings mesmerise...be it in tales,,,,the letters of love,some parts of raizada(i had still didnt read it whole😭)...!

the character u use and then u play wid them,,,hats off...arnav and khushi here..they are just awesome...there verbal spat...the way they argue...its like...sab mere samne chal raha hai...i am some ARHILAND...!

then u literally swoop me away wid u arnav,,,the detention spat rocks...!their haterd..which i want to find out how convert in to love...!

arnav as a footballer...! i m imagining a shirtless,dripped in sweat arnav here😳..!

khushi..secretely a ballet dancer...like i am seceretly a arhi phangirl...!!

N.K the support system,,,and still to find out who is V...!

please continue...!!👍🏼

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

A brilliant start, loved the first update.

The update was amazing and awesome, written exceptionally well.

Arnav and Khushi are officially mortal enemies, there arguments are so intense.

Loved the part when they were in detention, the poor teacher not knowing the reason behind there hatred towards each other.

Loving NK and khushi's friendship, NK advising Khushi that Arnav is not as bad as she thinks and also thought she might be coming out of the closet as she does not fan girl over Arnav.

Wonder what Khushi is planning on doing to get her revenge, is she going to write her next assignment based on Arnav's behaviour.

I did not get the part where you Arnav overheard, what did he overhear khushi's plan?

Loved the update, a brilliant read.

Eagerly waiting to read the next part,

Continue soon please and thanks for the Email xx

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

Jeux d'enfants certainement! They are acting as children arguing over everything even in detention! It appears that they simply get on each other's nerve for no specific reason - agree to disagree. Wonder what they will do if they are teamed up for a critical assignment, one where maybe a third of the mark will be given. They both are top students, will they forsake good marks for their child play or actually work together to succeed? It sounds like something is cooking in her brain at the end - something evil?

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namita11

@namita11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

Very very interesting. ...
Can't wait to read thw the next update

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 12 years ago

#149

omg... they fight worse than kids... waiting to read more..

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Itu

@simi58

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Posted: 12 years ago

#150

hehe arnav and khushi was hilarious.. poor prof. sharma..😆
aye hayee NK and khushi best frnd.. loved their convo and the easy going relationship ..😃

i am loving this sarcastic side of khushi.. 👍🏼
wah trained ballet dancer.. tht's surely new..👏
hehe aneurysm after seeing khushi?? seriously? 🤣
i absolutely love it how u always portray ur characters.. Just tooo awesome.. 😎
can't wait to see wht idea khushi came up with and how arnav reacts to it..