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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aanya84

Opps forget to tell u plzzz write on maaneet


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once more thanks 😳
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THANkz dE@r😳
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THankzzz dear😳
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ok
thanks dear😳
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Part 1


(Hi guys🤗, I am back

Wait guys inta uhcal kiu rahe ho I am not running anywhere😆

Phele Kuch tho hello sello tho bolo only I am saying: p😛

I know guy's u all r eagerly waiting for the story ab bakwaas band, Hey u all know Hindi na, becoz here will many words in Hindi, even I don't know that much Hindi but I will use here all my little knowledge 'A little learning is dangerous thing'😆 and lot of Hindi movies name even I didn't see many of them just Google it, so let's begin with the story of)


'ROMEO+LAILA'


Once upon a time (is this too much old, not at all guys this is 21st century story, y every time prince and princess stories should have once, this is my story it should always hattke, so I prefer once) 'Once upon a time in a Mumbai' in a hotel a big ceremony is organized children are dangerous mood running here and there, punch anyone, broke anythingnone will say anything, as if they r out of prison, full freedom, and elder r busy in their gossiping for them mast place because they need a place where they can backbiting, cursing, bitching each other names 'this boy is having affair, that girl run away with boy all this nonsense stuff'( it is their personal matter, y do u have stuck ur nose on it, can't u mind ur own business) .One more thing without the food ceremony is nothing to them eating and cursing a good combination. For what reason the ceremony is there they give damn 'food should be good'.


(Whoops I forget to tell u what ceremony is going on, ok, ok) Engagement ceremony is going on where too lovey dovey couple just bonded in engagement and in a few days they will get married what more they want they will become better half forever.(hai, main marjawa, kiski nazar nahi lag jaye in dono ka)


The boy intense gaze on the girl(OMG! Don't give that look, if u give look I will also fall) and girl is blushing like hell all the colour visible on her cheeks cherry, tomato, rose(agar inta blush blush hona hi tha than what is use of makeup, huh!)


And top of that he is not leaving 1 chance of the situation to tease her she is giving look people r there 'kuch tho saram karo.' (hai!)


He slightly bends to her ear whisper 'Saram! Ok really! Shall we go corner tab dektha ho kaun jada besharm ho jata hai If I become 1 second late to take off shirt u became sherni' (ahem!☺️Ahem! ☺️Oh God both r not less then one)


'Ha!' Girl mouth full 'o' shaped give smacked his arm and hides her face on his chest


'So what do u think, shall we'


She is looking at him awe is he serious or what


'Don't give me that look or otherwise I will eat u now' (guys have some shame, can't u see people. Oh actually people r busy in eating, so no problem continue)


(Hey guys! Something is burning *sniff* guys seriously something is burning *sniff* *sniff* guys not food something else. oh shit! I forget to tell u sorry sorry, actually burning smell is coming from the two corners, guys bring water, ice, or call fire brigade or otherwise his hall will burn with their gaze)


'Ek ladka Ek ladki' both are burning in fire becoz they are unhappy with this engagement and top of their romancing is working like adding a fuel in the scorching fire. (Y they r unhappy? Wait guys I will tell the reason inta jaldi kya hai, just now story started)


The male is standing in the east < & other female is one the west > (guys don't get confused with east and west, for me its east & west and for u right and left, c simple)


They both stop the waiter took the soft beverage glass & drink it in one gulp jaise koi 1 shot hai & again they took one more glass and waiter is looking them at awe. (Hey guys this is not club, that u r drinking like 1 shot)


'kya hai' both said in angry glare waiter nodded nothing 'toh mera moh kiu dehka rahe ho, mera samne se daffa hou' (y u r shouting on becaras, if u drink like everyone will stare like this)


Now male start walking to west > and female start walking on the east < (guys don't u think opposite kuch attraction jada hota hai na, like magnet)


'How she can do this 'ek ajnabee' se engagement kar li' male said angrily


'Exactly how he can do this, I am his childhood best friend' female also said angrily(hey guys with whom u r talking I can't see anyone, agar ase hawa se bath koroge toh log tumhe pagal keye gah)


'dou din bhi nahi hua usse yah aye huye' boy


'Or mera jayega ley liya' girl


'ase khabhi nahi ho sakta I know her better than him, everything' boy


'Likes, dislikes all things about him, mujhse behatar koi uska liye' girl


'Hoie nahi sakta, wo 'bazigaar' tara a jaye'


'And she will take him from me, never'


'Never ever this will happen, I will never let them become 'life partner''


''tell me oh Khuda' what I will do now'


'Chill dude'


' y u r getting hyper till now they haven't get married so we have time, so' female gave devilish smile and looked up ''Oh my God', thank u thank u'


'God tussi great ho' male looked up (stop! Stop! Hey u boy, u girl, Guys listen! Listen to me once, yeh to gaya, guys close ur eyes, whoops!)


*BAM!*


(Isshhh guys how many times I tried to warn u but u didn't listen to me, if u look up and walk this will happen, look guys I am giving u free advice, if I take money so u won't listen to me, from the next how much u got excited don't look up and walk so next time be careful.


eeeOk guys, m leaving


Y u r giving me that look


So small and u can't leave us in cliff hanger just say the name of male and female


'Nahin Nahin, Abhi Nahin
Abhi Karo Intezaar'
if I tell u everything than who will listen my bakwass from next time huh! tell me tell me,


So for today this much, guys pakka next update will be before going vacation, I will tell the name don't be cohhh sad


U know na I can't see u sad


'Chal juta'😆


Jut hi sai, just a little bit smile, 😃yeh hui na baat,😳 now ur turn do I have to say every time comment and press the like button.


Fatima❤️)


PS. Hey dearies, don't take anything by heart, many things I wrote just for fun, nothing else.Help me with movie name 😆


Disclaimer: This is just a fiction. Any names, characters, occupation and places of residence, incidents are all my imagination. Any resemblance to any profession, any similar scene to any other fiction or actual events is purely spontaneous.

Edited by fatima_FM - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
Yippee me second ( actually first thi but while typing the comment I lost my dear position
Will wait to grab the first position in ur next update )
But I can't type nicely yaar I am literally rolling over my bed reading 😆😆 this
O my god Fatima seriously yaar 😆
One suggestion plsss apply for a comedy show yaar
this piece would your masterstroke 😆
Hahaha the way used the names of bolly movies was brilliant .i am just awed At ur capacity to imagine something like this 😆😆😆
I think ur right side of brain must be working very hard😆 ( was revising my biology lesson and remembered right side has the things to do with ur creativity )😉
Now back to the update I don't have words to put down as I read this masterpiece of humour 😆
Nahi nahi nahi abhi nahi broke the last string yaar and led me to laughter land
Seriously dude how ur brain encounter with such idea kuch kuch hota hai ye pad kAr😉
Vaah life HO to aise ( Fatima these are the names of Bollywood ( Hindi ) movies ) . Romeo laila jaise 😛
Jahapana tusi great HO 😆
Waiting for the next part 😃
Thank u for the pm 😃
Love aanya😃

P.s the graphics are so cool even they added their humour essence to the update
Specially the first one ( where the guy is ready to punch )
Edited by aanya84 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
Lovely and hilarious 🤣
thanks for pm
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
lovely dear

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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
Wow yaar. Bole toh mazedaar thi update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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NICE START
LOVED IT
LIKE IS BOT WORKING

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