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TH@nks DE@R😳
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Originally posted by: JCJS

This was hilarious like really khushi is too much she and her pranks crazy women. Thks for the pm dear.


khushi's craziness. UFF!!😆
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Lol...Both r crazy...
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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

their fight regarding romeo was so cute.eagerly waiting 2 know hiw they'll introduce as u hav already hinted that it wont b usual romance



haaa!!! 😲u have guessed it 😆
writers can only understand the hint😉
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Originally posted by: RajeevGurtiFan

rocking update dear sorry yaar my like button is not working..


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Part 6

(Hi Guys

Still u r thinking about the name

Name ki bare be baadme soch lena, abhi in dono ka bare toh soch lo

Wait!! Wait!!

Let me tell u a joke

I am sending 140 pm only getting 32 likes and comment r also less than that

R u kidding me Guys?

Ok out of this few r writers who don't read and few r busy with the exam and life, and rest of them!!!

I really want 2 know what the problem is?😡

Because I have combine 2 shows lead characters but guys I am giving more importance in only 1 character dear other character I am showing is very less, u can't write whole thing with main character, their r require some supporting character

Or becoz of hindi guys😕

Than I can't help u in this, reason if I translate whole think in English than full will mess up

Or guys u want mushy mushy love story without fighting🤔

What kind of story do u want? Or the story is too boring😒

I really want to know reason? Plz let me know the reason

For U guys this whole thing to read only takes few minutes to read but for me it's not that easy I am writing, adding emoticon it's difficult and takes time.

And now about the PM

For those who is silent reader seriously now not anymore guys, I will send pm to those only who is commenting in my updates

This time I am really serious if u send me thousand pm and request me plz plz send me pm

Then sorry dear, it won't work unless u comment

Now it's up to you guys

I really don't want to make your mood off with this note but I am really upset with your less response.

For my beloved reader I am really thankful😳 to you guys your each and every comment make me smile😊 whether it is one word or sentence seriously it just bring smile on my face and I tried reply of your comment

Now let's start story😊)


Arnav introduced himself 'Hi, I am...'Before he could tell his name but she cut off him


'I know, I know' she clapped her hand like and childish smile on her face as if she got the answer of 'kaun bangega coreorpati'


He chuckle at her childish behaviour.


(Guys wish him best of luck!!!😆😆 becoz she know the name😉)


Then she said 'u r going say 'Mr. Natwarlal' isn't it?'

In a snap his smiles vanish in the air. (Oh GOD! Mr natwarlal, Agar natwarlal jaise naam hoga hoga to hasi ase-hi uor jaye ga)


'No' she looked at his face expression horrible 'than 'Amar Akbar Anthony' he he 😛' she smiled


Still no change in his 😡facial expression 'than only 'My name is Anthony Gonsalves''

His face is Redding with anger.

'Ok, ok, inta red red jab ho rahe tho than only one name suit 'Lal Baadshah'' (If his face turn yellow than pila Baadhsah' )

He gritted his teeth and going to say something but stopped by Khushi


'Ok, ok, now I got it, latest kind of name, isn't it? Like 'Tom, Dick, Harry' hai na?' her expression is just priceless

She is using her little brain and trying to figure out 'but they r deaf, dumb, blind but u r deaf, No, u can't be deaf, kan to billi ki tara kahre hai, dumb, umm hmm, muh toh scissor ki tareh chalte hai, aur blind' thinking about the bumping incident 'andhe toh tum ho no doubt at all' after figuring out all the conclusion ha she clapped 'haaah, 'Harry Potter''


(I wonder what is Arnav condition😆, becara ki hawa tight ho gaya hoga)


'Harry Potter can do magic with his wand & could solve his problem, but you can't. Ur condition is like 'Devdas' becara, sad sad, at the end he died' she is on the verge of cry just thinking, ending scene of the movie. (I am thinking; how Arnav is tolerate this torturing names🤢)


Before she could utter 1 more single word, Arnav clutched her mouth tightly, hinder her from talking 'chup, bilkul chup' (chalo chup kara hi diya😉) 'stop this naming session, ok' She nodded her head

In mentally he huffed 'thank God, 'Chennai express' ki tarah chut rha hai rukne ke toh nam nahi leh rah hain'


'Arnav, Arnav Singh Raizada' he said huskily


She is still like ice staring at him; he didn't take off his eyes from her(hai mai marjawa )

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'Hmm, umm hmm, hmm' something interrupts in his intuition, he looked at Khushi, and she is giving look take-away-ur-hand-from-me.

Instantly he back off from her and tried to avoid eye contact.

'Ok Mr Romeo, whoops Mr Arnav' Khushi bit her tongue 'so now ur turn'


'What?' in astonished he said😲


'Guess my name, my name is very simple not like u' (maybe he is thinking this girl is really mental, 😕she need a physiatrist)


'Wow! What a Gr8 idea?' He said with big smile😃. (Huh, he😕 is smiling I think he also became mental with her🤢)

Khushi became very excited

Than he shouted angrily 'main tumare tara pagal nahi hu, jo eh name guessing guessing game kalo'😡

Her happy expression changed into pout .


'I know, I know u can't guess my name, y don't u accept ur defeat' she pouted her lips like kid who didn't get chocolate.

'What! Defeat I am not doing a war over here that I will accept my defeat, anyhow I win always' (waise tum dono war se kam nahi karte ho, jaha jate wo wohi suru ho jate ho)


'Oh reallyeee' she said with famous smile her show all the white teeth gritting


'Yes reallyeee' Arnav said sarcastically gritting his teeth


'Than say my name' Khushi is adamant

(may be He is thinking kah fass gaya yaar, guys don't u think this Arnav office is less and Khushi's man mani more) 'So Miss Laila u r challenge me, huh! ASR huh! I will make sure, in future u will never contradict with me again' he mentally swear

Khushi raised her eyebrows asking what and smirking

Arnav thought 'jitna hasna hai, hass lo miss Laila kiu ki ab ASR tumare hasi ko urane wale hai'(I wonder what he will do😕)

Arnav start proudly 'ur name should be in genius world record, no no in a big big poster, isn't it?' he spread his arm ''Mother India' hai na whole world would be proud'


Khushi expression is 'O'


'Mother India se jada 'Chameli' jada suits u jo half of time chickni chemeli ki tara apni makeup and beauty salon may busy rehte ho'


'nahi, Chandra mukhi' should be perfect jo screw dila hai, kahbhi masakali masakali ki tara without wings also wants touch the sky, or sometime Sheila ki jawani I am too sexy for u karke u make dance everyone on your fingertip, and khabhi khabhi toh Baabli Badmash banjato or badmashi office main bhi shur ho jate ho, hain na'


Khushi is sitting like dumb,😲 she doesn't have a single word, and Arnav is trying his best not to laugh 😆at her priceless expression.


'Wait wait, haa 'Umrao jaan' is correct jo Anarkali disco cali ki tara ma-tak ma-tak ke chalti hai' (ma-tak matak oh God🤣, how Khushi is sitting so peacefully) he didn't give single chance to open her mouth.


'wait wait, ur name should be in history book every school student should be known u as 'Jodhaa Akbar' who is every time ready for doing' Kaug fu Panda' wou haa' (yeah exactly, every time she is punching and knock out mood)


After finishing he took a deep satisfaction breath and mentally hi-five himself for victory of making her mouth shut.

(Romeo kuch aur baki yeh kya)


After few seconds Khushi opened her mouth 'Waise, I always think Y my parents didn't keep such name, there r so many hit movies and songs' she coolly speak.

Arnav jaw fell down ; he was trying to insult her and here opposite reaction. (chal toh kud per hai bari par gaya😆)


'But 1 thing u forget to tell jelabi bai, jelabi bai I just love sweets, chocolate, ice-cream, it so yummy' she closed her eyes relishing the taste of this food unknowingly making seductive sound 'hmmm'


Arnav thought 'Does this thing she has to do in front of me' (becara Arnav, I🤣 am thinking how he is controlling himself)


'MISS KHUSHI' he shouted her name.


Khushi jerked out 4rm her thought 'I know my name, I am not deaf, u r shouting like that, and do u have disease of shouting, jo baat baat pe chilate ho'


'I am not accustomed to it, u r da only making me to do that' He growled


'Oh reallyeee' showing all the teeth


'Yes reallyeee' he also did the same


Khushi mobile start buzzing and attend at call and suddenly she shouted out of the blue 'CONTRACT'.


Khushi looked at the time 'Oh God, I am so late, all becoz of u Mr Romeo'


Arnav is 'O' expression.

She again bang! Her hand on the table and give him killing look 'If I didn't get da contract, I don't know what I will do 2 u' she said gritting teeth with a dangerous look 'I ...I...I will surely sue u'.


Swiftly She took her sack & open the door sudden something hit her brain she turn back again 'wait, how do u know my name huh! I haven't even said to u, u have put detective behind me na, if I find that ur detective r behind me, i will break their bones(guys Knock out 😆 she can't change) and u too also gone'.


Shut the door dhoom! (becare door🤢)

Arnav took a peaceful breath 'this is a girl or item bomb , first she came to my office distract my meeting and telling everything is my fault , she only told her name to my receptionist and now she is asking me how I know, Oh God'

(Guys I think Arnav is finding a wall to bang his head LOL😆

Till he find a wall to bang his head

I am going

Wait!! Wait!!

Some HOT HOT NEWS
I am going to start another story

''Sugar 'n Spicy''

This story i got inspired from my own story 'Romeo+Laila'😆

If i get good response to this story seriously i going to start the new one

C a

Fatima <3)

Disclaimer: This is just a fiction. Any names, characters, occupation and places of residence, incidents are all my imagination. Any resemblance to any profession, any similar scene to any other fiction or actual events is purely spontaneous.

Edited by fatima_FM - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
The dialogues r so funny.I laughed a lot.hats off 2 u 4 these dialogues.Their guessing names was hilarious.i cud imagine d scene

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