#2 thread of Arshi FF:- My slave,My family

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_laraib_

@_laraib_

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#381

omggg this was justtt awsomeee arnav actuallyregret his mistakes n hopefully khushi will be fine soon cant see khushi like this :(

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@BlueBloodQueen

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#382

After long time we got up date...

Arnav trying his level best to keep khushi happy...

Poor khushi ...she is not in her sense...

Awesome up date...

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someoneipk

@someoneipk

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#383

A very beautiful and long awaited update of my favorite story...

Arnav's gestures are nice, but nothing is enough for this broken Khushi. A rapist can never cure his victim, can you please make them apart ? Arnav can give more priority to the cure of Khushi and the build up of her self-confidence, distance is sometimes necessary for future togetherness.

Please don't take my comment too strongly, its only a suggestion. You are the one who will decide the course of the story.I will always like whatever you have planned for us.

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@nidhu18

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#384

Awesome update !
Arnav is repenting and trying his best to bring Khushi back.
The dream was just beautiful written .
Welcome back we really missed, thanks for the PM

Edited by nidhu18 - 12 years ago

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shivanie

@sweetvanie

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#385

I've been missing this FF alot and now its back ... Love the yupdate, its heartbreaking, sweetb and cute in its own way ... arnav have got a long way to go and when he's gonna read of her past and what use to happen to her in the orphanage, i wonder what he's gonna do ... Thx so much for Update and PM ... Thx Zana for posting it ... can't wait to read the next update now ...