Os Vrushan : Kiss Sequence (part 2 updated)

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

divya----i liked the writing itself and the concept of actors feeling awkward----

but are you sure that doing this stuff with actual actors is good? i mean---this may not be looked upon as very decent by mods by dragging actual sctors into it?

anyway, you are my buddy and i dont wanna see ya in trouble.

lovec your writing though.

love---medha

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Aww it was really cute
Update next part ASAP
I can't wait for it

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Rohan :)

@RoHaNmAlHoTrA

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

hey...now dat was awsm...truely...waiting for the next update...update soon

Rohan 😊

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anandita

@blooming_angel

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

hehe...!!😆
wow..superb Os..!!😉!
just loved it Divya di...!!😛
ur amzing...😳
thanzz for the pm...
🤗🤗

Edited by anandita - 12 years ago

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sneha singh

@swaron9113

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

I editd my cment on pg-1.

Aj he deep di ke speech suna to socha unres kr dun ni to tm logo ne likhna chod dia to mere band bj jayage.

@deep di-was kidding don't be seriour. 😃

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Mihika

@Legilimens.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Cute os. :) I loved the fact that both vrushan have feelings for each lther and got fidgety while doing the scene. Really well described feelings..Please continue it and give a proper ending with uh maybe confession? :)

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Divya

@Winter_Falls

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: medhasarkar
divya----i liked the writing itself and the concept of actors feeling awkward----

but are you sure that doing this stuff with actual actors is good? i mean---this may not be looked upon as very decent by mods by dragging actual sctors into it?

anyway, you are my buddy and i dont wanna see ya in trouble.

lovec your writing though.

love---medha

hmmm may b ur right...ill take dat into consideration next tym... 😊 sorry...i did nt realize it before.. 😔

nywaz thank u.. 😊

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Divya

@Winter_Falls

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: swaron9113
I editd my cment on pg-1.

Aj he deep di ke speech suna to socha unres kr dun ni to tm logo ne likhna chod dia to mere band bj jayage.

@deep di-was kidding don't be seriour. 😃

tubhi na Sneha... 😆 nywaz i read ur comment...thank u... 😃