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Posted: 12 years ago
If he is the sunshine she is the moonlight! - Chapter 3

Now feel like I am home and on my favorite chair ...feeling so at home! thank you Juhi for writing this!

This chapter brought out how both have started affecting each in so many ways, both thinking of the past and the impact it has had on them...
He seems to hate her more so now am more intrigued about what happened...but I do remember my note...

He is getting so dependent on her and he does not like that, she is stirring up emotion and thoughts that he does not want to have...he wants to be able replace her like his original plan but his she is becoming indispensable to him and he is annoyed with relating that word with her and his mind thinking about her is not helping his cause.

I liked how he brings up the fact that something did happen 10 years ago, between them..So he thinks she needs to apologize for what she did and all she says in response it that they had agreed no to discuss their private life...hmmm!

So Shyam makes his appearance and even though on paper he is perfect there is something about him that Khushi does not like..even though she cannot put her finger to what it is..a vibe he gives off !

I love how they work together and she realises that she is attracted to him...this is getting really interesting...and he too, and he never fails to notice the colour of her saree and the impact of her in them!

I like how it irks him when she decides to sit in front with Mohan the driver rather than at the back with him when he offers to drop her back ...the rain, the taxi strike and her tyre punctured, nice...fate is pulling some string here I see!
I like how he leaves no chance to rile her whether is about her feeling she is not able to cope with the work pressure...

Love her astuteness and her mind, she knows her subject well...

I liked how he felt relieved or something knowing that she lived in a safe area ...
Loved how most of the time he does or react to her naturally only to remember that he has not forgiven her for the past...]

I just know that his decision to go to the US for what he think is a money wasting thing, but is protocol is going to rest on the condition that she accompany him and as soon as I post this I am running to check if you have revealed it...


Edited by vandana.sagar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Updated comment on page 114...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 2 - Awesome 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
fantastic story...loved A/K banter; what's the secret of 10 years ago...can't wait to read more...

-Sona
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just back here...the beginning...
Edited by vandana.sagar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
prologue & 2 chapters.. this story has kept me totally hooked on.. 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ok. So I was finally ready to get shattered like the rest of the forum wasis 😃. .. But what I didnt expect was for my emoshuns to be pulverised while reading just the prologue 😲. Haila Juhi, tusi great ho 👏👏. Khali prologue ne hi meri nerve endings ko bhi shatter kardiya 🤪. What bhill hayepen while reading the rest of the ishtory dan 😕??? Aur kuch bole beghair Hum aage ki aor badhte hain 😛
I missed this yaaraaz. 🤗And as promised, this is the 1st one after my looong breakwa... 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ctwqa3QCwMw[/YOUTUBE]
Heard this and the first thought I had was to remember Shattered. No relevance to the words, but just the name...
Edited by vandana.sagar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
^^^Ummm speaking of Shattered M thinking whether it is a good spot to start a new petition! A petition for J, she must not deprive us of her great writing skills, she must not deprive us of reading more of her FF's/SS/TS!

Yeh dil wants more of her writing
For it will make IF a little more exciting


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