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Posted: 12 years ago
very interesting update..well written...waiting for the next part eagerly...continue soon..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow...Lvly...aag to dono taraf se hai...
Again a cliffhanger...what the !!! *pouts*
I will have to wait till Tuesday na...feeling restlesswa...do updatewa soon...pilij.. do give us a
brief description on their past...
Am curious... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: LooneyLuna

Manisha.. Thanks!

I don't know what to say? Or what i did to be on your Phan list..but I am totally flattered :)

Luna



Thanks to this stupid show IPK which created characters like A & K has got such wonderful ppl together on one platform and has inspired people to write brilliant stories...much better than the show writers...I know virtual Rabba vey happening here...😉

there are a whole lot of gifted people, but I am presently following only juhi and NB...and now semanti too...
And to say the least I am addicted...and hence I have restricted myself to only 2-3 writers coz I can't take this disorder any further...
While I am working on a business presentation I am tempted to shift page to IF to check if the green signal is on...

Coming to the point, Luna I like your detailed analysis of all the updates tempered with humor...so u make me smile and laugh...and I just wanted u to know that...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Just started to read this Ss & I am already in love with your Wonderfull work...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice 😊 thanks for the pm 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
This story is simply riveting. These two string characters, coexisting while hating on each other and fighting the corrupt political system together with glimpses of mutual attraction and admiration is so fascinating.

Of course I am so bothered by the prologue and the past...the big white elephant in the room that no one is talking about but always being alluded too.

I am really proud of this Khushi, she has such will power and control of herself, her emotions and her reactions.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just read the prologue and part 1 and am simply blown away by your writing, the clarity, your characters and concept...it's so riveting. I do like the political background !

I was so engrossed, also found it intriguing that your prologue is dated a week after your chapter 1...so want we read in chapter one happened before the prologue it's going to be interesting to read ahead and see what happens from now on , given their mysterious past which has been painfully and a life changing one for both, were they married to each other,? There is a reference to her using her adoptive parents name these days...which is the reason that nani does not know about her ...
Memories that they are both running away from, his anger and intolerance towards her, her resolve to remain professional and continue doing her job which she knows she is good in..and worked very hard for ...

I loved how you wrote about his version moving to the US, his life there, deliberately choosing something that he is far away from his family's influence ...loved the thrill he gets from the action sports it's like his way of saying he has nothing more to lose ..so has no fear and is therefore able to face danger the way he does...fearlessly!
Loved how its not nani or Akashs pleas and requests that get him back but his guilt of abandoning everything and running away...he owes nani a lot...she has alway been their support and his...
Khushi is not less traumatised by the incidents either, and successfully put in all her energy and focus towards her future... Trying to overcome what happened ...studied hard, and her dedication and ambition has finally brought her here..

But the events of the prologue , what is going on in Sheesh Maahal that is is a part of but does not seem to be so happy about?
She senses something different about their relationship like she is ready to give it another chance, she has read his signals ...or she thought. I loved her anxiety and anticipation ...for once thinking of just that moment...
I love how she noticed him leaving and noticed his absence and her devastation of what she sees in that room! Sheetal and Arnav...something is amiss!

But no more questions...just going to sit back and enjoy your story like I always do...
I am thrilled that I have finally been able to do so...it's like I am home!

I just hope what I have written makes sense or it will be the fault of my over excitement and me thinking faster than being to type!
Edited by vandana.sagar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Both in different directions...chapter 2 loving the names too !

So I typed out half of my comment and lost it! So here is the 2nd attempt...now really loving the feeling of coming home...thinking why did I not come home sooner!?

So now reading this part, I feel maybe not married but were going to be married and then something happens to make her runway ? But something shattering enough for her to run...maybe she even regrets how things happened a bit?

Note to myself- this is Juhi's brilliant mind, don't try to second guess the story and what happened in the past...just enjoy it without trying to figure out...remember her previous story about the fireman man Arnav...!

Ok that said...hoping I can stick to it...but whatever happened is traumatic enough for her to call La in the middle of the night ...unable to sleep...( loved La as her friend cum Bhabhi...married to her brother NK, adoptive parents son? ...) and La feeling once NK gets to know about Arnav being her boss might want Khushi back, making her quit her job...despite her being excellent at it and knowing how hard she worked for it and her willingness to keep it from her husband...also loved Khushi from telling La that does not want her keeping secrets from her husband lest they should face any problems due to her !

I loved his realisation that as much as he enjoys his adventure sports the feeling of thrill and excitement he feels and the way his heart and mind race ...talking and being with Khushi give him the same pleasure...a very very positive sign ! And a hug for you for that!

I love how despite the past she is mature enough to handle him and her job with professionalism and dignity and is not quitting and running away but is ready to face the past and move ahead...
Loved her retort about the ministry not being handled by someone who jumps off mountains for a living...she has a sense of humour and is witty! I like!
Also loved that Arnav has realised that she brilliant at role, her perceptive, sharp analytical mind and astuteness as asset for him and that he will be silly to fire her ...her adept understanding of people and the politics involved in politics... he has come very far from where and when he wanted to fire her without even giving her a chance...
I loved that though he is angry not finding her in office and unable to trace her and even though a tiny part is looking for reasons to justify his actions, the moment he sees her praying and the serene expression on her face, and is forced to pause and not interrupt her...and loved that his focus of anger shifts to himself for waiting for her...to finish...and at her for believing ...still... not being a believer himself...for the past 10 years !

Am a bit surprised at his surprise about the condition of politicians and politics though...

So Sheetal is his COO and in his absence looking after AR...( loved the name and how here also there is an AR! ) she wants to be more to him ...but not he, he does not want to mix business with pleasure ...or is that just an excuse ..or maybe even if his head feels he should ( she was the kind of woman he dated...) his heart ( not pale saree clad women ) has not yet given him permission as yet...but then how does she end up in Sheeshmahal in that room? And what about the anticipation that Khushi feels about their relationship ...she is also currently business...
( quickly remembering note to myself and not dwelling )

I loved nani and his conversation, her telling him the reality that it is highly possible that Akash might not think himself ready even in the future even after all the exposure and time... for the seat and that hence Arnav needs to face his past and her apology about her not knowing that Khushi was there...Arnav's candid and emphatic response...he will not stay back irrespective, and she fails to convince Akash she can say bye to their political aspirations...his decision to move into his official residence to get away from his and memories ...

I loved how he is questioning himself at reassuring her about her job, but he did value and respect her professional advice...loved how he knew its going to be one more sleepless night...

Not going to dwell too much on the nightmare...remembering my note to self...but there is a wedding, theirs, he has a gift for her...but she is missing and then something he sees...destroys and shatters everything !

Edited by vandana.sagar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry sorry for the late comment. Hope u will forgive me i m busy now-a-days that's y comment late.
Fab update loved it. Two updates thank u so much yaar
Both love each other but due to some past can't accept it
What happen in the sheesh mahal that he hate her so much
Plz reveal soon yaar
Thanks for pm dear i m so glad
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Posted: 12 years ago
Arnav is trying so hard to hate her but he is attracted towards her.
What the mistery i can't guess yaar us some hint if possible.
When u r going to reveal it?
Updates are damn amazing👍🏼

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