ArHi SS:Shattered *Thread One* Completed

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luvraj4ever

@luvraj4ever

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#761

love the little fights between arnav and khushi...the suspense is killing me now...i just want to know the past soonnn...please reveal it asap...

continue soon

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#762

Great update Juhi!

Loved the title of the chapter. "Hai dhoop sa woh agar, woh chandni raat si hai..."

He had entered this place like the rays of sunshine..

A pale crescent moon had risen in the sky behind her, and he thought about how similar they were..

Perfect choice of words - and if I may say, poetry? 😉

He wouldn't allow himself to think otherwise..

She had to make herself believe that..

Both trying to push away the physical attraction they have for each other. But I don't think they can do much about it 😛

Now what's his condition? Is he going to ask her to accompany him? 😳

Loved it! 😊

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#763

And the condition being that you accompany me for this trip...😛

There i said it...and maybe i am so off the mark that when chapter 4 comes along i would be laughing at myself wondering why the hell did i say something like this. *Notes to self* Silly girl you are reading a SS written down by Juhi, how do you think you can guess and you might be right. 🤪

You must be having a good laugh at our expenses...10 saal pehle kya hua. I am grasping at the last straw here, did khushi run away from her marriage which was fixed to Arnav. OK i am clearly going mad here and i can't think straight.

Loved the title juhi but what was best was the way you brought out the differences in them so beautifully. He is the sun and wants to cast his light on everything bright and shine (the changes he is trying to implement and wanting to correct all the wrongs in his place of word) and also burn her up in his light(tormenting khushi the way he knows best). While khushi is the gentle calm moonlight which continues to shine once the sun walks away.

Arnav is clearly starting to get affected by Khushi and he has to keep reminding himself at various intervals as to what happened 10 yrs back. And Arnav did finally host the party at Sheesh mahal as we know from the prologue, what made him change his mind.

As if the questions of what happened 10 yrs back was not enough you are adding new ones to the ever increasing confusion.

Anyway hum intezaar karenge kyonki hame aap par pura bharosa hain...Sachchi. 😃

Edited by kondhili - 12 years ago

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#764

And I forgot to mention about Snakewa Jha.
I'm sure he's slimy here. Khushi doubts him on what grounds? Something that made her uncomfortable to say it infront of Arnav.

I'm so curious to know! :)

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SirenMitra

@SirenMitra

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#765

OMG !!!!!! You made me hold my breath too until Tuesday...

Really loved the update and I really like this Khushi...

Your Khushi made me Proud to be a Woman.

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#766

Superb and brilliant update, simply amazing.

Update was written exceptionally well,

Wow, Arnav can't stop thinking about Khushi and she is always on his mind,

Even Khushi has realised that Arnav is a lot calmer with her and his attitude is changing slightly.

Wonder what vibe Khushi is getting from Shyam, is he a perv and Khushi was finding it hard to share with Arnav.

Arnav is going to the states and is going to ask Khushi to go with him.

By the way I would love to read from khushi's point of view regarding the incident that happened 10 years, we knew Arnav is affected a lot but not sure about Khushi has she just forgotten or is she not trying to think about it.

So in my Sherlock Holmes mode, the clues so far are the poolside, a object and now courtyard lighted up.

Loved the update, a brilliant read.

Eagerly waiting to read the next part,

Continue soon please and thanks for the PM xx

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#767

The chapter title depicts the chapter so well.

It's good that he's trying to be professional with her but considering the past they have shared, it seems highly impossible and that shows in the occasional taunts.

They gel so well together even though there is alot of friction between them. Together they are a team.

Khushi's journey has been explained so well. Each step she took.

Despite everything Arnav could not bring himself to leave her all alone in the rain.

Wonder why she has that vibe about Shaym.

Is he going to ask her to come along with him on the trip? But then why would he want her near him when he knows that she's not good for his mental or physical health.

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Amita2014

@Amita2014

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#768

That was a brilliant update!!!!!!!!
Wonder how Shyam will change the dynamics...

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Addicted87

@Addicted87

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#769

As usual a brilliant update...!!!😊

I love how both of them are working together with the same goal in mind... Khushi wanted to bring about change but she didnt have enough power to do anything... Finally she is working with a man, who although doesnt wanna be at the post, is still willing to do his job sincerely and set things right...!!!

They cant stop thinking about each other to the point where Arnav has to consciously remind himself of the past just so that he can continue hating her...n Khushi is trying really hard to not let his thoughts effect her work...

wonder what Arnav wants Khushi to do...??? Cant wait for the next part...