ArHi SS:Shattered *Thread One* Completed - Page 76

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Posted: 12 years ago
What sweet torture...such mystery...such chemistry...in the power of words...


They both...can just see it in each other...


I like biting my nails here...looking forward to the next...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great political and bureaucratic background sketch ...misuse of funds for jaunts abroad is so very common ...
A nice long update --- it's lovely to have enough reading material to sink one's teeth into...
The feelings that both are experiencing seem to be new ...there is no shared memory of intimacy of any kind , or so it appears . Is it safe to assume that their past involved or affected a third party rather than these two protagonists directly ? You've got me thinking ... and looking forward to the next update .
Thnx of the link to semanti's next and for the pm in advance .
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Posted: 12 years ago
An awesome and long update👏👏
i just loved it how u showed how both arnav and khushi can not deny the pull towards each other. Both are not being able to realise/accept tht its more thn physical attraction and at the same moment can't deny tht they r wht they want. Both professional goals and of crs their ideals match.
uff the shatir ASR is leaving no stones unturned to rile up khushi.. felt bad for her..And yes just the name SMJ is enough to give us bad vibes.. I truly hope tht idiot doesn't create ny more MUs between alrdy 'nafrat pass ane na de ' --faoed arshi.. and works as the unintentional cupid he always was in the show..😉
knwing asr i can pretty much guess he wants khushi to go with him in the trip.. me excited..
I really hated the fact tht apparently Arnav hold khushi solely responsible for wht hpnd in the past. And khushi didn;t even deny it on arnav;s face, she just avoided it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
she knows too that he hates her the most...
both of them are drawn together for reasons they dont seem to have a say
well thats very interesting then what was that in prologue you have written such a brilliant prologue neither we know who saw whom nor we know whats was happening downstairs was that the party arnavs nani was talking about then what the hell wrong with arnav this seems all twisted but i do trust your ability to deliver this kind of stories and trying to rein in my excitement since nothing will come as anticipated...cant wait to read more...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Waiting to read more of your excellent writing!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Is he going to askher to come with him...I hope then yaaay
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Posted: 12 years ago
Is he gonna. Ask her to go with him?

Damn I love this twist
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Posted: 12 years ago
Khushi is going to US now I guess! :)
Caught up with the update even before the PM...glad I did!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry Expel,
I hate to res...and I have been so late to comment...its been busy here...
Okay...coming to update...
Each and every chapter of shattered is very gripping...I am really loving this...but then I love everything u write...
I am sorry I will not be very active on commenting for coming couple of weeks...
Take care...love ya...
Edited by mimosa658 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update, hmmm so when will this past mystery be out??

So I guess Arnav will ask Khushi to accompany him to States.

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