ArHi SS:Shattered *Thread One* Completed

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opsyellow

@opsyellow

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#431

I like this Khushi! She is strong and good at her work! She like her job and Arnav start to think that she is good. She wont let Arnav take her down that easily, but thats doesn't let Arnav trying. Arnav is blaming Khushi for his past and Khushi and her family blames Arnav and his family! Because Khushi is worried that her brother nk will ask her to quite the job if he comes to about Arnav! Some big have happened then.
Arnav is successful but all alone! So sheethal works for him and Arnav seems to be impressed with her work and her! So soon she will come to India and give Khushi some reality check about Arnav when khushi start to dream?

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Manisha.

@Manisha.

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#432

I don't think I have felt so involved in any of your stories ever...

To an extent that I imagine myself present as an invisible member in front of Arnav and Khushi as a spectator to the war of words...And thats because you have so beautifully articulated their expressions and body language as well...

I experience a sense of anxiety while reading the story and I am unable to point my finger on any particular reason..probably because I am unaware of their past, probably beacause of the inflammable tension between them...or is it my high degree of involvement...

Arnav has crossed one hurdle by realising that despite their personal rift Khushi is inevitably a boon to him professionally..Atleast for now...Keen to know how they are going break all their barriers...

Khushi on the other hand is like a silent volcano...

Juhi, I can only see endless Nafrat Jo paas aane na de...where is the mohabbat Jo door jaane na de...

And kab hoga ateet se hamara samna...can u please grace us by telling us why are they spitting venom and fire on each other...

And I intentionally didn't talk much about shital...the prologue is scary enough...

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arshi21

@arshi21

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#433

saturday??

Shit.

I cannot wait to learn about their shared past. And I hate Sheetal (Yes, already).. I loved their verbal sparring.

And I also loved how you have portrayed him.

Restless yet responsible.. impulsive yet smart..

And he is handsome? Why don't we have such studly politicians in India?

Sigh.

Anyway..I really really loved the update.

And I just CANNOT wait for that prologue scene to come. Just CANNOT! I want it..bas!

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john-angad

@john-angad

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#434

so arnav cannot deny khushi's expertise! professional respect is there. but can it erase demons of the past?!

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Amrita

@Amti4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#435

So, Sheetal entered the story ...and she is interested in Arnav..and she will be coming to India soo to meet him... which will lead to the prologue..😔...

But, I am happy to see a strong Khushi here... But, I am afraid she is gonna get shattered soon😔

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Uthra

@Viji79

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#436

I literally laughed at arnav Khushi convo on the committee heads, especially at Khushi's jab about jumping off a cliff for living. At the same time I could not ignore the subtle reference the pathetic status of indian politics.