ArHi SS:Shattered *Thread One* Completed

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.caprice.

@.caprice.

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#271

Well, that was interesting to read. In a spate of one month, so much happened that she shifted from uncomfort and hatred to actual disappointment when she saw Arnav sleep with Sheetal? It was Arnav and Sheetal and Khushi in the prologue, was it not?

I would love to hear what is going on here as well.

-Sangfroid

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Aparamegha

@Aparamegha

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#272

Juhi,

Another gripping spell expelling tale from you...the intensity, the mystery, the thrill ..all these elements have been incorporated so well from the very beginning that as a reader the crave and the urge to read more has gone million fold more..

They hate each other but underlying tension clearly states that there is much more to their story than just hatred...what must have happened that have compelled Arnav to leave India and Khushi Lucknow...just loved their interactions...

Arnav as a politician would be a treat to read..

Great story line

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#273

Omg!

Juhi, This was fantastic , adrenalin inducing thriller story!! And June 2013?? U mean this is happening as you write?? Are u like using real characters as muse? Aww, Should I report another case of 'which can not be said for a friend' u know what?? 😉

Prologue- At the end my heart shattered just like KKG.

chap 1- Something happened 10 yrs ago bet Arnav and Khushi. What was it that made Arnav leave the country?? Why so much hatred? The thing happened in prologue, was it intentional on Arnav's part?

Shital-- IPK spolit this name for me 4eva.

Anyways eagerly waiting for next installments. You just can't help the suspense and cliffhangers isn't it?
Well I have already fallen for this story!

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annieK

@annieK

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#274

Politics ? That's a totally new setting and very interesting ...waiting for you to unravel the past .

And Sheetal would seem to be some sort of revenge on Khushi ...I think ...

Great update dear.

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CheshireBilli

@CheshireBilli

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#275

I un-res-ed J.

Heer.

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Crinklez

@Crinklez

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#276

Great update. Very interesting story. Loving the concept.

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spongebobchick

@spongebobchick

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#277

When I read the the prologue I feel lyk I was actually in the room in Khushi's shoes seeing the guy that she loved in the arms of another woman and literally felt shattered myself! (Seriously that was such an epic prologue, reading it I was supremely hooked!) I think the way that you wrote it describing how Khushi had battled against her greater judgment hadn't prepared me for that scene and obviously when the name Sheetal pops up (especially in the IPKKND fandom) you're gonna see red!

Chapter 1 was a great insight into the past (it's hard to believe that one month later the relationship between A and K shifted so much!). It's nice to see a different environment such as politics explored and also seeing and educated Khushi too who's good at her job.

I'm eager to see what happened 10 years ago too... and then seeing how quickly A and K's relationship begins to turn and then falls so rapidly again.

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-DobByDoDgeR-

@-DobByDoDgeR-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#278

Very wonderfully written
Cant wait to read more hun

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#279

Juhiji just unresd my res on page 40...

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Anupama

@Anupama.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#280

Oh! I loved this Khushi who doesnt let pull push pin.!

And an adventure sportsman Arnav who had to take up politics.

The incorporation of the promo was awesome!

One could literally feel the simmering hatred and tension, the 10 saal purana raaz acting as the ghee in the fire.
Arnav gets an unsettling feeling when he see s her in his cabin,her eyes devoid of emotions. Guess, there had been emotions binding them before that 'event.'

Loved it, Juhi! Superb narration.

Edited by Anupama. - 12 years ago