ArHi SS:Shattered *Thread One* Completed

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Pavina

@Pavina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#261

eagrely waitin for u to continue...

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#262

OMG OMG...🥳

Aren't you a day early...

Not that i am complaining...yipee.

Res

Will be back after i read this

*Edited*

Phew...*hai Devi Maiya* kaha se shuro karron

Arnavji who is ACTIVE RISKS owner in the ameerikas and now a kurta pajama cladded Minister of health and Family welfare.

Well i am sure he will rock in both the avataar. 😛

Khushi hamari tigress is an IAS officer, well i loved that the most.

Just one push and pull by Arnavji and our khushiji put him in place with just an order to 'Never touch her again'

And the good old bas also makes a fleeting appearance, you could literally feel the undercurrents that were present through out their meeting.

The way they cut each other with just their crisp words.

But i am still in the land of mystery wondering WHAT THE HELL happened 10 yrs back. 😲

Why did khushi and arnav run away from their hometown. One along with her family to B'lore and the other to USA to start life afresh.

What is this mystery that binds them together. Arnav's parents passed away when he was just 6 yrs. old so i don't even see the whole Arnav's father and Garima angle.

And since its your story i am going to stop guessing and just go with the flow.

An awesome start Juhiji and i can so see Khushi and Arnav portraying their roles so effectively in this genre too. 👏

Edited by kondhili - 12 years ago

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swat.g

@swat.g

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#263

Res

Woah arshi ina political situation..n the undercurrent of hate n something else...cant wait for more

Edited by swat.g - 12 years ago

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vgedin

@vgedin

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#264

Im heer :)

~Edit~

Minister of Health and Family Welfare? WOW Trust you to come up with the most unexpected and amazing surprises! Me is stumped.

Not just that, how do manage to depict the battle and undercurrents in such few words? No unpleasant words were spoken but the war horns are loud enough for everyone to hear. A seething Arnav and Khushi, wow I could picture his trembling jaws. And Khushi's "Bas!"

My favorite bit in the update -

"Are you challenging me, Ms.Gupta?"

"Not at all, Sir. I am merely assuring you that I will leave no doubts in your mind about my qualifications for this job.

Khushi is an IAS officer, I like that! One tough cookie, eh ? Now what happened all those years back? If she was one of those who were wronged, why is Arnav mad at her? Even after all these years?

AR is Active Risks? Hehe, totally fits the personality of the hot headed Raizada boy.

Now waiting for you to tell me more, and for the ped to ugofy 😆

Edited by vgedin - 12 years ago

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opsyellow

@opsyellow

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#265

I cant wait to know why Arnav hate Khushi this much! Even khushi seems to have the same feeling for him but I guess that will change with time!
Is Arnav doing all this things so she will leave her job by her self? Poor khushi! Arnav is in politics is something different and Khushi job seems very interesting if you work with right person and not Arnav!

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Madhumita Saravanan

@madhuishq

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Posted: 12 years ago

#266

Revenge Drama with Khushi just to satisy is EGO making her all or him and betray her :/

Amazing upd!

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#267

awesome update

wow!! political background.. arnav is minister of heath and family welfare😲

well arnav and khushi's present relation is full of hate... can't wait to know what happen 10 years back that arnav literally hate her existence

hot headed ASR and mature and calm khushi..

but both of their ego is huge especially of arnav coz atleast khushi try to bear him but arnav, man he left no chance to taunt her

looking forward for next chapter.. continue soon😊

Edited by jas0308 - 12 years ago

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LooneyLuna

@LooneyLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#268

Res :( 1 page 2 late.

M miss my 69 likes nau...

Ilud expel tfs

UNRES

You have no idea about the self-control I had to exercise to wait and read this chapter so late! Also I am shattered that my comment got deleted the first time, so please do excuse my late-ness. Oh and add to the the 1 hour after reading this story, which left me speechless..and basically all Kya Bolun ab...?!

So I decided its important to let you know why exactly ILUD and I am thankful that you are Back (den loonyness dun!):

1. I really enjoy your title-ation, so glad you are bringing it back.

2. Aman Mathur!! I want to be his chuddy buddy and get answers to all the how's and why's of ASR not wanting to work with KKG. He clearly knows a LOT more than most, so wonder if this is a final goodbye or we will be seeing more of him..

3. Your penchant for trying new stuff and always keeping it interesting: politics..minister for health and family welfare..principal secretary! Tumhe aise ideas aate kaha se hai?! LOL and here I was thinking of this AU to be all gatsbyesque, prediction failure dun.

4. Then there is juhi style of bringing AUs so much more closer to the reel life. Sheesh mahal attached to past memories that he wants to forget..

5. Active Risks, urf A.R. Seriously?! Where else can I see all my SKDs being fulfilled but your stories oh and the captain's OS's (captain, aman, nk, varun = dead thud). An Adventure Sport coordinating ASR. M dive into the gutterz with my scuba gear on ya?

6. There is a POOLSIDE somewhere. bas.

7. I like how I can hardly ever kostin your characters choices..like how easily you justify ASR's coming back to help out his only family. Or the way Khushi cannot leave her job. HM.

8. A mature KKG. Dont get me wrong I loved the KKG of scandalous, secrets and sins even..trying to find themselves in life and all. Par this one is different, and I couldn't be happier. (also you do write great khushi's)

9. What would be a Khushi who doesnt get flustered by half hidden meaningz by a certain ASR? Yet there is something different here..I have my guesses but I am not revealing dem ya?

10. The way you re-do those scenes and add meaning to them, the papers flying everywhere. Not just one scene, most of that promo being incorporated in just 1 chapter.

11. oops I forgot. Pale Lilac Sari. Beautiful and elegant.

12. Oh the new style of dishing good old challenges.

13. Their proximity also gives me the love scene 2, dori pulling pheelz..disconcerting and something more cant put a word to.

There are two things that stand out. How easily arnav suits a neta type role when we enter the press conference scenario. How Khushi's anger finally comes out near the end, boiling point reached.

THEN There are reasons that I dont ILUD at all. Not even a little bit.

"10 YEARS AGO"

Luna

ps. I will make you laugh with my guesses in the privacy of very stalkable scrapbooks. TFS.

Edited by LooneyLuna - 12 years ago

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anumadduri

@anumadduri

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#269

Simply stunning Juhi !!!! One of the most powerful starts to a story ... And it had to be politics !!! I always felt that Arnav was suited for Politics better . The background story between Arnav and Khushi must have something very painful for such hatred from both the ends .

And the best part is you have made one of the strongest and most educated characters ever in a story I have read . I love that . Now looking forward for this story and mystery to unfold amidst a political backdrop .

Edited by anumadduri - 12 years ago