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Posted: 12 years ago

#981

Res/unres
awesome update
m speechless
rey taani ko gift dena chahta hai but taani is busy
simmi and taani goes to meet vicky
that vicky his behaviour is totally pschyco type 😡
taani ke upar acid taani badly injured
rey took taani to hospital on right time
love to see how worried and caring rey for taani
now i want to see how rey going to handle taani with love and care and make her feel special
damn interesting precap eagerly waiting for next part
beautifully written debu
update soon

Edited by taarey_vrimar - 12 years ago

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Aimen Iqbal

@flicka

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#982

debu see who is here to give comment i know u are shocked but here u go whith the comment u missed so much

and now coming to ur edited update really debu that was amazing u really made me cry today i was really in happy mood and now am crying u are right there are sooo many cases of the innocent girls like simmi who are blackmailed and the girls like taani who's life's are destroyed by acids and all and these people are really cruel and they just like hurting people sometimes i think don't these people have emotions and don't these people have families don't they think for a moment if this thing happens with there sister or their wife what will they do don't they feel ashamed of them self's doing stuff's that today girls and women feel unsafe put side the house they have to be in the house early otherwise parents became worried

now enough of all that coming to the update rey emotions were real as he had fallen in love with taani he will try his best to save her no matter what and he felt scared of losing taani after all he got some one he can love and someone who only loves him after so long so his feeling are really true i know now everyone will try to tc of taani and everything will be good

and coming to the next update u know i think rey will try to calm down taani and in one way or the other his little feelings will be convied to taani as he said

"Taani..Taani, calm down please, chup ho jaao. You are still beautiful.. dekho meri aankho mein.."

that will be enough for taani to know what he wants to say but at that stage taani is not in the right frame of mind so don't know what can happen but really debu it was an amazing update and i loved everything about it

u really portrayed it like i am seeing a reality and really i loved it u portray the people like vicky who destroy girls lifes and they are really shameless people and than u portrayed rey's feeling the way u expressed rey's feeling and than simmi the ways she was feeling like she is responsible for all as taani saved her and as taani told her the truth long ago

now coming to my proper comment u know debu as i saw hima commented thought she reminded u of the update u have to give just came to support her so came running

than when i saw the update i was like

than i read the update and rey was finding taani and he was feeling irritated i really laughed at rey this behavior the person who said that every girl just want money is in love and also when he called and tried to talk with her she just went

after that when taani got hurt because of the acid i cried

i wanted to just kill that vicky how mean is he

than rey expression u just portray them really well

and now as taani is getting well and rey will bring taani home my heart become garden garden love u for this at least rey and taani will have time together and that will bring them closer

and the precap was just what i needed and that was what i wanted after the update so

a great applause for u for such an amazing update

waiting for ur next update eagerly

Edited by flicka - 12 years ago

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Prasanna

@PRASSI

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#983

Res!!! Today for sure I'll unres at any cost!!!

Sorry for not unresing my last comment...!!! Today it would be combo of both updates!!!

-Edited-

Hola Debu!!!!

Firstly na main kaan pakad ke sorry bolti hun!!!!

Plzzz forgive me!!!!

U know I'm damn busy mujhe time hi nai milta comment karne ko!!!

Sorry maine pehle res karke chod diya...

I'm so sorry for that...!!!

Now I'll compensate for that!!!

For Chapter 28

U know na I'm always speechless after reading ur updates...!!!

It was same at that time...!!!

It was not at all boring chap!!!

I tell u Debu u r an amazing writer yr..!!!

U portray each and every feeling so amazingly..!!!

N I hate that Elakshi who has changed the lives of two person...!!!

Who betrayed both of them!!!

I seriously dont understand how people feel to hurt two or more people at the same time!!!

Dont they feel guilty for that!!!

Anyways I'm happy that she is now away from Rey!!!

And that Vicky!!!

Aghhh!!! I would seriously love to kill him!!!

I dont understand what he will get by threatening Simmi!!!

I dont understand why these men scare such innocent people...!!!

Now I'm happy that Taani is there with Simmi atleast!!!

Or else many girls r there who r alone at that point of time...!!!

I seriously salute Taani...!!!

And at last Diwali night came...!!!

Over all I loved that update!!!

Chapter 29

I'm seriously speechless and shocked at the same time!!!

I'm also free from all the superstitious things like Rey!!!

How to tell u that it was so amazing...!!!

I loved the way Rey was looking at Taani..!!!

I loved the way Rey was finding time to talk to Taani and give her the present...!!!

I seriously am loving this Rey a lot!!!

And I hate that Vicky a lot!!!

Because of him Taani is suffering a lot now...!!!

Her body is suffering from damage now!!!

I'm happy that atleast she is safe!!!

Now I only want to see that(which I know u would be showing in further updates) how Rey admires her as a person and not only by her beauty..!!!

I guess u will be showing how their love will grow stronger!!!

And mainly how will Taani feel after she sees herself like that in mirror!!!

Now I'm just waiting for next update!!!

Plzz update soon!!!

Edited by PRASSI - 12 years ago

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christy

@Amitz.Gibbore

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#984

...roller coaster updte..nice one...dint expect all this...it is gng to bring them closer?? ya i just thate these vicky typo guys...luvly update of rey taking care of her<3 ofcourse precap is vry interesting debu..excited!! ur writing really gud..upd soon:D

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-GoluGudiya-

@-GoluGudiya-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#985

This was a shocking update !
Like really ! OMG !!
It was a long and fearful ride !
I really can't believe Vicky did that ! Throwing acid 😲
But the thing I loved about this update was Rey
I saw a softer and vulnerable side of Rey which was unimaginable

I'm even more sacred yet excited for the next update !

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Viji.Chandran

@Viji.Chandran

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#986

awesome update debu
ur portrayl of rey ws at its best
wt u hav written in dis update ws defintly one of the worst thing abt our society
i really hope rey stands beside taani like a true life partner n fulfill d oaths he took during his marrg

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rinki

@iheartVD

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#987

di i m luving rey's feelings for taani 😳 precap is taking my heart away 😳 pls update soon 😊

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tharu01

@tharu01

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#988

Omg...u almost mad e me cry 😭...I feel soo bad u noe...the whole story is amazing...love to see where Rey is gonna take care of taani...oh my god seriously it's superb...I love this story more and more...n trust me I feel like killing Vicky. How could he do something like this..thinking of taani oh god...I can't even imagine ... 😭 N ya feels nice to c a positive side of Rey ...

Ur amazing... So waiting 4 d next chapter...I just can't wait...update soon...plzzz. ...plzz...update soon...😊

Edited by tharu01 - 12 years ago

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tamanna-azaan

@tamanna-azaan

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#989

awsum update dear...
rey want to talk with taani but taani is too busy...
what the hell vicky had done...
but i think this will bring +ve thing in taarey"s life...
rey is so scared... u describe rey's emotion very well...
cant wait for next update...
pls pls pls... update soon...

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vd_bigfan

@vd_bigfan

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#990

Nyc update... finally v c rey's care fr taani😳 n taani pe acid i m so hating dis vicky bt i guess dis ws much needed fr d plot to shw d luv n feelings frm rey's side n i m eagerly waiting fr d nxt update... Plzz update soon