#2 Dark TR FF:THLH:move to Thread3 - Page 74

Originally posted by: shikha_taarey

Oh wow!!!! Advance me upda te mil raha hai!!!! thanku thanku thanku sooo much debu dii!!🤗

nahi behena, pls forgive me😭😭
i ll update tom after coming from ofc
pls forgive me

Originally posted by: crazy2012

nahi behena, pls forgive me😭😭
i ll update tom after coming from ofc
pls forgive me

Cant wait

Originally posted by: Favouriteofall

i know i am terribly late in commenting...kaan pakarke sorry 😛

maine kaha tha na ye "Kabab-Mei-Haddi" jaldi hi digest ho jaye gi 😆

hmm Vicky not able to impress Taani in their first meet...by any chance is that because he is not 'Nilesh'...hehehe added that because i kinda find it odd to see Simmi-Vicky pair instead of Simmi-Nilesh 🤔

or may its a touch of reality...Taani did not like Vicky because she is protective of Simmi and wants to make sure Vicky is the right guy for her 😊

hmm Honeymoon to Kashmir...lets see they win or not

i think they need to go on Honeymoon...spending time with each other away from their regular life will give them the chance to know each other better...and it will also help Rey in opening up to Taani

hope that time comes fast when Rey himself brings a gift for Taani

i'll be honest here...even i was thinking it will Rey's love realization

but now when i think of it...Taani realizing her love before Rey is completely justified as per their characterization...Rey being a sadu and introvert guy will take a long time in realizing that he is in love...a feeling he hates the most.

Rey's anti-hero image is slowly fading away...a few more of such kind and heroic acts and he'll get stamped as 'Hero'...i really wanna see the change in Rey's personality after TaaRey confession...you said that this story will end with TR confession so i have a request please write an epilogue showing the change brought in Rey by Taani and her Love

coming to Taani's love realization...we do realize a lot of things when we experience the fear of losing something or someone..saying this on the basis of a personal experience

if i remember correctly in some previous comment..i did mention something like fear of losing your loved person...good to see one of the lead experience this feeling...and this feeling has brought along a beautiful gift for Taani...Realization of Love 😳

this realization will surely bring a big change in Taani's life...most importantly her attitude/behaviour towards Rey...looking forward to see the effects of this realization 😊

Rey expecting a little care and attention from Taani is natural...hope Simmi's revelation about Taani's unexpressed feelings can pacify him

hmm Taani experiencing the famous mind and heart war...but at the end Love Conquers All...i have read a lot of times that sometimes we fall in love with the most unexpected person...and this is absolutely true in case of Taani...Rey has not done any good to Taani yet she has fallen for this man

hmm precap...finally Taani challi sasural

reading Dard-e-Judai reminded me of Sharukh dancing on Dard-e-Disco...but this Rey can do something like this only in my wild dreams 😆...so lets see reality mei kaise kaate ga Reyaansh ye Dard-e-Judai...i would love to see a soft/kiddish side of this young angry man when he experiences this feeling...lets see kya hota hai 😉

hmm Diwali ki Raat...patakhe phut-te hain...lets see TR ki life mei kya dhamaka hota hai

waiting for the next update...thanx for the pm 😊

about A/N:

hmm romance...i think i have already told you a lot of times, i love the way you are showing TR life post marriage (that doesn't mean i didn't like pre-marriage one...i loved that phase too)

the amount of romance shown is justified as per the story-line...no offence to those demanding romance, but they need to understand every story cannot have the same amount of romance...this is an intense story with loads of suspense...its a thriller, its not a regular love story so the amount of romance is bound to be less...please understand this!

about Rey and his mother relationship...umm neither of the three options

i am sure TR can overcome all their differences and end up living together happily ever after...Taani has already realized her love...Rey is also bitten by the love bug...and slowly slowly he is showing the symptoms of the disease called "Love"...i hope he gets it diagnosed (realization) soon

but about Rey and his mother...no matter what the wounds are very deep, it will be unrealistic to expect that at the end Rey will forgive his mother and live happily ever after

in my opinion...he will forgive his mother and then she can easily leave this world

and if you are going to write the epilogue...then in that you can show Rey and Shivam sharing a nice bond...not too close but cordial with each other with no bitterness between them...you can show them working together as Rey merged with Rajput Industries for helping Shivam as he was running into loss

about that contract thing...you said it will play an important role...hmm i think when Rey will realize that he is falling for Taani...scared to fall in love...he'll try to keep Taani away from himself and for that he may bring the contract in between them...but in the end he'll realize that now he can't live without Taani so he'll himself damage that contract...you can add a filmy/dramatic sequence...Rey will burn that contract and then TR will take seven pheras again around that fire...sounds too filmy 😆

and i have also realized that i didn't congratulate you...Congratulations on completing 100 pages 😃

Hey ms Intelligent🤗
at last you came😃
and see your comment is getting equal LIKE as my original update😳
reserving this, will reply you after today's update😊

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Sooo sry!!! Im d second to res n sabse late unres kar rahi hu!!! Really sry debu dii!! 😛 Wont happen again!!
Really loved d update!!! For me it was d most taareylicious update after a long tym!! Lots if tr scene n convo... really romantic one!! But a matured wala romance... nt dat wala mature... dusra wala jo aapne readers ko mature bola...dat one!! Hope u understood debu dii... not getting proper words to describe!! 😆
Awww... d start itself was sooo romantic... dat too wid an awesome romantic song in d bg!! Loved it!!!... n thankgod simmi was tired n slept!!! Privacy!! 😆
OMG!!! Dis came to me as a blow!!! Rey adjusting d front mirror to get a proper view of taani 😲 😲... im beyond shocked debu dii!!! All of a sudden change... bt den as u wrote dat rey himself didnt knew why bt he was enjoying seeing her!!! It means dat at dat tym he wasnt in d control of his brain!! He was dng it against his will n wad still enjoying it!!! Matlab under d control of his heart!!! Again a stupid sa logic lagaaya hai debu di 😳 😆 ... bt im actually enjoying his mood swings ot u can say his pendulum motion frm brain to heart 🤣 ... god.. mai kitni bakwaas karti hu!!!sry!!!
Taani is lost somewhere... definitely she must be thinking about her realization of love for rey!!! Aur kya sochegi😕...
Another shock debu dii!! Rey changed d temp of d ac of his car... thinking bout taani's health!!! 😲 😲 ... ek chap me itne saare jhatke naa diya karo debu dii!! 😆 ... matlab somewhere even rey has feelings for taani... a kind of care n concern for her which wasnt a year ago!!! Dat calls for a party... ek saal me kuch to ... nai nai bahut kuch badal gaya hai rey me 😆 😆!!
Taani is a typical down-to-earth bahu!! Apne liye dress n jewellery nai li!!! N granny... aapke pair kaha hain!!! Rey se shopping karne ko keh diya... vo bhi taani ke liye 😲 😲 ... matlab rey will buy something for her!! Really dancing mai to!! 😆 Chalo rey granny ki baat maanta to hai!!... thanx granny 😆
Bt i loved dat line... " both look at each oder n make a puppy face of falling into trouble"...awww...im actually imagining dem dng so!!! 😳
Taani didnt wanted to go in d room n was making lame excuses to granny .. 😆 😆 ... it actually happens debu di... wen all of a sudden her feelings changed for rey n she realized dat she loves him... she has become more concious wen she faces him n an awkward feeling arises!!! It happened wid me too 😳 ... dats d thing i love in ur updates... u always add a tinge of reality wen u write ur stry... n cuz of dat d readers start imagining d stry n comparing it to real lyf!!! Hats off debu dii d way u expressed taani's feelings n her awkwardness n d way u write ur stry in a matured way!! 👏 👏 👏
One more thing... rey ka description... maar daala debu dii... shirtless wid towel around his neck n wet hairs!! Im dead after imagining him lyk dat!!!! 🤢 😳
Rey felt her presence...one more revolution 😆 ... he directly asked her weather she was scared n worried for him 😲 😲 ... n taani wasnt able to answer!! Even here her reaction was obvious... i remember d tym wen once she was waiting for rey to come back n wen he returned n asked her ...m she lied to him so easily widout any stress n didnt fumbled at all!! Today d same taani was unanswerable to him... she wasnt able to look in his eyes n stammered while speaking!!! Its just cuz now she has feelings for him n she loves him!!! U hav shown dis so wonderfull... d gradual change in both their behaviours since dey met till now!!! 👏 😳
N den rey's words ... d taani who was soo strong who knew how to control her emotions...she just couldnt hold her tears at rey's words!!! Loved it to d core... taani touching his wound n felt relieved!!! N just loved d way u described taarey's emotions..."At last their eyes meet with each other, at last he feels that he is also so important to some one so that his happiness, his existence matters to her very much. And at last she feels that her hesitation come to an end when she touches him, when she is close to him, she feels relieved"... 👏 👏 👏 ... even here as i said in last comment dat rey was expecting some reaction frm taani bt wen she didnt reacted he was angry n frustrated n somewat dissapointed... now wen she expressed her feelings he was happy n contented... cuz now he knew dat he is imp to someone!!! Another logic of my stupid brain 😆
Rey making mistakes in his deals n getting lost in random thoughts... its soo true debu dii... dis love wali feeling is lyk f gravity... an unresistable force which no one can oppose!!! 😳Jyaada philosophical hogaya naa...rehne do 😆
Something same is happening wid rey... he has some feelings bt his mind isnt ready to accept... he is hating dis fact dat he lyks someones company!!! Cuz acc to a person lyk rey... relationships always are a weekness for dem!!! Loosing urself in some emotions n taking decisions as per dem... are somewat signs of weekness for him!!
N one reasone behind dis is his own parents... its quiet obvious dat if he sees a week n failing relationship at his so tender age... he will anyhow think dat all relationships end d same way!!... bt amazing way u described his dilemma n irritation n anger!!!
Taani waiting for rey 😳 ... n den gng to dat bar!!! N rey's words... just sooo rude!! 😭 😭 im really angry n fed up of his sudden mood swings now!! 😭 how could he say dat taani ko maza aaraha hai uske parents ke baare me jaanke n biggest thing rinni dii ke baare me jaanke!!! Agar mazaa aaraha hota to vo rinni di ke liye itna sab kuch kyu karti... duffer!! 😡 ... n wen he asked her dat tum meri lyf me kyun aayi ho... it means he was frustrated dat taani has started affecting his lyf now... he is thinking bout her now!!!... i guess so!!!
N den again vo lion wala avataar... breaking d glass n shouting at my poor taani!! 😭 ... i know aapko abhi bhi uska pain n anger spread karna hoga!!! Den congoo... cuz u succeeded in it!!! Aur kitna anger spread karogi ... bas bhi karo 😭 ... bt guess wat... i love dis lion n angry young man reyaansh!!! 😛 😆 😳
Now to im waiting for taani to go to her maayka... arey mujhe dekna hai weather rey use miss karega ya nahi 😉 ... samjha karo debu dii!! 😆
Hawww... precap is soo sad... d way she back answered taani!! 😲 😭 ... i guess bahut family drama hoga next update me... shaayad!!! N agar maine comment me bahut jyaada bakwaas kiya hai den im really sry!!
Vaise wanted to tell u one thing dat aaj tak maine jyaada stries nai likhi hain... only one os... n im upto some ideas now!!! Trust me debu dii... ur my inspiration... d way u write... mai to fida hogai!!! 😳 I m really trying to write it ur way!!!
Ab to bas waiting for d next update!! N dis was to really a taarelicious update for me!!! 👏
Chalo isse jyaada i wont speak... vaise hi maine bahut pakaaya hai!!! 😆

Res...!!! Will unres soon😃

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awesome update first time rey openly talk with taani but in alcohole but i dont understand suddenly why rey behaving like this aur tumne to baal pochhane wala scene diya hi nayee but its ok.