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Posted: 12 years ago
Debu as always u did a outstanding job, I love the entire chapter
It was perfectly written... hmm so Shivam and Rey are half brothers, this is getting more and more interesting with each update
Recap is exciting
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Favouriteofall

Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes...I am so happy today 😃
1st Reason...after stalking the thread for almost an hour, refreshing the page after every 10 secs...i was successful in my mission "First Place" 😃
Secondly i am happy because now i have become eligible for becoming a detective 😆
after all i have cracked all the mysteries in this ff 😉
abhi mera just pehla teer (arrow) nishane pe laga hai...and i am so happy, baqi ke teer nishane pe lagen ge phir to mein 99999th cloud pe pohanch jaun gi 😆
i am so glad you gave those questions and i decided to re-read the story for answering them...because ye saari ki saari mystery maine re-reading se hi solve ki hai
you have given some really nice clues in every update...so thank you for that 😊
ok enough of this...now i'll do my regular analysis in sequence
after the 18th chap...in the precap part you mentioned that Taani will discover Piyu will someone, so i thought outside the temple, Taani will see Piyu with Shivam...but here Shivam was alone
the moment i read that "restriction in Reyaansh Mansion" line...a grin came on my face, because this line told me that what i am thinking is right...Shivam is indeed Rey's younger but step brother!
the way he complimented Taani and all...i thought ok good he is still nice to her
but then what rubbish he started to speak...I love you and all 🤢
Taani gave him the right answer...he doesn't love her because jis se aap pyaar karte hain aap uske liye saari dunya se lar jate hain but that Shivam even took away that job from her just because of some board members..that shows he much he loves her...jhoota kahin ka 😡
don't know what are his intentions...is it that just like his brother even Shivam has this misconception that Rey loves Taani, that's why he wants to take her away from him to take revenge from Rey..God knows what is he upto, but no worries as i am sure he won't succeed!
the best part about this scene was that Rey overheard their conversation, i hope now the Shivam-Taani thing is completely out of his mind 😊
i was right if Taani won't come back in 5 mins he'll come searching for her...glad he has started caring for her 😊
Rey considers Taani as his family now...that made me happy too 😃
and then strikes the atom bomb...which did not harm me at all because the moment i read the intro of a middle-aged woman...i was like here comes Taani's mummy ji, ab to blast hone wala hai so i pulled up my protection and hid myself at a safe place 😆
and i win "World Tour" for guessing it right 😆...Mrs. Vaishnabi Rajpoot is the ex Mrs. Singhania...the mother of Rinni, Reyaansh & Shivam
Rey hates her a lot...that's why he was so sensitive about his mother and behaved aggressively whenever someone mentioned about his mother.
Shivam's outburst was natural because anyone would behave that way if someone abuses your mother so badly
well abhi to Mummy Ji behaved as a nice and caring mother with both Rey and Rinni...she even came to that temple just to wish Rinni a happy birthday
now it is to be seen if she is a real villain or Rey ne usse villain banaya hua hai
Chachi ji said that Rey' father's life was a disaster...so i assume that Vaishnabi took divorce from Rey's dad and then re-married Mr.Rajpoot
now it is to be seen that why she divorced Rey's dad and it is to be seen whether she herself abandoned Rey and Rinni in the past or is it Rey's anger on his mother which has kept these mother-children away from so long!
poor Taani couldn't understand anything...her curiosity is justified
oh so Rey still remembers that she is his friend...perhaps he doesn't understand the meaning of friendship, how to behave with your friend and the right...one person has on his/her friend. Hope he understands all these soon because he desperately needs the help of a true friend and he won't find a better friend than Taani even if he searches the whole world.
Good that Taani did all the preparation for the birthday celebration before hand...she indeed made that day really special for Rinni 👍🏼
hmm the entire family members came to wish Rinni except Chacha-Chachi...we just know about Simmi, who are these other family members? Taani has already met them, why you didn't introduce them to us? That's not fair!!!
So Rey is also happy with all the arrangements...hope he thanks Taani for all this, and this time his thank you should be better than the last time 😆
Hmm so Taani already knows who can answer her queries...good that she has asked Granny without wasting any more time...Taani deserves to know the truth asap!
Glad she didn't ask Rey again...otherwise ghuse mein wo pata nahin kya karta, good she knows that he'll never answer this question for her...this means somewhere she has started to understand his behavior which is a very good progress in their relationship 😊
Lets see how Taani reacts after knowing the truth...what will be her opinion about about all this mess? And how she's gonna deal with this matter?
hmm the precap...i always wanted Taani to take the first step in coming closer physically, glad its happening 😊
Taani ringing Shivam on a funny morning...now that's something strange 🤔
well looking forward to read the next update
btw i wanted to ask one thing...in the precap part of chap 17, you wrote "He starts shouting but...they keep their first step together...keeping the second vow of marriage"
He shouted when he came to know about Rinni's illness
They kept their first step together...when they both became friends and shared with each other their likes and dislikes
But keeping second vow of marriage...as i remember in 2nd vow...the groom asks the bride to be his strength so that he can protect the family..the bride agrees and demand eternal love and undivided attention
i wanna ask ye ho gaya kya??? if yes then when???
One more thing...i checked the first page of this thread, you didn't mention Taani's grandmother in the character list...secondly you have mistakenly written Shivam in place of Swayam as Taani's brother!
and ya sorry for again taking a long time to unres...but this time i am not at fault, i read the update last night only and even wrote my looong reply but when i was writing the second last line...i pressed some wrong button and all my reply got deleted...i got frustrated and i was sleepy too so i closed my lappy, now i have wrote the whole reply again!





Hey Double Congrats!! For holding the first position and for cracking the mystery. You didn't let me down. It's proved that I(we) can officially call you Ms Intelligent👏👏👏
Now, aap itne shiddat se kuch likhe hai mere liye toh mera bhi kuch farz banta hai aapke liye..so this is for you!!! and specially I know how it feels when you write something and tech probs come suddenly


@1st bold - you sure?? actually you know when I started writing this FF nah, just wanted to show two clashing personalities with some twists and turns aur pata hi nahi chala when it turned into some Mysterious story😆😆

@2nd bold - pls cloud se wapas aa jao nah!!😆

@3rd bold - really hats off. THANK YOU. I am satified. Clues, yes i have just written something making a balance with the circumstances. Perhaps it acted as clues.

@4th bold - PERFECT!!!👍🏼 no harm in telling specially when i will write it in the next chapter, Yes they are step brothers. And yes I have written that Pre cap, but after next update I mentioned something that I had to push that incident a bit later, so that is still yet to come. Sowwy for any confusion. Many times I have to mold this stories to arrange it properly.😳

@5th bold - ACTUALLY. my objective/intention was to clear the MU between Rey and Taani and this was the first step. Though I have not cleared how much convo he heard, still with the progress of the epi, we will see that Rey will confess his misconception in front of Taani..now my mouth is zipped🤬😆😆

@6th bold- Taani's mummy ji or Rey's mummy ji?😕

@7th bold - I wanted to indicate all the servants, the small children, Simmi and Granny as the entire family members. There are no other characters in Singhania family. Sowwy if created confusion, I will re read that place again and will modify it😳

@8th bold - you again somewhat caught the right nerve and that's y i once asked u to be my co writer or to start writing a FF. Trust me this Thanks Giving ceremony is gonna be grand one this time😉😆..now I don't say anything more..but but but..we should never expect Rey to do anything spl for Taani too nah😛,

@9th bold - Glad that you have understood it. taani preferred to give him a space..sometimes we should give it, o/w the relationship becomes suffocated..wat say?

@10th bold - of course yes. Few reasons, if Rey takes this step, Taani would have thought as his lust not love and it can make this situation even worst. 2ndly, He was tensed and she was worried about him. That was one of the way to support her partner in time of need. The sense of reliability should be shown and felt.

@11th bold - now this is a gross Pre cap. Can't say if this is gonna happen in the next chapter or not😳

Now for the 2nd vow, I need to tell you something. Actually not you, but to all those readers. I am writing here, but will copy paste my comment with the next Author's Note. Yes, you are right abt the vow. But in this case, it can be directly happened nah?? it's not possible at all.

"the groom requests the bride to be his strength so that he can provide security and protect the family with courage. The bride agrees to abide by, while demanding eternal love and undivided attention "


here I have shown something ulta, you know. Here, Taani protected Rey's Di Rinni, she herself called doc and took care of Rinni in time of need. because she knows that Rey is her husband. And as she can't demand that Divine love now, she demanded his friendship and attention by this way!!! hope I am clear with it and it's convincing enough😊..when priest reads those vows, both of them, together take the oath applicable for both families too.

For all the comment, Just Two Words:


For helping me and I have edited the first page😛, So for you


Edited by crazy2012 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: XxMevKhanxX

awsum update👏 loved it👍🏼 rey wz rlly angry at hiz mom n shivam wonder wt hpnd update soon w8in 2 knw bwt rey's past.



Yes dear, I will update on Sunday and all secrets will be revealed by it😃
Thanks for commenting
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nithi_newlife

Yaar...I actually loved this update...The point where he tells her that she can't afford to cross her limits just because she is his wife...And yea Taani's confuion on wife's rights v/s Friend's rights...

And this time I noticed something else too...Emotions were even more elaborate...
And how can I forget taani's dialogue on trust...Awesome...
That was really good...
On the whole fab update and awesome precap...
Great job...waiting for next update!!😊😊



Thanks Nits for these sweets comment😊😊😊😊
yes, you are right. I wanted this confrontation of Rey and his mom a total power pack update😳
Pls tell me if you think this as dragging of the story
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dollytaarey

this is really awsome n suspence jaldise kholo yaar .precap is awsome just update soon asap.promo n buddy me plz



Thanks for commenting for the first time here..welcome you🤗
suspense will be revealed gradually😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: payu_taarey

awesum part di... 👏

but where are my taarey,,, 😡

precap sounds intresting but waha shivam kya kar raha hai

missing the intensity of taarey...



TaaRey will be back with a bang Payu..don't worry..wait till next update😳😃
Shivam has come with his mother to wish Rinni
TaaRey will be back soon..coz it's the story of their realisation!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: raddhi

Awsm prt I luv it shivam luv Taani
Chii but I luv whn rey com in bwt thm
N count Taani as his family haaye luv tht
N thn Taani surprise was awsm luvly want to
Know past thanks for PM n yeah I want long prt
But I am dying to taarey romance also n percape
Is awsm taarey kiss I know not actually one but thn also



Thanks Raddhi for commenting here
Seems that you can't stand Shivam with taani at any cost😆😆
Rey's past will be known by the next update for sure😉
TR romance will be starting, but not that hard core one abhi abhi, pehle let them realised nah!!😳
Arre TR kiss will be actual one, not the dream seq yaar😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
First of oll congrtss for Thread 1..
Tmorrow m having xm...fir v i cn't make myself stop frm reading ur ff...
Its so different...In first thread i was willing to Kill myself cz i cn't kill Reyansh Singhaina 😛
i was eagrly w8ing for Rey to hv sum feeling for taani...but 😭
Hope ssonly Taarey will b together... soo swt he lubd his di soo much ...nd Taani being so concern to her...
Thnkxx a lott for PM
w8ing for nxt updte..nd plzz PM me..
😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update yar pls post next soon 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Bista-anzana

First of oll congrtss for Thread 1..
Tmorrow m having xm...fir v i cn't make myself stop frm reading ur ff...
Its so different...In first thread i was willing to Kill myself cz i cn't kill Reyansh Singhaina 😛
i was eagrly w8ing for Rey to hv sum feeling for taani...but 😭
Hope ssonly Taarey will b together... soo swt he lubd his di soo much ...nd Taani being so concern to her...
Thnkxx a lott for PM
w8ing for nxt updte..nd plzz PM me..
😊



All the best for your exam👍🏼
take your time to read😳 after all it's ur xam 2morrow and I want you to read this FF till last.
Thanks for your sweetest comment dear🤗

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